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Reviews for Watch out for the Green Eyes

By : chayron
  • From ANON - Chrono_ofDarkness on July 04, 2007
    Bravo! Wolfram is getting the slave treatment. lol. I wonder how this will change him.
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  • From ANON - rowen raven on July 02, 2007
    hello! i most say i've been waiting for your up date eagerly. your story is so cool that it has me checking the site almost every day in hope to read more. i'm glad that someone else realices just how strong and serious wolfram really is. i love the way he is proud, hotheaded,stubborne, and loyal to a fault; specially his meanstreak, and his sarcasm. i've been wondering were the hell is yuri, but "seen" wolfram go through so much is well worth it. i'm really looking foward to "watch" him "suffer" through this world some more quite a lot more, i mean the sooner he finds yuri the sooner the fic ends, and we don't want that right. any way congrats in being such a good writer, i hungrily wait for more i'm with you all the way and my compliments on working out the paradox as well it was awsome and it ranks very high among my favorites. ja ne ^_~
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  • From ANON - chrono_ofDarkness on June 29, 2007
    Loved it! Yay! You updated! Have to say i'm loving where this is going too. lol. That is if it goes where I think it does. lol. (Thanks for the petting. I needed alittle comfort. lol.) Too much work and no fanfiction makes chrono a dull girl.
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  • From Achillona77 on June 28, 2007
    “Because Faraya is my brother,”

    He was ready to submerge the entire planet into bloodshed just to find Yuuri.

    “I’ll

    deal

    with consequences later.”     ~~famous last words!~_^!


    “I’m sorry Kyota, but you’ll have to be my boyfriend,” he hissed softly. “I can’t take this anymore!”

    Kyota laughed loudly at the declaration. He grinned at Wolfram then. “No problem, babe,” he said, smacking Wolfram on his backside, the loud slap crossing the tavern happily, his palm molding around the curvy buttock.

    Wolfram stared at Kyota,

    his half-drunken mind not comprehending what had just occurred here.




    “Here, the declaration is now official,” Kyota winked.


    it seems poor Wolfram himself set this whole unfortunate chain of events into motion ... and as he stated earlier...he'll have no choice but to

    deal

     with the consequences...

    ...and deal with them...

    he shall....

    NOW ...

    ...now that he's in the hands of the one person he'd been seeking this entire time...

    be careful what you wish for...


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  • From dawnmm on June 28, 2007
    no fair leaving off there-fantastic cliffy-i was actually worried the the fayara guy would be yuuri cant wait for the next update
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  • From ANON - Miya on June 28, 2007
    WOH-WHO another chapter, it's getting interesting now. Can't wait for the next one =3
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  • From ANON - chrono_ofdarkness on June 20, 2007
    Srry. I haven't reviewed in a while. been at work 40hrs a week since I came home from school.lol.Sorry about that though. but your story is great and I can't wait for the next chapter! Pls update soon.
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  • From Achillona77 on June 17, 2007
    WOW! Wolfram is deadly serious! Doesn't care who he has to use or kill to find his husband... by hook or by crook. How does the song go? "Ain't no mountain high enough, ain't no valley low enough?" Those green eyes mean business!

    Kyota is learning... Wolfram is not the Wolfram he grew up with... tempered steel..that's our Wolfram. Asami ... truly a wuss if ever there was one, but he's learning too... and if he doesn't ... well he'll find out what it's like... because he'll be riding on someone's joystick ... REAL soon.

    Wolfram can truly handle himself... he is in the position of having to take care of others... that is his problem... he has to truly be a leader here... and how he gets the others to speak the language... very creative!

    Can't wait to see what he does next! From stealing an army to admonishing Kyota, his former lover! No softy here! Wolfram is hard and single minded... hell hath no fury...and heaven help who gets in his way! Whoever has Yuuri had better watch out... his husband is out for revenge... Blond Vengeance! maybe that should be the unofficial name of the chapters while in this world!


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  • From Achillona77 on June 16, 2007
    CHAPTER ONE

    This chapter is awesome... brilliant... Awesomely Brilliant!

    Poor Arachi Diuman .. his first day on the job and he literally gets himself yelled at by the king! Another of Wolfram's conquests...~_^!

    Their reunion scene... was HOT!!! a helluva way to recharge!

    Can't wait to read the next chapter... this is great!
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  • From ANON - yuuri-eiri on June 13, 2007
    awww, poor Kyota... i want to know what is going to happen next, please update soon....
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  • From dawnmm on June 03, 2007
    i just found this anime and started reading the fan fiction on it and am highly entranced with it. I am happy that i started out on your stuff and hope im not disappointed when reading the others after this. i just finished it all in one sitting up to date and looking forward to the continuation of this. i am unsure what you have in mind for the guard and asami but it would be kind of cool if asami was supposed to be this worlds king and had been sent to earth to be born like yuuri and murata. thank you for such an enjoyable story.
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  • From ANON - Miya on June 01, 2007
    I love this story, I love your stories. Please keep writing. I'm always checking to see if you update, then once it updated it takes me forever to read your new chapter. I can't wait, I want Wolfram to find Yuri and something to happen between KyotaXAsami or AsamiXArachi. Anyway, as I wrote I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep Up The Brilliant Work!
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  • From on May 31, 2007
    Hehe... Two thumbs up!!! Puiku kaip visad. HEH... nors ir zinojau ir skaiciau bet perskaiciau dar karta si chapteri. Galas tikrai puikus. Na lauksiu kitu chapteriu. Sekmes rasant. ^_~
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  • From ANON - chrono_ofdarkness on May 30, 2007
    Sorry I haven't written in a while. lol. Been busy with work and too tired to get online when I come home. But on to the story. I have no idea what's goin on right now. lol. Aside from them being in another world and the soldiers thinking they're concubines. lol.
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  • From sassylion on May 25, 2007
    Great chapter as always, though (probably just my distracted brain) I had a hard time getting through it the first time. LOL.

    I miss the old Wolfram. I hope Yuuri shows back up soon. :D
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