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By : Stormborn Apostle

From Bishonen on January 08, 2008
Holy fucking shitty bloody ass god damn hell that was so fucking awesome mud sport never thought of that Rotom kick ass all the stuff about Kiako too fucking cool and the whole Rayquaza thing loved that I hope the next chapter is soon even if it�s no where near as long it will be so cool and the part about Watson�s wife that made me cry a bit oh and I can�t believe Giovanni is the reason Kiako went trough all that stuff I mean just wow that�s what the report was about I�m out of thing to say for now so I�ll just wait for the next chapter.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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From ANON - derp on January 08, 2008
Kinky can too be intense, loving and romantic between close lovers ;) Especially the Aftercare part.

I enjoyed the fight. Eventhough Slash's team is very weak (if they evolve that'll be a whole other matter though). At first judging from his name and personality though he's be a Fire-type trainer.
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From Stormborn Apostle on January 08, 2008
Anonymoose---I think I could put such a scene in the main Sinners story at some point. After all, if people can tolerate a human and Pokemon going to bed together, they should be mature enough to handle some adventure there, too, lol. Besides, it would be loving and romantic, not kinky---the closest to BDSM that those two will get is maybe a little psychic-bondage, not whips or hurting or anything ouch like that.

derp---I consider S+M to be entirely different from D/s. And their relationship has scarcely begun...we've yet to see how their relationship will develop (although, like I said above, I can confidently say that they will never progress to S+M). For them it's more of an interaction of their instincts, nothing kinky.

GenoLiger---S+M (SM, S&M, etc) is sado-masochism, which I admittedly know little about. D/s is dominance/submission. PWP stands for porn without plot.

Reo690---Added you.

BlackWhole---Yeah, I've been kind of shut-in for the past few days, both because my internets died and because I was writing. But now I'm all good, and I'll be sending out another plotmail in the near future.

DizzyRye---Added.

THE NEXT UPDATE IS SOONER THAN YOU THINK, KEKEKE

Imasuky Lomae/DizzyRye---That bitch be trippin' all up in yo grill, Gardevoir, use a Flash attack!

Chapter 19, which ended up being CRAZY long (at least for my standards), is now uploaded. HAHA, up.

If anyone who is supposed to be on the mailing list does not get a message from me informing them of the update, e-mail me at slashfirestorm@inbox.com with some really eye-catching subject (example: HAY YOU MOTHERFUCKER) and I'll get you taken care of. My spam settings are high, and I get a lot of junk, so sometimes I miss legit messages.
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From Bishonen on January 07, 2008
I'd like to use Lick and Tickle on Gardevoir.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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From ANON - DizzyRye (still too lazy to login) on January 07, 2008
Or maybe String Shot? >_
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From Bishonen on January 07, 2008
DizzyRye with the contest I'd pay to be one of the judges and in my case it would have been Aqua Jet.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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From ANON - DizzyRye on January 07, 2008
Well, I might as well jump on the bandwagon, too, and sign up for the plotmail.
proclaimer_rye@yahoo.com

Hope everything goes well, can't wait for the next update!

Imasuky- great vid, you chose some really good pics.

Oh, and:

PokeMon Contest #13, begin!

Gardevoir uses Flash, it's super effective!

Male audience members use Harden!

Female audience members use Waterfall!
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From ANON - BlackWhole(nologinforyou) on January 07, 2008
Reo690, I'm pretty sure I know why you didn't get a reply back; during a conversation I was having with Slash a while back he said he was cutting off all communications until Chapter 19 gets finished. So that's probably why you didn't get a reply.

That is all.

-+-Black Whole-+-
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From reo690 on January 06, 2008
Uh, I emailed you about the mailing list, and I didn't get a reply back, so I guess I'll just post my address here:
tehmaster690@yahoo.com
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From ANON - GenoLiger on January 05, 2008
Hey fi you don't mind could you tell me what all the pwp things are,like what they mean? Oh and Gardevoir should have her own game.
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From ANON - derp on January 05, 2008
Ch 17 was not D/s, just regular anal sex. In S&M scene, the partners must really act and speak domineering and submissive (according to their roles) during their play.
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From ANON - Anonymoose on January 05, 2008
(points to Slash Firestorm's reply to me)

Yeah, I think so, too, on the general audience part. 'Tis why I hesitate on doing so myself for my own lemons (if I ever get back to doing them). Then again, we got fics with rape and extreme violence running around, so maybe not too many people would mind the temporary role-reversal here... as long as it doesn't turn BDSM. XD (No, seriously, in hentai and porn, 95% of hetero role-reversal in is BDSM-like. It's strange.)

Lookin' forward to the next chapter. I'll give you my "big review" after I've finished reading it. :)

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From Stormborn Apostle on January 05, 2008
Araquiell---Glad you're liking it so far. Yeah, I'm not much of a PWP person (although I've been known to read/write the occasional quickie-smut story in my time), and I prefer reading and writing long, many-chapter stories over short ones.

And believe me, everyone, I know how y'all feel about slow updates and all...a few of my favorite authors take several months between updates (one of my favorite stories had an update after about nine months of inactivity---I thought the story was dead for a while!).

Like I said in the big review response, 19 is on the way. Barring another internet failure, tomorrow will be the day. Hooray!

And yep, you're on the list. Just in time, too---I plan on sending out another plotmail shortly after I upload chapter 19 tomorrow.
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From Stormborn Apostle on January 05, 2008
ThatGuy---Incidentally is my favorite word. I'm kind of absent-minded, see, and tend to jump from topic to topic like crazy. "Incidentally" provides me with a transition word that may or may not be relevant---it just makes it look less stupid. HEH.

Imasuky Lomae---The internet needs more Gardevoir porn. MUCH MORE. I can't draw, so I do my part by writing it...heh.

King dumbass---Oh, it's soon.

Reo690---Yeah, there won't be any crazy number-crunching in this upcoming battle. It's one of the reasons I don't mention levels or anything very much, because I'm sure some dork with too much time on their hands would figure out the possible stats for X Pokemon at Y level and give me a probability distribution for victory.

Sinners is more complex than that. All characters are as strong/weak as I need them to be, lol.

Splenge---I wish a Gardevoir would jump into reality, and then jump on me.

RoboRed---The plotmail's details won't be revealed for quite some time, but I'll say this: an older plotmail, the Thanatos Batch Results, will become rather clear in chapter 19. Honestly, I think it's pretty clear now, but then again, I'm the fuck who's writing it, so...lol.

No Christmas special for now, alas. I can't write a decent oneshot in one day, and since I got the new machine on Christmas...the special was pretty much fucked. Now, Valentine's Day is coming up, as is Gardevoir's birthday...which, incidentally, is on March 29 (anniversary of Sinners)...so I'll likely do a oneshot for one or both of those events.

Xain---Alrighty.

GenoLiger---Thusly added.

Hiei---Glad you enjoy it, and don't worry---Sinners isn't going anywhere. If there's one thing I would never, EVER do, it's abandon a story and leave everyone hanging. If, for some crazy reason, I decide that I'm done with a half-completed story, I'd either delete it or give it a quick and gritty ending.

Remember that everyone. Even if a whole fucking year goes by without an update or message from me, I'm either dead or writing a very, very long chapter, lol.

Anonymoose---Glad you like it so far, heh. I know the updates are pretty far apart...I'm not a quick writer. I know a lot of authors can update like lightning, but I'm just a slow person (in most things, lol). An update is coming very soon, though, so don't worry.

Heh, who knows what those two will do? Not even I do, right now. In fact, I don't know when those two will get to have sex again (which is sad, really). Too much sex detracts from the plot, and considering the whole life-or-death aspect of their situation, it would stretch believability. Too little sex bores me, lol. They'll get it on again eventually...

They'll likely try a lot of different things as they go. I'm not sure about the roleswapping...I can see them doing it, myself, but it might be hard getting the general audience to accept it. Of course, I don't really care what the audience thinks---LOL, to be honest, I write more for myself than anyone else, and all writers are selfish fucks at heart---but I like to make things believable.

I can see myself making it happen if the two get to spend a long amount of time together in a fuckable situation...far away from civilization, for example, or another night at a hotel/other private place. Somewhere where they could be making love a lot and letting their minds wander. Gardevoir could convince him, I'm sure, and Slash is secure enough in his sexuality to let her...hm, it's actually an interesting idea.

And hell, if I can't make it work in Sinners proper, I can always oneshot it.

You've given me a pretty interesting idea. I would make it loving and all---I know some people don't think it could be romantic, but I think I could do it. Whether it be with toys or telekinetic strap-ons or what, I don't know, but lol, that's got my mind a-stirring. We shall see where my muse takes me...and where, exactly, it takes Slash.

Kukuku.

Anyway, my internet has been wonky for the past couple days, so I couldn't upload the update as scheduled. Chapter 19 has actually been done for a day or two, but since I couldn't post it, I decided to rip it open and tinker. Right now, with my internet currently working, the chapter is actually a lot better than the original 'finished' version...I added a scene with Giovanni, expanded a scene with Kiako, and managed to have 10000 words before the fucking battle even begins, heh. I'm sleepy as hell right now, so give me a sleep cycle and a few hours and it'll be enhanced, completed (again), and submitted.

SOON
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From ANON - Araquiell on January 05, 2008
Oh yes, put me on the email list, please?

shadow_psyclone@hotmail.com

Thanks!
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