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Reviews for This Is How It Ends

By : Envi
  • From ANON - Athena on May 30, 2007
    This is a really, really good fic. I do think that writing a chapter from K's point of view would be interesting as we don't often get to see what goes inside the gun-crazy American's head. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Touchmysoul on May 29, 2007
    Wow......

    I'm lost for words. I started crying too! I was listening to Elliot Yamin's 'Wait For You', and reading to this.

    My twins started crying too when they saw mommy cry of course ~.~

    ~Touchmysoul~
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  • From ANON - JSMC on May 29, 2007
    do an epilog the story is sooo good continue the good work
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  • From ANON - Tracy on May 29, 2007
    EEE! love it :o
    Do K's and Ryu's...do everybody's and then finally end it with one of those half sad, half happy endings...Those rock XD...
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  • From ANON - Ari-chan on May 29, 2007
    Yoh!
    This was good! it was hella good XD.
    Im Proud.
    i seriously feel bad for Shu.
    buht i wish someone else would kill Eiri, cuz its better that way XD
    yeaaaa.
    cuz i'm a meaner XD. and cuuz Eiri frigg`n deserves it >:3.
    yea.I'm a meaner XD. uhhhhhh. you should do one from Hiro's POV
    and then the last one just frm regular POV and smash everything XD.
    yeaaaaaaa. lol.
    for real tho. i like this ^_^
    good jobbers.
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  • From ANON - just my imagination on May 29, 2007
    (crying) Oh god that was so well written and depressing it made me hug my cat to my chest and cry
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 29, 2007
    that was an incredible read!
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  • From Skimbleshanks on May 29, 2007
    I shall keep this short and simple.
    Another chapter.
    Thank you.

    Changed my mind...
    Definitely another chapter needed, especially Eiri's point of view, with his reaction at the end when he's listening to Shuichi, it is just begging to be told. Clearly he is worried about Shuichi and his disappearance and I, as a reader, feel that Yuki's recollection of the events from their break up and leading up to Shuichi's phone call needs to be established.
    And perhaps, if you feel a muse (just an idea), you could look at a short chapter of another character's point of view from outside their relationship, for example Tohma, who would have witnessed Eiri's behaviour and of course Bad Luck. This kind of chapter would fit perfectly as a reflection during the wake after the funeral (that is if Shuichi has in fact died and isn't miraculously rescued somehow, teehee! Not that that's a bad thing HAH!), and seems a very Tohma thing to do! lol

    Well, I'll look forward to the next chapter!
    Luv ya work!
    Skimbleshanks!

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  • From ANON - Doomy on May 29, 2007
    OSHHHHH.

    I luff it. It's cute and heart-warming inna very morbid way. You should make more. Hell, I'll kick yer ass if you don't make more.

    BITTER SWEET ENDING YO. And they should meet with eachother. They'll most likely be in Hell where all the hot sexy gay men are anyway. And thus, they can screw eachother's brains out. :3
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  • From ANON - Allie on May 28, 2007
    I just wanted to let you know that I think you should you make a sequal to your story, This Is How It Ends.
    It was a great story by the way.
    Sincerely,
    Allie
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  • From ANON - JSMC on May 28, 2007
    u must continue with yuki's POV u must i demand it XD i know is ur decision but i really hope u do. u did a great job!!!! pls write anothr chappy Pls
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  • From ANON - Raven on May 28, 2007
    Though death fics are not my thing, I would very much like to see you write another chapter.


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