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Reviews for Ignited

By : ADarkness
  • From animekid on November 27, 2011
    I kinda wish this had a part two so I can see them have a bitch fight.

    That would had been cool.

    But I rarely see this pairing ever so this was something else.
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  • From PokemonPr0nPal3000 on April 10, 2011
    Wow...most of the stories here are kinda lame, but this one is really, really well written, and it's a pairing I don't even like that much. I loved getting into Paul's head and seeing the love triangle form there...and the sex scene was really well done, too. Tastefully written--none of the nonsense cliches writers usually put in, it was consistent and understood this is sex and not...whatever the hell most of the yaoi in this section is, and it really felt like your own style. Really nicely done!
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  • From ANON - Neon on February 08, 2011
    Hot damn! I don't usually review but this just needed some praise!

    I love how well developed all the characters are, and how messed up the relationships seem. Very well done!
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth on January 18, 2011
    Awwwwww, poor dejected Paul.......-hugs Paul- this is so sad................Though it has some super hot parts too : ) It makes me wanna cry and read more.........write more Pweeezzz??? : )))
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  • From ANON - Jupiter on April 22, 2009
    Possessive Gary is awesome. Story was great, but I got confused when the italics stopped lol
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  • From HouseofDeValle on July 29, 2008
    Aaah...well done. A curious pairing, but well written. I can't help but think that it works perfectly as a one-shot, but could easily be expanded into a series of length. Paul fighting his apparent uphill battle for Ash's affections, in his studious, difficult way, and Gary secure that he has Ash wrapped around his finger. And I would be most curious to know just where Ash's perspective on the matters lies.
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  • From ANON - Brandy on July 03, 2008
    There aren't many fics out there like these. I really do love Paul/Ash, and would like to see more

    do you have an email, or is there any way I can contact you?
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  • From Kalberry on April 30, 2008
    Man, I just can't get enough of this fic!!

    You did such a AWESOME job on it!!

    If you can, please continue!! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Kalberry on April 30, 2008
    This was GREAT!!
    You should DEFIENTLY continue!!
    This ruled!!

    There should be a all out battle for Ash's love between Gary and Paul!!

    That would be SWEET!!! ^__^
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  • From ANON - Yuutousei on July 13, 2007
    Wow...
    I'm glad there's someone else out there who thinks that Paul's only being that mean to Ash because he likes him. He he he. Yay for uke!Ash, because you really can't have him any other way.

    Thanks for such a great story :3 Hopefully, you'll be writing more soon!

    ~Yuu-chan
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  • From Udyjay on July 03, 2007
    OHMYGOD. I absolutely loved this. Really. It was so fucking well written, the way Paul thinks, and every little thing he does blows me away with how real it is. ;w; That was amazing, seriously. XD I love Gary in this fic, too. He's such a jerk, but his character is so.. him. When Ash called Gary's name, my mouth DROPPED. I was like, "...No. Way." That got me angry, but at the same time it made me happy because it makes the plot of this story ten times more powerful. Good job. TTwTT
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  • From RaccoonOfBlue on June 16, 2007
    Simply awesome. Can't be described better, simply awesome. And that's REALLY rare ...
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  • From theyaoimistress on June 14, 2007
    OMG!! that was awesome!, the feeling, the passion, the lust, the pain, the love, and the sex. your left me spokeless, and i think i love you. please keep writting!

    see you
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