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Reviews for Slow Burn

By : Jadewitch
  • From ANON - grimlock on August 03, 2007
    As of chapter 5, let me say, Wow. I'm loving the pasing tand the build up.
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  • From Nyrue on July 25, 2007
    This has been one of the best Witch Hunter Robin fics I've read. Please keep writing, your focus on detail is wonderful. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2007
    great update soon plz
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  • From ANON - Grrmeow on July 09, 2007
    OMG!! don't leave us on a cliffy!! WAHHHH!! I'm about to die! It had better be AMON or i'm going to bang my head repeatedly against my keyboard!! great job on the fanfic! I love the tension!! great great great job again!! and don't keep us waiting!! grr!
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  • From ANON - Monisse on July 08, 2007
    This story is absolutly beautiful in a naughty sence of it! :D
    I really like it, the sexual tension between them is a good "fire" for the story.
    I would like to read some new chapter!
    Good work!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 06, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Jadewitch on June 26, 2007
    Thanks for the nice reviews! I am working on another chapter, maybe two, hopefully it will be posted this weekend. I am really struggling with the writing of the lemon, I am trying to make it good and steamy but not too cliche, also while keeping everyone in character. It's slow going but I am making progress.

    kee- Thanks a lot. I do try to keep my grammar, spelling, etc as correct possible, I hate when people write fics and completely ignore the rules of the English language (although I make an exception for people who are not native English speakers). And don't worry, the lemon is coming in a few chapters- although I love dragging things out a bit- it builds anticipation for the main event!

    Alexis B- Thank you! I am happy you like the fic so far. I am trying to keep it as real and true to the characters as possible. I am not the cutesy, fluffy sweetness type either, although fluff is nice as long as it's well done and in small doses. There will be a fluffy-ish ending to this fic, but lemony too. Oh, and about bugging your hot room mate- I say, lucky you! At least you HAVE a hot room mate within easy reach! All I have is my overactive imagination.. lusting after cartoon men.. and Johnny Depp, mmmm.

    Megan and Midnight- don't worry, there will be more chapters. I am about 80% finished writing this, but I will finish it, and I have a couple other ideas for later. But those are stalled right now, I am hoping that publishing this one will help me with my writer's block.
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  • From Sixela999 on June 26, 2007
    Wow, this is a realy good read. You have romance without the lollypop koolaid kiddy fluff added that alot of people bring in. And the chapter five Robin ending was yummy.. as is the way you describe Amon...
    Excuse me must go bug Hot dark haired blue eyed room mate.. for some yummy thoughts.. this is YOUR Fult!
    Blessings,
    Alexis Bromad
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  • From ANON - kee on June 26, 2007
    Wow, this is one of the very few stories that has close to no grammatical errors. I am impressed!
    The story line is interesting too...I am waiting for that lemon you promised :)

    UST (Unresolved Sexual Tension) makes for good plot material.

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 20, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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