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By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 10, 2007
    Heh, my only hope is that the particular section of the site isn't very active. I should be able to get done with this one before then...

    My Zelda one (the new one, anyway) is going to be the first PWP I've made in a long time, Link/Agitha from Twilight Princess. I've already got 3000 words down, so we'll see if I decide to finish it and publish, heh.
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  • From UnholyJustice on April 10, 2007
    haha. yep cant see anyone taking kindly to the two biggest religions martyrs/lords/angels going at it... You should just concentrate on this story and this one only! I've read some pretty crazy zelda stories so hopefully yours will turn out alright.

    Finish this one before the nuns beat you to death or the Islamic fundamentalists go blowing up on your doorstep!
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 10, 2007
    Yep, she's just a poor little confused Pokemon with no idea about how to handle her cute little feelings yet. ^_^

    My side project was a oneshot Jesus/Muhammad slashfic that will likely be the death of me, literally. :-/

    Then I felt a need to scribble down a couple chapters of a Golden Sun fic...

    Then I started storyboarding another Zelda fic...damn my scattered, absent brain! FOCUS!!!

    Yep, next chapter will be up in a few days if all goes well, which it usually does. I just have to remember to FOCUS...heh
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  • From UnholyJustice on April 10, 2007
    Wow not bad! Now we know how she feels about Slash not just hints here and there. The encounter with the growlith was pretty funny, and how she defended herself when it wasnt needed was dead on to how i pictured her acting. Not bad. Btw what was the story that had your distracted all this time?

    Keep the chapters coming man!
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 10, 2007
    Heh, in the Pokemon manga those Jessie and James are no longer fucking with anyone, they got together and left everyone alone.

    If only they'd do that in the anime...
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  • From Bishonen on April 10, 2007
    With my story most of the bad guys are pretty poor excuses for villains in fact they are Jessie and Jame's kids but later on some bad guys are going to show up and thier very powerful but that's all I can say about them because the frist member wont show up until around chapter 14

    With love; Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 10, 2007
    Heh, yeah, Giovanni's identity was more confirmation than revelation.

    I always had issue with the hard-ass portrayal of Giovanni in contrast with the bumbling idiocy of Jessie and James (and really Team Rocket in general). In this story he is ruthless, brilliant, and unwilling to tolerate the incompetence of others, which is what I feel the head of the most powerful crime syndicate in the world should be.

    Of course, the ultimate goals of Giovanni will not explored until later, heh. ;-)
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  • From Bishonen on April 10, 2007
    That was an interesting update for some reson I almost knew that guy was Giovanni I feel bad for Jessie and James although if I ran a group I'd get rid of them myself

    With Love; Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 09, 2007
    Glad you enjoy! I should have another update up in the next day, two at most (I had to scribble down a couple other things before they got out of my head).

    It's good that no one is really clamoring me for the sex yet...it's still a while off. Like any good relationship, it's going to be about love first and the physical action later, heh.

    :goes back to writing:
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  • From sillyneko345 on April 09, 2007
    *chirpy chirp* Your fast updates make Robin a happy little bird! I agree with Daemon, great take on the religions of the Poke-world and such. I can see where that would be a big deal later. Interesting power plays among the villians, too.

    I also like how the romance is coming along so slowly and sweetly -- I'm just sappy like that. Great job!
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 07, 2007
    Heh, thanks. I know I'm a crazy motherfucker sometimes, especially on that site, lol.
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  • From Bishonen on April 07, 2007
    I just looked up your stuff on newgrounds and i have to say you are SICK I like you even more now you kick ass

    With Love;Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on April 06, 2007
    Heh, yeah. I'm a very confrontational person sometimes...

    I've been on a Newgrounds-vacation for a while now, just dropping in and out every so often, til the new layout comes out. I don't think I'll go back long-term until then, and also probably not until I finish this story...otherwise I'd get distracted, heh.
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  • From UnholyJustice on April 06, 2007
    Just about to say never mind. Searched newgrounds for slash and up popped some of your flash. So ya found your amazing crapp that passed the blam. Looked at your myspace and holy crap man you got some strong opinions. Little tough to read but worth the twitching eye.

    Glad you don't tolerate the growing retarded/ignorant populace.
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  • From UnholyJustice on April 06, 2007
    Ya I am on newgrounds daily and they are pretty harsh only because the audience varies so greatly. Only people who enjoy reading and 18+ are here. (well some are below but thats to be expected)

    Newgrounds just has a huge audience with every religious/family/regional imaginable your going to take some heat.

    Have you ever posted a flash there?
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