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Reviews for Liek, use thundershock okay

By : Stormborn Apostle

From ANON - Okay... on September 25, 2007
Slash...I believe you have to make another fic where Ash gets owned...and here's why. I just happened to turn on the TV a bit ago, and Pokemon was on. Bored out of my mind, i watched it anyway. Ash was battling some other trainer, I dunno who, but whatever. The other guy decides to use his Elekid. So who does Ash choose? Not his Turtwig, who has a type advantage, but his PIKACHU. Dumbass. Then, as soon as the battle starts, he makes Pikachu THUNDERSHOCK THE ELEKID. I turned off the TV right then, and now I'm typing this. So yes, please make another story where Ash gets completely fucked up. He deserves it.

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From Stormborn Apostle on September 22, 2007
I'd feel more sorry for Ash if he never used electricity on a ground type ever again.

BUT NOOOO, THAT LITTLE DIPSHIT KEEPS PUSHING MY BUTTONS, GAWD

I can't watch Cartoon Network anymore, because every time I flip to it there's some five-hour marathon of this crap. The only good thing about the anime was the original theme song, and that's it.

If I find out that Ash does ONE more stupid thing, there WILL be a sequel involving him swimming with some Wailords or something.
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From ANON - inufreak02 on September 22, 2007
*giggles insanely* OH my god that was fucking hilarious... although you gotta feel sorry for ash mucha hurt like a bitch.
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From Stormborn Apostle on August 20, 2007
Imasuky Lomae---If Ash actually lost to a Magikarp, he needs to be raped by a Gyarados.

FluffyLover---He raped Pikachu because he loves him. THE WRONG WAY. :-(

foek---Glad you enjoyed! I love the franchise, but I DESPISE the anime. Even for dubbed anime, it sucks balls, and THAT is saying something.

Zeroh---I ♥ the Clock Crew. My flash style is derived from the Barney Bunch, which was derived from Pube Muppet, which was derived from the Clock Crew. XD Also, Missingno has a huge cock...hmmm

Bard---Slash is always UP for pleasing his fans.

Angel---Heh, yes, I know. Sometimes I get angry messages/e-mails about this, along the lines of HOW DARE YOU DO THIS TO POKEMON IT IS AWESOME...they don't notice my serious Pokemon romance on my profile, heh.

Slash at two badges is already more cunning than Ash will ever be. :-D

If there are Brock/Ash fans who get off on this...well then, I salute their unique tastes. XD

The title is in internet style, hence how it's intentionally spelled exactly as "Liek, use thundershock okay". It also fits with Ash's intelligence.

REMINDER: The next chapter of Sinners is underway (2900 words and rising)! Keep an eye out for it! :-D
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From ANON - Angel on August 20, 2007
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Oh my....I really don't know what to say about this one-shot....except why the HELL didn't I read it sooner!? Seriously. I feel for Pikachu. That poor electric (raped) rodent. This definitely helps create a solid one-two punch for your account here.

On the one hand: Sinners. I dark yet romance filled story between a trainer and his darling Kirlia (who could probably outsmart any person on the actual Pokemon show).

And on the other hand: Liek, use thundershock okay. A completely hardcore, humourous as Hell, oneshot depicting Ash as the electric-rat raping, dunderhead that he truly is. Plus Onix hentai.

My god. Brock sure took the initiative in this one. I'm sure you must have given at least a few Brock/Ash fans here a hard-on with it.

Either way, funny funny work. Again, I bow to your amazing creativeness. (By-the-way, is the title supposed to sound like something a bleached blonde valley girl would say when read aloud? Sorry if its a stupid question. My mind tends to freeze on me whenever I'm hungry).
Take care.
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From ANON - Bard on July 16, 2007
I.

FUCKING.

LOVE.

YOU.

seckz now plz.
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From Zeroh on July 13, 2007
Hah! Newgrounds, where fads go to die... (that explains why "End" was spelt "EDN") Clock Crew much? XD
I'm with Lomae, catching pokemon in Blue/Red was pretty easy but dratini was a friggin whore. And scyther too, for that matter. Missingno should be registered as a glitch-type pokemon, a dark/psy/ghost with wonderguard ability XD I can imagine it now. (hell, i'll throw it in one of my chapters as homage Lmao.)

Id no: WTF!?
Name: Missingno
Species: Glitch
Type: Psy/Dark/Ghost/Ownyou
Ability: Wonderguard

A mysterious creature with an ever-changing shape said to appear at the shores of Cinnabar island, it posseses unique abilities: One is to strengthen any pokemon around it to a ridiculous degree, and the other is to duplicate items to an exponential amount. Experts and bewildered trainers alike agree upon the theroy, that both these techniques are acheived through the distortion of time and space, while some still say it has the power to bend -and maybe even distort- reality itself. Approach with extreme caution.

Wait-what?? Magikarp beating ash -- wait Did I read that right!?
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From ANON - foek on July 12, 2007
you sir, are pure genius (or hilarity! i can't decide which)
reading that made me all nostalgic. i'm such an old pokemon fan and i had a love/hate relationship with the show and the first episodes and all the rest (well mainly hate - i hated how ash used an electric attack/thundershock for EVERY fucking battle ever)

still love the games through, and this story. your writing is A++ too - very legible and fun to read
yay

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From Bishonen on July 11, 2007
I cant belive you guys had such a hard time with Tauros i was liek ash in the anime i could catch about thirtiy with no effort what so ever it was everything else that never wanted to apper Dratini was the hardest and i so wanted one becasue I love Dragonair if you wanted to do a story anot Misty and a Dragonair i'd like it more than ash getting raped by anything

With Love; Imasuky Lomae
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From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2007
Hmmm Slash is developing a giant snake fetish....Heh that idea could work , but I don't know why Ash would be raping a magikarp in the first place , with all the "I-love-pokemon-lets-be-friends-with-everyone" attitude....But he raped pikachu....Hm maybe the rodent is an exception.

LOL Ash got beaten by a magikarp?!? Lol the anime is getting even more ridiculous...Ash must be raped again .

Hm I only found missingnos in my blue version ... I din't know that you could find safari zone pokes! T_T!!! That FUCKING TAUROS IS A FUCKING BITCH he is so rare to find and almost always flees in the first turn! Same goes for chansey , but you could buy one on game corner IIRC...Or was it scyther?

My counsin had a Red version ... He found a level 196 snorlax once using that method. He caught a missingno before , with Fly/water gun/water gun ...He came to my house to show me how it was "strong" , could beat the almighty elite 4 alone...His file got erased a few days after ^^

That reminds me of the nooby movesets that I used to have ...My first venusaur had swords dance/razorleaf/reflect/solarbeam. Swords dance to power up razor leaf ( lol . well it could work now since razor leaf is now physical , but back on RBY it was special) , reflect to reduce the damage done with fire blast by my cousin's Gyarados...Lol.
I used to love Arcanine and my cousin loved Charizard. I was so pissed because charizard could learn earthquake , so it had an advantage over arcanine ....Then on Gold/silver I found out that my arcanine had a HP eletric ! It wasn't strong enough , but it was a start ... Later on I got my first gameshark ( my cousin didn't know what the fuck a gameshark was), hacked thunder on it and said : "Well Hidden power evolved to thunder!" ...Ahh good times.

Well , I hope that you update Sinners soon!
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From Bishonen on July 10, 2007
Yep the magikarp beat ash big time he used thunder bolt and the magikarp jumped out of the way and tackled he tried to counter with iron tail but still pikachu was hit hard

With Love; Imasuky Lomae
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From Stormborn Apostle on July 10, 2007
LOL you're kidding right?

Not even Ash could lose to a Magikarp!

...right?

***story idea*** Ash starts raping a Magikarp, and then, during teh raping, it evolves into Gyarados AND THE TABLES SUDDENLY TURN. O_O

Hm...I can use that...
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From Bishonen on July 10, 2007
In the newest episode of pokemon the Magikarp salesman sold team rocket a fake evolution machine and there was a group called the B button league who don�t evolve any pokemon ever and they had a mage strong Magikarp and Febass and Ash�s Pikachu the shit beaten out of it by the Magikarp
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From Stormborn Apostle on July 09, 2007
FluffyLover---Heh, glad you enjoyed. It was sure as hell fun to write.

I was wandering the house earlier, and saw a snippet of the anime on television. Gary lectures Ash in his little whiny voice "you know, there are certain types of Pokemon that resist Gym Leader's attacks".

I don't know what's worse, the fact that Ash hadn't known this fact...or the fact that THE EPISODE TAKES PLACE AFTER ASH HAS EIGHT BADGES.

Fucking fuck...

Heh, good to know there are other bums out there like me. Life is too dull to entertain me...

Missingno. was fucking hardcore. Back in the days before I had a Game Genie/Game Shark, getting 255 of things like one-off TM's and Master Balls damn near made me cream myself. Hell, that whole strip of land rocked...the make-Safari-Zone-Pokemon-appear-there trick ruled as well (fuck you Tauros, fuck you)...

No, I'm not a /b/rother...I'm a Newgrounder. We're where shitty internet fads go to die, lol.

I understand you just fine. I'm not exactly super-good with English myself (and it's my first language), especially speaking it. I'm much better at writing than speaking...

Anon-person: I am glad you got teh lulz from this piece.

SECRET NEWS FOR PEOPLE WHO READ/MAKE REVIEWS ON THIS PIECE: SINNERS UPDATE IMMINENT
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From ANON - <3 on July 09, 2007
Zomg. I love you sooooo much for this! It brought the lulz so good.
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