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Reviews for A dance to remember

By : Clayton
  • From JdWheels on August 22, 2007
    hy did you not write them having sex? If you do it right, it would be very elegant and proper... and still hot as heck. Give it another try, rewrite this story, and inclued a very passionat, loving but supercharged scene. Try it... I think you just might pull it off.

    Your a good writer, don't be shy about getting a little dirty once in awhile.

    JD
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