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Reviews for Syaoran

By : AurthorsDeath
  • From alanna214 on August 15, 2008
    Holy sh**! Awesome fic. There's just something about shota. ^_^' I can't wait until the next part is up. Thanks!
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  • From Weaver on July 28, 2008
    Yay, you updated this story too. I was wondering if this story was the forsaken one since you didn't update it at the same time as the rest. Haha. It's a very cute chapter! It's nice to have a change of pace and read a little fluff mixed into your smut. Hope you update soon! :D
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  • From ANON - Asuka on July 16, 2008
    I hope you're still continuing this one because i love the little war they have going on right now :)
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  • From HouseofDeValle on January 24, 2008
    Nine parts, though the chapters are short, but I do like the pairing. And, like Touya, I guess I'll have to live with what I've got, desperately pining for the next piece....
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  • From ANON - Cherry on July 06, 2007
    Oooh, thank goodness you allow non-member reviews.

    I love your story. You're right, there aren't many ToyaxShao fics here, and I'm welcoming this one warmly. So, I don't have much criticism to observe on my part, just the spelling once in a while.

    I like the way you describe things while they're happening. And I'm sure you can improve much more on being a writer.

    More power, hope you don't get writer's block. ^_^

    -Cherry
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  • From ANON - chibirisuchan on June 30, 2007
    This story is hot. I only started reading today and wasn't expecting Touya to be the mystery man
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  • From ANON - Sharae on June 28, 2007
    Loving the story so far...can't wait for the next part. I've been looking for this pairing everywhere and can't find any decent ones but this is one I will recommend to my other fan fic friends.
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  • From ANON - Chi-chan on June 23, 2007
    I'm pretty sure boys have hotpants... only they're made even hotter because they have an extra package of goodies in the front, lmao.

    And *observed* my ASS!! Er... actually, Syaoran's ass, but you get the point!! Poor Touya got left high and dry, it's so on now!! Bad Syao-kun!!

    And for the record... I hope to God almighty that they did NOT put that whipped cream back into the fridge...

    Lol, can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Chi-chan on June 20, 2007
    Touya's damn near irresistable!! He's one of the hottest bishies CLAMP has ever drawn so it makes sense that Syaoran wouldn't be able to resist!! That boy's just damn smexy, but now Syaoran's pissed cuz he gave in... so of course this war isn't over! Poor Touya doesn't know what he's getting into... I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Chi-chan on June 15, 2007
    Uh-oh... war? This means someone's getting PWNED!! I can't wait to see it!! Cuz Touya just seriously took it to Syaoran and dominated him!! I can't wait for chapter 5!!
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  • From ANON - Chi-chan on June 15, 2007
    Syaoran is a VERY dominatingg uke!! He left Touya hangin!! I mean blue balls and everything! And Sakura's so slick, she's such a hentai... but I don't blame her. Lol. Great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Chi-chan on June 15, 2007
    This was hot!! VERY hot. I knew it was Touya!! And Syaoran loves him... so that's very sweet. I love this so far!
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  • From ANON - Chi-chan on June 15, 2007
    I think the mysery guy is Touya... it just sounds like him to me... cuz I imagine him when I imagine dark eyes. I'm going to read chapter 2 and see if I'm right. But this fic is hot either way!
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  • From ANON - anonymous..? on June 12, 2007
    sdkhgslkg; i loove touyaxsyaoran. you're only like the second person to write this pairing [on aff]. this was reaaally good =D.
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