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Reviews for A Twisted Triangle

By : AntiNostalgia
  • From MasterofPie on January 09, 2008
    I like your Ritsuka's point of view! Oh what will he do when he finds out his brother is gone, and Soubi is all for the taking ... mwhahahaha

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  • From MasterofPie on January 09, 2008
    Yay you updated! Oh happy day!
    Wow, poor Soubi can not get Ritsuka out of his head. Even with some "releaes", he does not seem any better. Could it be that he has tasted the "forbidden" fruit (well the imaginary fruit) and wants more? Anywho, great chapter!
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  • From LolaK on January 08, 2008
    Aww...very good chapter! It's so sad how Soubi is torn between Seimei and Ritsuka....and how lil Ritsuka is confused. I can't wait for the next chapter! Your story is so good! It's like a box of pocky, once it's gone, your left only wanting more!
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  • From AxiaDrake on January 04, 2008
    Such an amazingly erotic story..well done.
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  • From kati on January 04, 2008
    hmmm... I hope you find some direction for this story soon, or you will be in danger of writing uninteresting chapters. This was cute though! ^^
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  • From ANON - Morelwen on January 04, 2008
    Ah short chapter, but still great! Look forward to reading more! :3
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  • From kati on December 24, 2007
    ahhh... very hot... the writing is excellent grammatically and that is very refreshing; you can actually read what the author means, including the effects created by the manipulation of language, rather than imagining what they might mean. Good chapter! ^^ (merry xmas)
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  • From ANON - Crimsonails on December 20, 2007
    I absolutely love the way you write this story. You bring out characters so well. :3 Could you email me when you do updates? I'd really appreciate it! Good luck on your writing and stuff and keep up the good work!


    ~Hyuu
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  • From ANON - tasukigirl on December 18, 2007
    *fans self* Woo, that was hot.
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  • From MasterofPie on December 16, 2007
    YAY another chapter, oh so happy, and a steamy one too! Can not wait for your next chapter ^__^ So alone time mwhahahaha
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  • From tasukigirl on December 13, 2007
    Loving it. Dying to see where the story goes.
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  • From EmbersEye on December 12, 2007
    I super love love this story! Please continue, I will be there to read when you do ^^
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  • From kati on December 12, 2007
    hey i just read all 11 chapters, and i have to say, your style of writing is very poetic and emotional. I love it! It is enchanting and communicates a lot to the reader. Thank you for remaining commited to this story and keeping up the very high standard of emotional development and relationship dynamics that are so complicated, insightful and believable. Good luck with the next chapter!

    PS could you please email me with any updates? -----> mypheonixfire@hotmail.com THANKS
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  • From MasterofPie on November 27, 2007
    haha nothing alike a 23 year old wanting to maul a 16 year old ... what is the age of consent there ?? or when you are considered an "adult" (besides losing the ears?)
    Oh, why do i feel like Kitsuka's mother is going to have a fit ... and i wonder what will happen when the family finds out about Seimei leaving ... i hope you continuing with this fic, it is very enjoyable ^__^ and so cute
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  • From MasterofPie on November 27, 2007
    poor young naive Kitsuka ... does not understand that Soubi wants more ... or that his dear brother has left him
    Oh, i like how you made a comment about his 'split' personality (either this chapter or the previous one ...)
    Now time for some bonding ^__^
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