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Reviews for Watch out for the Green Eyes

By : chayron
  • From ANON - yuuri-eiri on May 22, 2007
    Nice chapt. (as always...) but... where is Yuuri?
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  • From ANON - Marieka on May 18, 2007
    LOL Oh this should be interesting at this rate Wolfram will end up with a Husband a Lover a Boyfriend and a fiancée.

    Thank you for sharing, I look forward to reading s'more!
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  • From watermajutsu on May 18, 2007
    That was a really good chapter! Quite funny, especially near the end when they were talking to the soldier and bickering and all. Arachi's turning out to be pretty interesting as well. I'd love to see how this story is going to pan out. It's very unpredictable, which makes it all the more interesting.

    Good job! Hope you update real soon!!! =)
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  • From on May 17, 2007
    Hey! I love your story! And as I've already told you about a million times before, this story is AWESOME. And of course the last chapter is no exception. I loved the part where Wolfram cut his finger. It was really cool. And Wolfram's thoughts about Yuuri and their water fights... My mind went a little bit naughty, you know. Ah! One question. Where is Yuuri? I missed him! You have to inform us about him! Do not leave us, readers, to wonder where he is. Is he alright? (Well, of course he is. He might be a wimp, but he manages to escape all the dangers. He he...*evil grin*) I like the way Asami got accustomed in this situation, they are in (well, not exactly, but I like how he become dependant on Wolfram. He is not suspecting him and Kyota anymore and that is good).
    Well, Good luck writing the next chapter.
    See you around!
    P.S. I've just uploaded the picture on deviantart. If you need a link feel free to PM me. (But you have added me in your watching list so I guess you have the link. ^_^)
    P.P.S. I uploaded the picture (with Arachi, Asami, Wolf and Yuuri) on theotaku.com and wrote about your fanfictions (WOFTGE and WOTP). I put both links to your fanfictions too. So if the picture will be popular maybe some people will come to read your stories. (I hope they will). ^_^ Here is a link if you want to: http://fanart.theotaku.com/view.php?action=retrieve&id=193584

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  • From sassylion on May 06, 2007
    OMG. I can't believe I wasn't on for awhile and missed three chapters! (But I'm all caught up now!)
    Anyways, great as always, I can't wait to see what goes on next!
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  • From ANON - chrono_ofDarkness on May 06, 2007
    Yay! Updated just in time for my birthday. Best present ever!
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  • From cueball2 on May 06, 2007
    Great chapter. I think Asami will do much better after that experience. Also I wonder what will happen at the village. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - White_Youkai on May 05, 2007
    Sveika. Kaip jau ir sakiau, puikus skyrius! Beje, ne per seniausiai pradejau kita istorija skaityt, ir negaliu jos pabaigt, nes ji net nesilygina su tavaja... Ir dar kai kas. Pradejau is naujo KKM serijas ziuret, nes per daug uzsikreciau. ^_^
    Tikiuosi 6 chapter'is neprailgs parasyti, o kad jis bus geresnis ir uz visus praeitus 5 tai jau dabar zinau. ^_^
    Aciu uz tokius pagyrimus del mano piesinuko. Taip gera sirdy, kad tau jis patiko. Ir tikrai jauciuosi pagerbta, nes jis atsidure prie tavo istorijos. Aciu dar karteli *bows* ^_^
    Na, iki kito karto.
    Oi, laukiam laukiam, 6 skyriaus laukiam! ^_~
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  • From ANON - yuuri eiri on May 04, 2007
    iīm so sorry!!! ... HI, uhm... i donīt know what to say... i mean... i said nice chapt. a little bit different (i mean THE CHAPTER FROM THE PREVIOUS CHAPTERS) but itīs ok (THE CHAPTER); no a little bit different FROM TSUBASA RC... because WOFTGE is indeed, a lot different, and i really like your fic, (sorry if you donīt understand my review, itīs just that i canīt speak/write in english so well because my mother language is spanish, so...) anyway, nice chapter as always, update soon please, I REALLY REALLY REALLY LIKE YOUR FICS (WOTP, WOFTGE) :-)
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  • From priscel on May 03, 2007
    wow, I had been thinking that shift through a gate like that had been possible, this is just turning out to be more interesting by the minute ^_^ or by the chapter.


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  • From ANON - YUURI-EIRI on May 01, 2007
    HI.... NICE CHAPT.(TSUBASA RC???) A LITTLE BIT DIFFERENT BUT IīTS OK... WHERE IS YUURI? DOES ASAMI LIKES YUURI? OR MAYBE WOLFRAM? OR... KYOTA? OR ARACHI? OR... UHM... UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Marieka on April 30, 2007
    Yup that was some twist! LOL

    Nothing like tough situations where they all have to depend on each other to get out of it to bring them all closer together.

    *huggles* Thanks for sharing, cant wait to read s'more!
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  • From VampireRandy on April 30, 2007
    Again another good chapter, thank-you for taking the time to write and post this for my enjoyment
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  • From ANON - White_Youkai on April 28, 2007
    Wau! Va cia tai bent chapteris!!!!! Ziauriai fainas! Vis dar negaliu atsitoketi... Atrodo tarsi filma buciau ziurejus!FANTASTIKA! Zinai turetum but rasytoja!Arba filmu kureja! Tokia musio scena aprasyt... Nepakartojama.
    Gerai sugalvojai su tuo Yuuri'o dingimu! Dabar istorija tapo dar idomesne nei buvo. O Wolfram'as atidare tuos vartus... Tu ziauriai gerai jo charakteri ivaldzius. Patiko kai prie ezero jis su Yuuri'u kalbejo. Tas rimtas tonas taip ir skamba ausyse... ^_^ A! O jei jau kalbant apie ezera tai man patiko ta scena su Kyota ir Asami, kai jie arciau kranto pasiliko, nes vienas plaukt nemokejo, o kitas nuo mazumes nenori gilyn listi. ^_^ Wargsas Asamis... Nepavydziu... Tokius vaizdelius pamacius musio lauke, tai jam tikrai nelinksma... Ei, o Wolfram'as biskuti ne per daug sau leidzia naudodamas ugnini liuta? Ta prasme jam galia nedings? Juk ugnies elementas ne jo o Yuuri'o. Juk kai uzpuolikus nudejo, galejo panaikint liutuka. Tada jo galia neissinaudotu. Na bet gal cia tame ir esme? Galbut tavo tokis sumanymas... Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! Nesulauksiu kito chapterio! Mirsiu is smalsumo... -_-' Dar ir dabar sirdis dauzos kaip patrakus... Please! Kuo greiciau dek kita skyriu! Nuostabus kurinys! Kiekviena diena tikrinu ar neatnaujintas! Tik rasyk ir toliau. Nesustok! Ir linkiu kurybinio neissekimo (kad nebutu writer's block), daug geru minciu ir... ir visko kas reikalinga kad greiciau updeitintum!!!!!!! ^_^ Iki!
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  • From ANON - Chrono_ofdarkness on April 27, 2007
    yay! Updates! Whoot! i have to say that was some interesting developments there. lol. It's going to be interesting to see how this al turns out. lol. I'm really loving Asami though. He made me very happy in this chapter. I feel sorry for him though. Everyone around him is a warrior and he's never had any sort of battle or survival training like they have. Poor thing lol. This really made my day though. I'm so glad you updated. lol. Can't wait for the next one!
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