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Reviews for Melancholy of Flowers

By : kuramasgurl
  • From Halogazer on December 07, 2007
    AHHHHH CLIFF HANGER!!! I HATE THOSE!!!
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  • From Halogazer on October 26, 2007
    Hey, the ending didn't suck. It was sort of a cliff hanger, so that's good. You always want to end chapters on a cliff hanger. You better write really really fast so I can find out what happens, or I can just force it out of you. Mwahahahaha.
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  • From Halogazer on September 25, 2007
    KICK SOME NATSUMI ASS!!
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  • From Halogazer on September 13, 2007
    Bwahahaha that little bitch is going to get what's coming to her. Freakin' right.
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  • From Halogazer on September 11, 2007
    WOOT FOR SEX!!!!!!!!!!

    And pants.
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  • From Halogazer on August 30, 2007
    Yo, I finally read it. I'm glad things are beginning to look up for Hana. I hope Natsumi gets her ass kicked too. That would be nice.
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  • From Halogazer on July 02, 2007
    I feel sorry for Hana, and Ryo was funny at the end. He's in bed with the girl he likes and he's like EEEEEEEEEEE lol. Nice chapter. Things are progressing nicely mwahahaha.
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  • From Halogazer on June 29, 2007
    Cye was like, a total prick in this chapter. He was DISAPPOINTED in Hana? I mean, WTF. Stupid Cye. I would have totally beat the spit out of Natsumi. Stupid Ryo getting in the way... *kicks a bucket*
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  • From Halogazer on June 24, 2007
    That is really sad what happened to Hana. Cye is being a prick, but I know it's not his fault. It's that damn Natsumi. I'll beat her down with a loaf of French bread. Take THAT.
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  • From Halogazer on June 24, 2007
    "It's a party in your mouth." That sounds like a slogan for something, like, "Taste the Rainbow" or something. Good chapter. It was a good way to get suspense built up for the coming events. :) BURN THE WITCH!
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  • From Halogazer on June 21, 2007
    “I was with Hana,” Cye simply said.

    “Oh...... OH!” Kento said out load.


    (Supposed to say "loud", but I'm overlooking it haha). This is probably the funniest part just because I can TOTALLY see Kento doing this, more than likely with his mouth stuffed full of food or something. Hilarious. I think it was a good chapter. :)
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  • From Halogazer on May 24, 2007
    You're awesome, but I do have a suggestion to watch punctuation to help with the dialogue so it doesn't run into each other. But other than that, I think it's going well so far. In America.
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  • From Firestorm on May 24, 2007
    Not a bad start. Though, as a suggestion, watch the grammar. You have some of them mixed up.

    You've piqued my curiosity though. Do continue.
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