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By : chayron

From ANON - naoko144 on January 12, 2008
oups, how impolite of me xD I've forgotten to say this!

Did you have a good christmas and new year?^^ I hope so and wish you had ^^and I also wish you luck, money and happiness, covered with good achievment and knowledge and all that stuff ^^!!
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From ANON - Naoko144 on January 12, 2008
OOOH, I'm not disapointed at all...I kind of just didn't know Kyota would so sudently choose faraya...and I didn't know faraya could summon the gates oO but that's mostly all!! I just can't wait for next chapie tho^^'' (even tho I know I taked a while before reading it^^'' or I think oO when was it posted? haden't checked >.>) anyway, I wonder if faraya will set war. Yuuri hate this and wouldn't want to be into one that's for sure oO but anyway...How wil he react at the knowing of faraya's way with wolf when he was kept as a concubine^^'' (okay, don't answer that but it's my biggest question until you write it xD)oooh, GO! I'm giving you the energy and inspiration for the next chap! x3

Keep it up because it's really good work! (and you amaze me, since it's not your mother language, how diverse it is! Altho it's not mine either^^"")
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From ANON - Razion on January 05, 2008
Ahha! The "tortured hamster" got me grinning. XD This is a very very sweet chapter and I do like the last part!

When it comes to Amae though, I was thinking if maybe he went with Faraya so he could "permanently" ensure that he wouldn't touch Wolfram and the rest. ._. He's always so misunderstood that I guess he just makes me think that of him. I'm in disbelief that he whole heartedly wanted to go with Faraya, even though they've been together a whole lot longer.

Thank you very much! The exams went well. XD Thanks for taking the effort to write and update! Happy New Year. Take care!
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From ANON - Rowen Raven on January 02, 2008
Wow! Its been so long! I suffered trugh your absence, I really did. You are right, I got a bit pissed about the chapter. Like wolfram, I can't say I was surpriced, but it still bothered me a little. I do understand Amae's reasons thou, Things with Kyota weren't working at the moment, he was not really willing to help, and Amae would never dream of imposing in wolfram's marrige, he is not that selfish. And the fact remains that him and faraya do love each other, in the most weird morbid way, but its love. They are in deep shit now, faraya most be planing one hell of a revenge, and they can do nothing but wait for him to strike. I'm not sure what to make out of Kyotas rampage, to me he really had no right to get so pissed. I just hope that Amae will have a happy life wheter that means running away from faraya or staying with him. If they do love each other then faraya should stop playing games, treat Amae as his loved one, not as his favorite toy, but I know that would probably never happen, Amae deserves a happy life in my opinion. So yeah... I couldn't help but notice in your reply you said there was trouble ahead for wolfram and yuri, I can't wait. And of curse, for wolfram to be heathy enough to shagg with yuri, I'm dying for a pasionate love sesion. well Keep it up, don't leave us waiting for so long, this time. ja ne!
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From hotgirl499 on January 01, 2008
ok its still great i love this story to som uch come on its addicting i check every week to see if its been updated hey can't blame a sister for liking such a good story i love your writing style alot its really good you should write your own books you'll get a really good deal hey i'll be the first one to buy your book if u ever write one someday. update soon kay ^_^
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From dawnmm on January 01, 2008
im not really disappointed in this chapter except for amae going with faraya i just thought there should be more. When does yuuri find out what farya did to wolfram for example. as always great to read looking forward to the next one and i beta also if you need another one
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From alicem on December 31, 2007
Great update. While it was sad that Amae went with Fayea, I wasn't suprised. Will he stay with him or go back to Shin Makota?

Yuuri and Wolfram are really cute together. So sad that there is only 1 more chapter. Will you be continuing the series with a completely new story? I hope so.

On another note I have tried to join the forum but I don't knoe how to answerthe last question. if anyone has any ideas please feel free to email me.
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From ANON - yuuri-eiri@hotmail.com on December 22, 2007
Wolfram is yuuri's babe ^^.... will be waiting next chapter, ah, and Merry Christmas and a happy (yeah!) new year for you and your family and friends, you're one of my favorite writers, bye ;)
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From ANON - chrono_ofdarkness on December 12, 2007
OMG! Sorry I haven't been on here lately, too busy with school, but hot damn i missed alot. lol. Wow. This story progressed so much while i was gone. I love it and i can't wait to see how you finish it.
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From ANON - klausolas on November 30, 2007
I'm so glad uuri is back. I missed him. Is Wolfram ever going to tell Yuuri what happened to him and Amae at Faraya's hands?
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From ANON - Razion on November 25, 2007
Gah! I'm on Chapter 24 now! XDDD

Firstly, dang, Yuuri's so awesomely sweet! I love the way he treated Wolfram! Made me go "Aww". Perhaps its just me but I always like it when a couple ends up like that. ^^ I'm so glad they got back together again!

And then on to Kyota and Amae! Those two are a whole different issue. I don't think I've ever found myself being a fan of such a couple but you pull it off perfectly and have got me totally on the fan bandwagon. (The fanwagon? XD Hehe) I love the way you've been writing Amae. He's just so sadly tragic I feel like squishing him, but he probably wouldn't appreciate that. Kyota on the other hand is lovable but in a "You REALLY need to be whacked on the head" kinda way. Everytime he falls into the angst hole that Amae digs I feel like shaking him vigorously while totally understanding what kind of character he is. XD Come to think of it, Amae needs a good shaking too! Poor guy has had such a tough life he probably can't really deal with kindness and genuine emotions anymore. XDD

Ahh! Off to read the rest. T_T Nooo, you've got me tied to my computer with your geniusness! XD
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From ANON - Razion on November 24, 2007
NOOOOO I should totally be shot and resurrected and SHOT ONCE MORE! O_o I didn't come back to your story for quite a while and look at all the wonderfulness I missed! AGGGHH! >.< I just finished reading Chapter 21 and really love what you did with Kyota and Amae's relationship! I was totally rooting for Wolfram and Amae and you completely turned that around for me! XDD Very nicely written tension and angst.

Ahh, dreams! XD I get really weird ones every now and then. Mostly I find myself running and hiding from things like giant Tabula Rasa monsters. Sometimes I don't even know what I'm running from. I just run. >.< Lately I've been losing quite a bit of sleep though. The evil exams are coming up, I'm finding it hard to study and am just generally afraid and frustrated.

Yosh! I'm gonna go study and then let myself read the next chapter of your story during my break. XD Gives me something really great to look forward to. Thanks for putting all the effort you have into this!
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From ANON - rowen raven on November 13, 2007
So is Amae having second thoughts? Now that he is out he doesn't know what to do, I'm interested in what will the conversation between faraya and Amae be like. Amae thinks he will need mental treatment, what he doesnt know is that he already does, and kyo too. I loved Amaes self proclameid masochism, and how he so casually told yuri that they wheren't fucking. Is sweet seeing wolf and yuri together again, they talked a bit but I guess there is still a lot more to say. How much does yuri really know about what happened to wolfram. I thought he wouldn't like Amae, that he would be a little jealous, but to accuse wolfram of infidelity, is going way over board, knowing how wolf feels, me wolf I'd torch the idiot. If he reacts like this to Amaes presence then he would flip if he ever finds out what faraya did, and I don't think any peace treaty could save the other kings ass, would part of his wrath befall on wolf, if he finds out. Apart from that I think I have nothing else to say, wow thats a first, a relatively short review, may be I'll come up with some thing else later and write again. for now, ja ne.
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From hotgirl499 on November 10, 2007
Yaeh that was just peachy update soon k.
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From dawnmm on November 10, 2007
faraya being a good guy I dont think so. I want yuuri to find out what he did to wolfram and then beat the crap out of him and berating wolfram for following is just wrong yuuri is his husband i would follow also looking forward to what happens next
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