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Reviews for An Unlikely Couple

By : CryptJo
  • From Nichts on July 03, 2007
    Wow, this story rocks! Update soon puhlease!
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  • From ANON - gen on May 22, 2007
    goku in love with gojyo .....
    to me this is possible because gojyo maybe goku's concept of a sex god
    and if he thinks he needs lessons, this is the place to go

    gojyo is the man to go - when one needs sex education
    and goku feels it is time he grew up - in a lot of ways
    and gojyo is the best... (i think so anyway)

    i can feel the jealousy of hakkai. gojyo is his Best friend
    and hakkai feels, rightly enough, that gojyo belongs to him
    should he go for sanzo? sanzo is their leader
    i dont think hakkai should, or would, except perhaps he thought sanzo needed it
    but even then he would hesitate...
    he IS not a one-night stand kind of man, and sanzo is a friend
    in fact, sanzo is like a savior to him, as gojyo is.

    with sanzo's offer, this is how it might be - a one night stand
    it is would be difficult to have a one-night stand with a friend,
    and someone you consider you owe your life too --

    this is a difficulty he shares with gojyo - who doesnt do permanent-
    because he hasnt learnt to love himself yet...

    this fic, and its corresponding fics (i hate you, i love you) is possible
    because the sanzo ikkou is all in denial...
    and it is both painful, and somehow funny to watch...
    and also, it somehow makes all the pairings seem possible
    depending on how the behaviour mechanics are studied............

    gojyo can be one of those great sex teachers ...=)
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  • From YoukaiHakkai on May 20, 2007
    Woot. Another good chapter!
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  • From YoukaiHakkai on May 15, 2007
    Wow. I like this a whole lot. I've read the two before this, and I was amazed at your skill in writing this. So, I'm going to stick with this story. Hope you'll let me know when the next chapter comes out, ne? O_^

    Also, I just realized that my keyboard was spastic - should be andijoys@colostate.edu. The second 'o' went away... weird...
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  • From SaiYury on May 14, 2007
    *loves* >< that was soo good, although i normally like it better when goku is sub but hey, you can't always get what you want; demonstrated by Sanzo and Hakkai. Lol that was totally unexpected, the kissing and all. Love that unprdictableness. Continue please!
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  • From SaiYury on May 02, 2007
    Man! That was HOT! -takes deep breaths- I love where your taking this fic! You just have to continue!
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  • From Ginny on May 01, 2007
    Hahaha oh damn that was so good! ^-^ Poor Sanzo! *laughs*
    I love the interaction between Goku and Gojyo, it's so very right... Gojyo is Gojyo, but he really would make sure twenty times over Goku was really, really ready... That was so sweet, specially as I constantly kept expecting Sanzo to barge in on them... Absolutely delightful!
    One word of advice though, things might be a little easier to read if you put some kind of sign when you skip scenes... I usually use ~*~ but basically anything will do... Other than that, awesome fic that I will definately keep in sight!
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  • From Dragon7 on April 29, 2007
    Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From SaiYury on April 29, 2007
    Oh my god! I love!

    This fan fiction has –I must admit- a very unusual pairing to start of with. But after reading “Teaching Goku” I found that this pairing could be very, very sweet and –if written right- one of the best pairings there is –and you have most certainly written it right-

    It is very humorous but at the same time has an air or seriousness around it, which makes it very enjoyable to read.

    It had a great –and I mean great- beginning and I would just love –absolutely, passively love- to read more. Your writing and the style is very tangible –you could really feel the story- and you can really get in depth with the characters; adding to the greatness of your story.

    I look forward to where this fan fiction will end up so please, please, please update soon!

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  • From akuchan on April 28, 2007
    Great story so far. I love that Sanzo is so jealous, and Hakkai too. I can't wait to see how they try to foil the other's budding romance. Looking forward to reading more soon.
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