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Reviews for Sinners

By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From RoboRed on December 15, 2007
    Slash's compy said "fuck you", so there'll be no updates (OR CHRISTMAS ONESHOT :`( )until he gets a new one.


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  • From ANON - double-you tee eff?? on December 15, 2007
    No one's said anything...it's kinda weird...I'm so used to coming here and seeing at least 1 new review for Sinners...but today...I didn't. WHAT'S HAPPENING???
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  • From ANON - OH SHIT. on December 13, 2007
    SOMEONE CALL RIPLEY'S! Sinners actually went a day WITHOUT BEING REVIEWED!!! AND WE'RE ALL STILL ALIVE!!! lol

    But seriously, I don't think there's a day that this fic hasn't been reviewed. but then again, I really don't want to go through over 600 reviews looking for a day that it hasn't been reviewed. FUCK THAT.

    And if you don't know what Ripley's is, then I feel sorry for you...
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  • From ANON - Fluffy_lover on December 11, 2007
    Ahhhh that's what I needed. I really need to cheer up =)

    Great chapter Slash .... But why did you hide teh 'Gardevoir dominant' moment from us?!? There is never too much smut in a chapter , ya know ? xD I'm expecting it to happen in the future.

    This chapter kind make me afraid....it seems like it will be the last happy moment for a long , long time... Well every fluffy fic needs some angst and dark moments. One of my favorite fics had 3 consecutive chapters of pure loving fluffyness , then 12 ( 12! ) consecutive chapters of intense , life-or-death, dark moments. The catch is , the fic was already finished by the time I started reading it , so I could finish it in a day. Your fic , however , isn't, so there will be a time interval between updates. The dark moments will last more than a few hours @_@

    I think I can handle it ( well I KNOW I can , it's not likely I will kill myself because of your fic or anything like that)...but please , in the Dark 'arc' of the fic , try to speed your updates as much as posisble , without losing quality >_> Mayeb if you plan really well befor estarting this arc , and have the backbone of the dark chapters ready before they even start , this will be possible.

    But please , if this will take too much from you , or may decrease the fic's overall quality , disregard my suggestion.

    Dark moments aside, there was one thing in this fic that made me lol very , very hard.

    Giovanni: "All you can see can be yours..."
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    Kyako: " AND I JUST CAN'T WAIT , TO BE KIIIIIIIIING!"

    xD yeah that made me remmember 'The Lion King'. You know , that moment when Mufasa is showing the Kingdom for Simba up from that big rock thingie ,and says That everything that light can touch , will be his? I dunno if this was exactly what he said , since I didn't watch the english dubbed version , but it must've been something like that...Ahh that bring some pleasant memories. I guess I will re-watch it :3

    Thanks again , Slash.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on December 11, 2007
    Howdy, y'all.

    Just a reminder to keep the reviews somewhat on topic...I ain't afraid to delete a shitload of them if nothing of note is being said, lol.

    Anyway, as I've told many of you over e-mail (a much better way of getting my attention/replies), I should have a new machine come Christmas. Which is swell, but it kind of sucks that it'll take that long...I had a sweet idea for a Zelda oneshot (Link/Ilia fluff) that'll probably never come to pass now. BLEH

    So yes. I HAVE outlined chapters 18-20 now, which I'll begin as soon as the new machine is in my hands...and after I've responded to all the e-mails and reviews and whatnot.

    So, in closing, remember that leaving pointless reviews makes Gardevoir cry. And Slash does not like people who make Gardie cry.

    *out*
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  • From MrMcBob on December 10, 2007
    Holy shit, that was probably the hottest sex scene I've ever read. Congrats! Update soon, I wanna find out what happens! And try to make it a good battle scene!
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  • From ANON - Pokefurry on December 10, 2007
    It wont be very long until there are 666 reviwes which will be be king of funny for a story called Sinners.
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  • From ANON - Tia on December 10, 2007
    Wow just read the last chapter it was great can't to see more i hope your computer is fixed soon.

    Tia the Sexy Slave
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  • From Bishonen on December 08, 2007
    With the last bi i just added it for fun I just wanted to make up something that no one could top and with that last thing i know i've won i'm a bit dissapointed that there aren't more reviwes but that will change soon i bet that by chapter 20 there will be 800 reviews i'll give up 700 because it's an odd number but review 800 will be mine the werewolf has defused back into the seprate parts and all of them are sleeping soundly.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Review on December 08, 2007
    Dammit Imasuky, I already gave up the war! And I'm sure with that addition no one's gonna challenge you because you don't play fair! heh.

    But nope, I just checked out the total length of the reviews. But only copy and pasted, and the results are....

    Pages; 131
    Words; 55,113
    characters(no spaces); 255,635
    characters(w/ spaces); 309,185

    Well, not quite as much as Sinners, but that's still alot. But I don't think the word count for the reviews will ever match that of the actual story. Especially if Slash keeps up with these "ZOMG that's a TEENY scrollbar" chapters. lol

    Note; that total doesn't include this review, obviously. But I put this just for the hell of it...
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  • From MarkJoe on December 08, 2007
    After all that stuff about the werewolf i think that after slash gets a new computer that he should update before the next full moon.

    Bow to the Master
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  • From Bishonen on December 08, 2007
    I just tried to find out how many pages the review count is made of and it said my computer didn’t have enough space I think the reviews page is longer than the story it’s self.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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  • From Bishonen on December 08, 2007
    I knew thi story was long but i didn't know it was that long I've read longer stories but still to think this one's only just seveteen chapters i cant't wait to see how long it is by the time it's over and one last thing about the werewolf on the night of a full moon it grows more eight heads and a second set of arms with guns so then it has is wielding a katana and bastard sword a 44. Magnum and a Desert Eagle oh and each of the new extra heads has a machine gun coming out of their mouths and they can shoot Kamehameha and Hadouken attacks from their eyes and something else I forgot to mention is he’s also a dark Jedi who can use force lighting and push and choke and he can do mind tricks so that he doesn’t have to show i.d. anyone.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

    P.S. At this rate we'll have 700 new reviwes before the next chapter is posted

    P.P.S I wonder what the word count for all the reviwes would be
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  • From Review on December 08, 2007
    Yes, you really don't play fair...-cries in corner- You know what, fine, win the damn war that we never started. lol

    but that's not gonna prevent me from having the 700th review! XD That's how this whole thing got started, didn't it? lol We just burned up like 15 reviews over our armies. I really need something better to do...

    And for no reason at all, I just did a word check on Sinners. And now be prepared for what Microsoft Office Word has calculated, for all 17 chapters of Sinners(note; I left it in the 10.5 font size, as that's what AFF has the font size default)

    Pages; 188
    Words; 96,367
    Characters(no spaces); 453,913
    Characters(w/ spaces); 553,141

    I think this is the most I've ever read in my entire life...
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  • From Bishonen on December 08, 2007
    The werewolf can regenerate any injury it sustains and instead blood it has gopher poison in it’s veins, Oh and whoever it kills and doesn’t eat is turned into a Japanese girl and brought back to me where I will train you to be sex slaves lastly it has a last restore trick it can change into pure anti-matter that will destroy anything it touches I will win this because I don’t play fair.

    With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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