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  • From ANON - GeneralButton on February 25, 2013
    Very well written! The only problem I have is the saliva-as-lube bit. *wince* Saliva would definitely not be enough to stretch the rectum. Otherwise, this was lovely.
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  • From ANON - graaargh on September 19, 2011
    ARGH AFF keeps messing with my review... Posting again and hoping for the best!

    FFFFF. Oh Watanuki, the kind-of-creepy-obsessed-fan thing suits you a little too well. But your flailing is as adorable as ever, of course _< Awwww. Wonderful work! P.S. I don't know if another reviewer has already mentioned it, but... the story seem to be having a few issues with formatting. I wouldn't point it out, but it does affect the viewing experience a fair bit...
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 19, 2011
    FFFFF. Oh Watanuki, the kind-of-creepy-obsessed-fan thing suits you a little too well. But your flailing is as adorable as ever, of course
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 19, 2011
    FFFFF. Oh Watanuki, the kind-of-creepy-obsessed-fan thing suits you a little too well. But your flailing is as adorable as ever, of course
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  • From ANON - Elithae on March 29, 2011
    I've read this probably at least 10 times and I still love it(maybe even more) each time I read it.

    Well, I came to re-read it(again) and I noticed that your format and stuff got sort of messed up somehow. It has a bunch of "font=(insert random number here)" and centered things and the paragraphs are only half the page.

    Anyway, I love your story and just wanted to let you know something odd was going on.


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  • From ANON - twiinklestar on June 07, 2009
    I don't have an aff.net account, but I do have a ff.net account. I just wanted to say that this is probably the best smut I've ever read so far. It was long, detailed and... just brilliantly written. I hope that one day I can write smuts this good (: AMAZING! ♥
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  • From ANON - aisty on October 29, 2008
    Please write more! You did beautifully well in writing the part when they "made love" because that's what it was to me
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  • From ANON - NG on August 08, 2008
    This has to be one of the best douwatta fics I have ever read! I think you did a wonderful job catching everyone's personalities. Thank you for writing such an enjoyable story.
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  • From ANON - Arashana(on FF.net) on June 02, 2008
    Ah, I love this story! >.
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  • From ANON - Arashana(from FF.net) on May 18, 2008
    I absolutely love your story!
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  • From digiditz on January 25, 2008
    Wonderfully written. Thank you for such an interesting story about my two favorite closeted Clamp characters. (and you know Clamp has so many to choose from)
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  • From DivineDisgrace on August 24, 2007
    This was so perfect in every form...
    But it left a few questions unanswered. Since Doumeki is Himawari's bodygaurd, that means he has to travel with her. Will Watanuki go with him? Will he stay? Will they just be seperated (no!).
    Ah well. Good fic.

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  • From ANON - Charley on August 15, 2007
    I've read this twice in as many days. I think it's my new favorite bedtime story. It's beautifully written, with wonderful detail in every aspect, and the characterizations (even being au) are spot on, which I can't thank you enough for. You restore my faith in AU fics just be being one of the few to realize that just because it's a different universe that isn't license to completely change the character's personalities. And, I loved the way you described and tied in Yuuko. That was the most Watanuki interpretation of running into that woman that could possibly be imagined. You had me rolling on the floor laughing, which can upset sleeping family members, I'm anything but quiet in my glee.

    A few minor mistakes, little type-Os here and there, but nothing glaringly obvious, I hardly noticed them through my second time reading. Most of what I saw was in the second part of the story. Nothing really detracted though, so I guess it's not a big deal, but I thought I'd point them out to you in any event, and I can even go about hunting them down specifically for you at some point. There are no objections to a third reading on my end, even if it's for the purpose of being some sort of Grammar Nazi. I'm far from perfect in my own writing, so don't feel offended.

    My favorite part that wasn't the hot smexing up at the end would have to be when Watanuki was pounding on the door asking God for a sign when Doumeki spoke up and you had that one line 'God?', and second to that would be when Watanuki mentally yelled at himself to form words. Both those little moments were great. I also sincerely enjoyed when Watanuki detected that hint of bitterness in Doumeki's voice about wanting to go meet with Himawari, pointing out his interest in Watanuki but not over done or obvious. Your subtlety and ability to put together a believable relationship within the short period of time this story takes place in deserves an entire bakery's worth of cookies. If I were to quote all the parts I enjoyed about this story, I'm afraid I'd end up reposting both chapters.

    You're right when you say that the xxxholic fandom is under loved, but if people knew this story existed, I think we'd have a flood of fangirls lined up shouting their love of Doumeki/Watanuki. Please keep gracing the internet with your wonderful work, and I'll be keeping an eye out for your stories here and on ff.net. When it's not five in the morning, I may even go back and review there just to boost your ego some more. As it is, this is just me rambling about how much I adore your story and secretly wished it would continue. I keep trying to imagine what would happen when Himawari showed back up, and get the sneaking feeling the friend she went to visit was Yuuko. However, I won't demand that you continue, or ask you to, because I know how difficult that can be and how horrid the attempts can turn out. I'll just hope you get the urge to write more one day.

    You inspire me, and I suddenly feel the need to go and start actively writing for this fandom again. I swore I would a dozen times before, maybe I'll actually get off my lazy butt and do so this time around.

    Thanks for sitting through my rambling, unnecessarily long, review;

    Charley
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  • From ANON - wizli on July 31, 2007
    I found your story at FF.net and - obviously - I had to read it here ^^. I can't express in coherent words how much I loved it, I got completely caught in the little universe your words were creating, following the gentle flow of the plot and waiting for the next scene to unfold and reveal its secrets (who were very naughty! *grins happily*). Watanuki was great, I enjoyed the story from his - flailing/introspective -POV, and Himawari was his usual friendly, cute self, but the best of all was Doumeki. You made me fell in love with him all over again.

    I would love to read more of your works, we share several fandom likings after all! (and I love Tom Felton, too). For now, I added you to my author alert ^^.

    You have to post this in the doumekiwatanuki community at LiveJournal, they'll love the story as much as I did!.
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  • From ANON - nanashi kun on July 09, 2007
    did doumeki know kimihiro from somewhere? I read the first chapter twice and i haven't read the second yet but when doumeki and kimihiro meet kimihiro doesn't tell doumeki his name but doumeki knows it when himawari comes out?
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