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By : Kikuko
  • From emlillyanne on July 27, 2007
    *whines* more? this is so cute!
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  • From ANON - yaoi_lover on July 16, 2007
    I do not like you......nasty person, leaving me a cliff hanger...*stomps off grumbling*
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  • From ANON - Lily on July 15, 2007
    *glomps* OMG I loves you! write more soon please?
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  • From Avocet on June 14, 2007
    It was quite good, you kept them in character pretty well, keep going I would like to see where you go with this story
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  • From squallstorm on June 01, 2007
    not bad for a first start XD I'll be watching for more

    your grammer's good, but there are no spaces between paragraphs. it makes it hard to read a fic when it's formated so close. I invite you to take a look at how my own fics are formated to see what I mean by clicking on my user name. It's always in your best intrest to make the story enjoyable for the reader (as opposed to hard to read), that way you encourage them to leave favorable reveiew

    kiki
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  • From cocoke5 on May 30, 2007
    very good start and can not wait for the next chapter of the story and see what happen next to them and do the older brother come back. up date soon.
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