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By : chayron

From ANON - rowen raven on July 19, 2007
sorry to do another entry so soon, but it was 4:30 in the morning and i was trying to figure out was the deal with the concubines and imagining different scenarios when i remembered when you described them ogling at wolf like salivating,laughing hyenas, and musing on their suspicious if not creepy relation between them when an not so unusual thought poped in my mind, are the concubines shagging each other, are they allowed to do so or they do it any way against the rules, or is my perverted imagination over reacting? i mean i for one would like to have wolf not only worrying about the king trying to shaft him, but be jumpy and paranoid about the other sluts wanting to gang bang him, come on! he has sex apeal after all, one would thing he smells of pheromones. don't be surprise about the hour i'm a creature of the night and usualy proul aroud the site during the ungodly pre-dawn hours. well with that out of the way is fare well till next up date, ja ne!
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From ANON - rowen raven on July 19, 2007
hi glad to hear from you again! that was quite and intriguin chap 11! i really don't like tat god damn king, he was able to disturb wolf, if ( not to say when) he finally gets his hands on (dick in) wolf his is going to leave a very ratheled blond, he is already close to a mental, emotional and neveious breack down. to be honest i'm kind of looking foward to it (god i'm a moster). i just love who wolf goads the kohar guy, that man is going to pop a vessel one of this days an aniurism would be nice. to tell the truth i don't know what to think about the other concubines,specailly amae there is an ambivalence about him, i'm curious about him as a character but i'm not sure if i like him, the same goes for yasai, how come his like don't trust the guy but he never loses step or footprint of him. i'm curious as to what they ment that they could get some use out of wolfram. and what's that toranis problem any way, these are really fucked up concubines, i mean bloody hell the part where you discribed them as wolves i would have use the frace skeeming bitches, it seems more acurate. well for what i just read they ain't stupid bints after all, wolf is going to have to watch his back from at least one of the two groups of male concubines, don't know much about the female ones yet, but i bet that would be interesting if not insightful, my guess is that he could make friends with at least one of them and learn some touchy if noy valuvel info, maybe a nice tender conversation about why and what is to be aconcubine(and a female one for a practically gay king at that) i'm wondering does he has a queen, and if he does what does she think of the harem. and completly changing the aproach is time running paralel to this univers in the demon kingdom, is it faster, slower or the same. i mean it would blow thet they go back and like years have gone by and things have change, i hope that is not the case. i agree with wolf he should get as many kicks as he can from kohar, since he is so willing to make wolf's day, he is such an easy tarked, and i swear he brings it upon himself, by now he should know better than to fuck with wolfram. i find wolf thought on yuri must endearing, and i think he was on the mark about yuri laughing and leveling the place ( or turning it in to baren waste land to more acurate) oh! i've meaning to tell you that i'm missing a tearjerker scene, i really like does, like in wotp when wolf aked yuri to dance with him one last time before leting him go, all that agntsy mood when he is depress and vulnerable i just love it as much as the bratty or the serious wolf. well ta' for the great chap. i'll be waiting for more, i've writen enough trying to get it all out in one go as if not to stalk and pester you, i'll be haunting the site hoping to be the firts to catch your new chap and post the long ass review so you won't be to tier to read it after reading all the others i know i hog all your time and reviewing space, that's all for now ja ne! XD
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From dawnmm on July 18, 2007
still trying to figure out who amae reminds him of - good or bad - you leave very good questions need more answers. am looking forward to wolfram breaking out spectacularly. worried though once the power is all gone will he start to get sick because he cant use his powers? like he started to on earth b4 shori released them?
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From ANON - girlo on July 18, 2007
Now I'm uneasy. I need wolfram to a) find Yurri and b) not get raped. But I guess it's not really up to me.
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From ANON - chrono_ofDarkness on July 16, 2007
Yay! I'm so glad to have internet access for a while! I've been waiting for updates for a while. lol. Yay! I can't wait for Wolfram to meet the king though. That should be an interesting encounter. lol.
Keep up the good work as always!
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From ANON - yuuri-eiri on July 15, 2007
OMG poor poor Wolfram.... update chap. 11 soon, please :D
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From ANON - girlo on July 12, 2007
there, it took me forever, but I read your last story, and now what you have so far of this one, so I will finally comment. Good! I'm glad Wolfram is putting up a fight. those people suck. Anyway, i will patiently wait for the next installment. I hope it's soon! (reading the whole of it in 3 days kinda turns you into an addict. I need my fix!)
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From dawnmm on July 09, 2007
i understand about not using his powers and wasting them but arent they wasting even as he waits. I love how you have made wolframs character you are bringing him to life for me even more so and have made him so adult and not the brat. i really do look forward to your next chapter. i hope we see the others soon and here maybe some rumors of yuuri soon. i realize that this is wolframs story but even a hint would be good for them. thank you for sharing your story.
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From ANON - rowen raven on July 09, 2007
wow i just saw the review list am' i the only one that insist in bugging the hell out of you? i feel a little ashame writing testaments for reviews and shit. i can only hope it doesn't bother you that much, and much to your anoyens i write again if any thing else comes to mind, feel free to tell me to shut the fuck up, or laugh at me and use me as you jester what ever helps you to bare with the craze obsesive compulsive reader and reviewer again gomen for waisting your time and testing your patience, and of the all of the other reviweres who happen to read this, i wonder what the think of me? oh well, and don't forget to keep tourturing wolf i just loved chap 10, no more bugging for now, no seriously i'm done, ja ne. XD
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From ANON - rowen raven on July 09, 2007
faisty little wolfram! once hes figured out what he's gonna do those people are good as dead, god that was awsome, I HAD A BLAST! wolf is going to be the dead of that kohar. i wonder who will the one to submit first, i'm still ruthing for wolfram, that guy has just made himself a powerfull enemy. Yasai was very nice feeding wolf, and i can't wait for wolfram to cross words with amae that will be somthing to witness, will he like wolf (what ever that means), or wil he think of wolf as a treath to his place as the kings favorite, and been the kings favorite does he has any influence ever so slightly over the king's judgent when it comes down to other concubines? and talking about the bastard, i'm looking foward to his reaction to wolfram's feats in his harem, i'm sure he's going to say something about it been the king and all but i'm more interented in what is wolfram going to say back. but at least he has the respect if not fear of his fellow whore, now there is a silly thought wolfram leading an army of whores! i'm glad you are not anoyed by me insesant babling is just that i get all exited and fiered up, because it is so good. there are very few writer up to a level that they make you belive what they are writing, you have an awsome plot, wich you develop cohirently, you are great at conveing atmospher and at describing, you have a great understanding of the characters, and your original characters actually fit in to the kyo kara maho univers. there are only three other fanfic writer that i consider are up to your caliber, and belive me i read like a maniac, its actually obsesive compulsive.i just wish the whole thing was actualy part of the series and was animated as well, but reading is always more fun. oh well i'm flater for your prizing like i said i get too exited, i think to much and i have no life. its been fun as always i hungrily wait for more of this master pice, ja ne. ;)
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From ANON - rowen raven on July 08, 2007
sorry is me again! it most seem like i'm harasing you, or like i have no life, but i re-read the thing again because is so good. kyota most be familly with the bad omen bird, he just had to mention the colorful concubines and look where wolf landed, also he most be going insane with worry. me wolfram i'd 've burned that guy ko-whats his name, to cinders for all that manhandling (a.k.a pampering i was been sarcastic before) wolf has managed to keep his virtue so far but for how much longer. will he be forced to have sex with the fa-who is it king. and i was wondering since they say this guy has powers if wolf does have sex with him will he absorb them as well, will it hurt him like that first with yuri, will he be able to use them too. so many posibilities, i'm so looking foward to wolf encounter with the king, i know there is no way in hell that wolf will go down quietly the king is in for a ride. and what would kyota's and yuri's reaction be to the manhandling (and posible impending rape) that wolf has been through. oh and i can already imagine the make up sex beteewn wolf and yuri when they are finaly together, it will be awsome.any way i'll stop babling and boring you, promise i wont bother you any more, or not untill you up date the next chap at least, i hope its soon ja ne. ps gomen for been obnotious and yes its true my grammar sucks oh and by the way I DON'T HAVE A LIVE! 0.0
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From ANON - tam_snb on July 07, 2007
Nooooooo, that stupid king can't rape Wolfram T_T Poor him!
Thanks for your story but please, don't make Wolfram surffer more
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From ANON - rowen raven on July 06, 2007
THANK YUO! This was the first time i ever reviewed a fic and was actually replied that really made me happy. just like u writer wnt to know what we think about your stories we reader get curious as to what u think of our opinions, any way enough of that chap 9 was so good who would have thought that wolfram would be so indicnant for being pampered, but then again in his situation i would have to. that guy lasami i feel really sorry for him, he seems like such a nice guy. well i'm glad u agree with me, and i trust u to make our dear presious prince suffer some more (sadistic evil grin). looking foward for some more soon. ja ne :)
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From ANON - Wendera on July 04, 2007
OMG! I read Working out the Paradox in 2 days XDDD I love your story. You keep your characters superbly in character. The only time in the story when I stopped and said to myself "That would never happen" was when Conrad called Yuuri a brat XD So anyway, after I read all these chapters I decided I needed to leave a review before I kept on reading~~~~ Keep up the good work! ^o^

As a side note, since I saw in your A/N's that you don't know how old Wolfram is, in the anime he was 82 years old so by this point in the story he'd be 89. ^.^
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From dawnmm on July 04, 2007
you are good-this chapter was excellent--wondering what the rest of the party is doing and how they plan on getting wolfram back. also trying to figure out why wolfrom didnt use his mazoku (spelling sorry} to get free and get back at kohar. im hoping its all master plan to get to fayar. keep up good work and thanks for sharing
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