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By : chayron

From Beachan18 on September 03, 2007
...-_-

I started reading this fic because I absolutely loved the prequel to it, and I hoped this one would be good too.

I love Wolfram, I really do...but...
Ugh...the angst and stuff, and since it's not really YuuRam I have to say I really don't like this fic. -_- Sorry...
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From ANON - rowen raven on September 03, 2007
Horay I was diying with despare to know what was happening. That Faraya is a bastard, and onece again wolf should count himself lucky that the king had his fill with Amae, and didn't try to make a defenite move on him, I'm wondering how long will it take , or if wolf will be able to scape before that happens, if anything he hates the guy even more, and has some degree of sympaty for Amae. I'm glad at how he took it, he managed it to perfection, he remained calmed, and delt with his own problem, and kept a neutral view to it, like he sais its anly natural, and he being in a cock free diet for far to long to anyones confort, or at least after having it so frecuantly, I like that the relation between them is not realy afected negatively over that insident, true is not making any mayor leaps towards a brotherhood, but I belive they've reached and understanding, Lasami was very sweet the way he talkes about Amae will sure influence wolf desition to take Amae. I wonder what kind of info is Yasai getting from observing the goings in the concubines cuarters, Is a concubine at all, or just a silly spy to keep tabs on the others, or he provides the info in exchange of getting shafted by the king, in either case if I'm not mistaken, he will pose some trouble for our heros, am jusdt waiting to see what kind, and how big. I loved the mouse! hahaha, and let me explain this to you, since this story is usualy updated every other week on sundays, I read the new chaps late at night on sunday to monday, when I get back from work my roomate is asleep, and every time something funny happens, like "i'm afraid of the dark" and other ways wolf choses to goad kohar, of any funny situation, is all I can do to keep from waiking my room mate up, I have to bite back my laughter, and forse myself to reduse it to an amused chuckle wich is not easy I may add. But this time I'm alone and I've laughed my head off with the mouse scene. I pictered it clearly in my mind, the way every one went in to hysterics, and I could imagine wolf's face at all this, and the way every one looked at him when he knifed the poor thing to the carpet, probably to take it out of its missery before it diyed of a cardiac with all that screaming. But what made me roll and the floor was expresion that wolf most have had on his face when he said "well, i'm not picking it up". that place is a circus. well thats more than pleanty for now I'll be waiting, ja ne.
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From ANON - rowen raven on August 19, 2007
I'm sorry I pressed the wrong key and the stupid thing closed my review before I was done writting it. At one something in the morning my motor skills get kind of sluggish. Any way as I was saying I need to know waht is going on in that room I'm going to go insane with speculations, and imagining the out come of all the possible scenarios, I'm going to nag you and say it was a mean closure point for the chapter, bad enough to be considered a cliffhangger and they are hazardous for oversensive readers' health. Now that I had my tantrum, Wolf was kind of mean to Amae saying he did'nt care, but I understand, I myself tent to block out and denie the things I'm not able to cope with. It is sweet of Amae to try and keep Wolf safe, from both the other concubines and Faraya. Amae should have know better than to get flustered by wolf coment, if he didn't care he wouldn't have made a move when Torani grabbed him. I felt like wolf during the conversation between Faraya and Amae, it was surreal, and creepy, I LOVED it!!! How can you flirt with some one who's guts you hate with a passion, and how can you fuck some one so calmly when you know the moment you turn your back that person could try to stab you? Amae knows he is gorgeous and he knows how to use it to his advantage, I comend him I think he is really strong to put up with Faraya the way he does. I want to apologies I know I'm a spoiler but I cant help it, this kind of thing happens to me ofthen, when I watch a something in the tv, be it movies, anime, series,or when I'm reading some thing I get the hang of the trama, and I can guess many of the events, It most be anoying the hell out of you that I keep guessing whats going on in the story, I hope the other reader are averted from my reviews because of their length so I don't ruin the element of surprise you work so hard to achive, onece again gomenazai! Well I the only thing I got left to say is I'll be anxiously waiting for the next chap, I have to know if wolf will: a)blush of emberassment, b)nosebleed from arousement C)pass out with disgust or stress or d)out burst with anger. and also will he stay in time out, or will he have to join in to the play yard? ja ne ^_
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From ANON - rowen raven on August 19, 2007
Nothing like coming back from a tideous night of work at 12:30 am and find the new chap of my favorite fic! I saw the pic of Amae and that is one beautyful man, god where do they make men like him? The things he has to do to keep pease in that Goddamn place, playing slap and tickle with Torani the guy is daft in the mellon! What is Faraya thinking (it took me 13 chap to learn his name) taking Wolf to Amae's. Was it to show him it wasn't that bad, or to show him it was inevitable, to use Amae to soft him up? I mean I agree with Amae the guy is fucked up in the head. What will be Wolf reaction to this, I mean Amae is one hell of a sight, and wolf is in desperate need of a laid, will he be aroused or disgusted by the show. Will he get off on it, will he be his dignified self and resist the urges, or will he wank watshing them getting it on, will he invited to the sheats party, or left alone just to watsh, to many possibilities
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From dawnmm on August 18, 2007
this is definatly getting strange but interesting
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From ANON - tam_snb on August 17, 2007
This can't be considered as review. I just want to tell you I enjoy each of chapters. Thanks for writing it. ^_^
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From ANON - rowen raven on August 06, 2007
Hello again, I was having some fun imagining when wolf and kyota are reunated, I don't know why I have some high expectations for those scenes, I love the sarcastic and cynical arguments they have; any way i was thinking of this when I remembered I thought you mention that you'd probably give kyota a love before the end of the fic but that it was not yuri's wus of a friend, and all of the suden I remembered Amae's intentions to scape with wolfram, and I'm going to take a wild guess and go out of my way and say that our blue hair comander and the charismatic concubine could be an item. Hell why not? wolf would agree with me to say that kyota needs a good shag up the arse, and God knows Amae could use a change of position and be on top for once. But I don't know I guess thats just me having fun with your characters in my mind while listening to Alanis Morissette's "you owe me nothing in return" and "surrendering", music usualy inspires me and my imagination runns away with me. Oh by the way if you haven't heard those songs maybe you should it is my personal opinion that the go perfect with your fic in both wolf/yuri and wolf/kyota relationship, so I would like to dedicate those two to you and your awsome story, well sorry for bothering you again with my farfetched speculations, I'll check in again later, ja ne! ;)
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From ANON - rowen raven on August 06, 2007
hi! i just got back from work and found the new chap 13 my lucky number. why? well because everything is cristal clear, at least for now. i think i have just one question, why can't amae use the water element any more and still use healing power. well like amae, he told my kind of story as clich� and trite as it is, so i'm going to risk it and thrust him, he seemed sencere and had good enough motivations i guess, besides yasai is the squealer right, riigghht, RIGHT? I could imaging wolframs face when Amae "suggested" that he sleep with faraya (for once i was able to remember the asshole's name), and the expretion was priceless.
Yes! thank you for rescuing wolf wedding bracelet, that was a nice touch, you don't leave any detais hangging with out a porpuse, very nice; and besides i was kind of sad when they took it, because i liked that mental picture i got at the beggining when wolf and yuri where making love and wolf covers his eyes with his arm and the gold loop catches yuri's attention, i don't know every time i remember this fic that image pops in my mind first, go figure. So now is kyota to the rescue, man he is going to flip out when he finds out what happens to wolf,. After they get out of there they are going to have one hell of and argument, their bickering is going to be heard all the way in shin mazoku. Well thats it for now, i'll be checking for more later, i'm dying to know if wolf will take amae with him or any others for that matter. As always exelent work, keep it up, ja ne -_~
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From dawnmm on August 05, 2007
i really am enjoying this story and how much it is grabbing me and i thank you for showing me a glimpse of the "others" and yes i meant the rest of the party. I realize that this is Wolframs story and he is the focus but what i was looking forward to was rumors something for them to follow after they get rid of faraya. Just looking willy-nilly doesnt seem right. Your story is engrossing and am looking forward to more.
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From ANON - rowen raven on July 31, 2007
hullo! it's me your own personal suck up!>_> first i'd like to thank you for taking your time in to answering my premature questions ahead of time even if your going to explain in later chapters, i really appreciate it. so 14 against 1 thats my kind of fight, i'm really looking foward to that idea, to teach that bastard a few lessons. "breaking him" what does he think wolfram is a horse? for crying out loud, but in a heroic and desperate atempt wolf has manage to keep his virtue for another day, but oh boy that king is going to get it, he doesn't know he just drove in to fuckville and wolf is the mayor. god his death is going to be slow and painfull! and the oscar goes to... "i'm afraid of the dark" right and academy award worthy perfomance bravo; he fucks with that kohar guy out of pure spite it makes me laugh every time. i'm really starting to like amae, he is being awfully nice, can i like him with out being betrayed, wolf really needs some support right about now, and getting out of there shouldn't be so imposible with a litte help. now the kid being a healer came as a surprise, i'm just as interested as wolf, are those powers his own or is he taking them from selfish sod (aka the king)can he use any other power, do other comcubines have them as well? right now i'm wondering what will be the repercutions of wolf bitch slaping the king and of amaes atentions on wolf, will he be punished and if so how severly, and how will kohar and the other concubines react to this two events and of curse what will be wolfram punishment for putting such a fural struggle against the king and making him cum with exitement before the action started (snigers)wow wolf is so damn good! well thats it for now i think i got everything but if not i'll write again, things come in to perspective better after i close the browser don't ask me why probably i think to much or have an over active imagination. ja ne!
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From dawnmm on July 30, 2007
thanks for the explanation--this was a great chapter i thought though that wolfram would have a little more strength to him though but it thought it was great that he got the king a couple of good ones hope he did break his nose though. can you give us a glimpse on what the others are doing? even just a couple of paragraphs here and there.
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From cueball2 on July 30, 2007
Faray got what he deserved. But it's not over yet. I hope Yurri finds him soon. I wonder what Amae is up to. Great chapter. :)

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From ANON - Wendera on July 26, 2007
wow! What a great surprise to come back from Otakon to find 2 new chapters! although I'm slightly embarrassed to admit it, I actually wish there was a bit more Wolfram abuse in this last chapter ^.^;;; I'm still waiting on a Yuuri-uke scene XD Anyway, the concubines are starting to become intriguing characters. I think Amae is Yuuri in disguise XD Where is Yuuri anyway?! lol Anyway, keep up the good work! You can tell I like this story because I took the time to type my review out on a PSP XD
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From on July 20, 2007
Yo! Perskaiciau dar karteli sita chapteri ir tikrai galiu sakyti, kad jis puikiai pavykes. Zaidimas kortom tikrai geras... (zinai, beskaitydama pagalvojau, kad butu visai faina, kad berniukai butu pazaide ka rimtesnio... Jau taip ir issivaizduoju kaip Wolfram'as sedi visas apsiredijes, o kitos concubines vos su triusikeliais ^_~ ) heh. Na lauksiu kitu chapteriu! Taip kad net nemanyk nustot rasyt! ;)
Kaip sekes sia savaitele? Tikriausiai prirasei daugybe chapu (na jei zaido nezaidei hehe.) Na susimatysim greit. Ikis!
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From ANON - Chrono_ofDarkness on July 19, 2007
Yay! I love the meeting between the king and Wolfram. I'm glad you didn't rush the scene and we have more time to get to know him better. I like the king so far though.
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