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By : chayron

From watermajutsu on November 09, 2007
*Sigh* It was quite a sweet chapter. Especially the ending. The quiet, tender moments are the scenes that I always look forward to reading whenever I read your writings (aside from the hot, sexy shagging stuff, of course, LOL!). It was a very good chapter, and I do hope you update soon. :)
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From ANON - naoko144 on November 09, 2007
like said, I'm a puddle!! xDD KYAAA!!! but oh wait...does Amae still like faraya or suomething!!?? oO urgh! I don't get him here...I wouldn't want to see that fucker...unless he wants to try and kill him?? but don't let faraya hurt him kay xD I like amae's stuborness and something irony and sarcastik tone^^'' mouahah! (but wolf mah fav XD) and I hope he get better soon.. I'm just surprise that faraya wasn't too bigmoutted about wolf oO OMAHGAWD!! I'm sure you'll let yuuri know, say please!! xDD I just want to know how he would react when he learn that fraraya had caught him and made him his concubine and the most, fucked him xDD

amae must accept kyota's proposition too TT.TT buhuh!! (bad me that reads at school...anyway xD)

ooh, say, you'll have the next chap soon hu?^^!! (tho take your time to make it good x3) I can't wait to read the answers to my question x3 (oi, I didn't really get it but when wolf is full power,is he more powerful than faraya?? I know yuuri his but wolf?)
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From sassylion on November 09, 2007
O_O I can't believe I could fall so far behind. O_O

I'm still loving the story as much as I was in the first couple of chapters (maybe even more now that Yuuri found Wolfram ahhhh me being a sucker for the two together....:P) and I am happy that you kept going, even though I didn't for quite a while.

I keep wondering what's going to happen next, and it's great to be caught up again, and I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Yay.
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From hotgirl499 on November 08, 2007
Thank god he's not dead man i was going into a overdrive then i was going to commit suicide by depriving myself of yaoi for a month that would of killed me but it's good to now husband and wif...er husband is back togehter! YAY! KAWAII!
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From YuuriEiri on November 05, 2007
HELLO,Uhm... Yuuri is the best: �There wasn�t a minute that I wouldn�t be thinking of you.�

�Yeah, two months without sex makes one see things differently, ne?� Wolfram muttered, still not turning to Yuuri.
^^ will be waiting for the next chapter...:D
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From ANON - mimi-chan on November 03, 2007
Wow, I didn't even realize that we are up to that chapter already time flies. I think you have done a good job of putting it all out there, not many people can do epics. To be honest I have never liked the Kyota/Amae pairing which I mentioned in a previous review but other people seemed to love it and I thought you had that pairing in mind which is why I mentioned a possible sequel with them too. Speaking of Amae *squeals* I am not sure if this was intentional or not but it seems like he has a thing for Yuuri, I mean with the way he was assessing him in the hospital room and also the way he totaly flipped on Kyota after he met Yuuri. Seeing as how he used Kyota, which he really didn't have to because Wolfram probably would have brought him to Shin Makoka anyway. And I thought maybe the little comment Wolfram made about his and Yuuri relationship when Yuuri left was foreshadowing. Anway I could be just over analyzing things 'cause it seems to fit the recent events as far as Amae's behavior goes, and makes for a good read but that is just me. I will definitely be on the look out for the sequel though too bad they don't have author alerts or something of that nature here.
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From ANON - ducky on November 02, 2007
I really got a huge kick out of this chapter. I love the interaction between Kyota and Amae, I love the way Yuuri and Wolfram are with each other. It's wonderful. I'm eager to see where you take the story next, what happens between Amae and Kyota.. whether they figure it out or not. I wanna see what happens with Faraya, and what Yuuri does when he figures out what the scum did to his husband.

I eagerly await the next chapter of this wonderful story. I'm sorry to say however that I don't have h fanart to give you just yet - work has been busy and I don't want to rush through the pic - I've been working hard on it.

Wtih Fond Regards,
Ducky
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From dawnmm on November 02, 2007
i am anxiously awaiting what yuuri did to faraya and if he knew what he did to wolfram. I wonder where yuuri has been this whole time and what that look in his eye was that kyota had to think about, I'm hoping not lust my suspicions are anger for not keeping wolfram safe
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From ANON - Rowen Raven on November 02, 2007
Well after two month of hell he has his yuri back! I'm wondering what kind of compromise will they reach concerning farayas future, Wolf wants him dead as soon, painfuly and horribly posible, I don't think yuri would aprove, wich will piss wolf off greatly, since it is personal. I sill feel daft for not realising that yuri could jump between worlds, but this being so, yuri's desaperence in the firts place was an accident or was it on purpuse, why did yuri went to that other world to beging with? and how did he realiced that wolf had followed him, or was it that when he went back wolf was gone? They are so sweet yuri and wolf! Now Amae and Kyo are really fucked up in the head, Amae is not the easyest person in the world. But I comend Kyo for trying to take example from yuri and be reasonable, if only to explode in the end, but he did try. Oh and why is wolf so scared of, what makes him think there is something wrong in his relationship with yuir? Does he think yuri will be jealous about Amae or is it that he is concered that he will find out about what faraya did to him? waht has got me puzzeled as well is that look that kyo saw in yuri's eyes when he regarded Amae, what was that look about? There is a lot going on here, I can't keep my mind fron going in circles trying to figure everything out, wondering to where all of it will lead every character, yuri, wolf, kyo, amae, and even faraya but only because I want him as dead as wolf. God I'm so daft! ta!
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From ANON - naoko144 on November 02, 2007
I'm happy to know that there wn't be any death ^^! (and of course, I'm really over joyed each time I read your fic, I wonder why^^''must be because I like it so much x3)And then, I'm also wondering...will Yuuri know one day about what Faraya did to wolfram xD (and wolf must kill faraya, sooo or at east deal with him great...Yuuri will have to let him kick faraya's btt xDD)

Ooooh my my, Kyota and Amae really are having it rough between them. But Amae is fucked up because He like Kyota but want to be like wolf and yuu with kyota, but think that it'll never be possible or something?? (I'm started thinking of amae being all emo oO OMG!! Noooo). I wnder if, if they end together, kyota would be able to love him as much as he had loved wolf and even more!^^

anyway!! xDD Yeah for cute moment!! (I was really relieved to know wolf was alive and all good, and like almost giggling when yuuri came and had dismissed kyota and amae and had the cute fluffy moment! but, xD seriously, wolf has strange habits, wanting to eat meat after only started to get conscious and in good shape^^'' tho I'm no better xDD!!

Woot, I want chapter 25 now xDD hehe!
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From ANON - Webtester01 on November 02, 2007
Great couple of capters (23 & 24). I like how Amae and Kyota are finally working things out.

Wolfram and Yuuri finaly are getting through Wolframs's near-death experience.

Keep up the great work. :)

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From Beachan18 on November 01, 2007
:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

:D:D:D:D:D

FInally~! Yuuri makes an APpearance~! Love the last quote~! I hope Yuuri makes Faraya pay for what he's done...
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From ANON - Jurie-chan on October 31, 2007
And there he goes! ^-^ I had decided to bug you with Yuuri's appareance if he didn't make it to chapter 25 but looks like I won't have to do it!

I read your story in one go. What with school and everything, it has taken me almost three days, phew! I can't bring myself to panic about Wolfram, though. I'm sure Yuuri won't let him die. I'm dead curious has to what he has been doing all this time but I figure you'll tell us later so...

Anyway, I really like it and hope you'll update soon!!!...it'll haunt my dreams for the next few days...no pressure ^-^v
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From hotgirl499 on October 28, 2007
Nooooooooooo plez don't let wolfram die i don't want to cry plez don't let a miracle happen or something i couldn't handle wolfram dieinghe's one of my favorite characters i don't want yuuri to be sad he need him they need each other plez don't let him die.
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From ANON - mimi-chan on October 28, 2007
Yeah Yuuri is here, I am so excited I can finally exhale its the moment I have been waiting for. I love his concern for Wolfram, although it is painful to see Wolf acting so defeated, he needs to get his fighting spirit back. Can't wait to see Yuuri kick Faraya's ass. It also was nice to see people's shock over the way Wolfram reacted when Yuuri was there, just goes to show how strong their bond is and the fact that they don't share it with anyone else. I was never a big Yuuri/Wolfram fan, rather a Con/Yuu fan so I was really reluctant to read this series and I really liked WOTP which made me check out this one. So I thought it was ironic that the same reason that made me not want to read it in the first place is the same reason why my liking for this sequel kind of dwindled some. To be honest there were a good number of parts that were skipped over because I thought the whole harem arc was kind of long and soon got tiring, it started to make me feel like I was watching one of those movies which in general is fairly good but has a good number of boring parts that you skip over to get to the good part again. Besides I thought it had too much focus on Amae, not that he is a bad character but at times it was like just who is the main character here. Well I guess here we are at the good part again so it will go back up on my fics to look forward to list. I look forward to the next chapeter, really interested in seeing Wolfram heal and go back to his old self, this is not a good look for him. And can't wait for Yuu/Wolf to have their happy every after besides I am also really interested on seeing how things are back home being that time does go by really quickly there. You seem to have a good number of Amae fans maybe you might want to think about a branch after this one ends dealing with his life in Shin Makoku and his relationship with Kyota.
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