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Reviews for Liek, use thundershock okay

By : Stormborn Apostle
  • From ANON - Parodox on May 29, 2012
    I have never laughed my way into a full erection before today. Good job.
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  • From Sushifish on May 09, 2010
    Ahh, satire; a balm for the soul of anyone who's watched one or more seasons of Pokemon. You're a genius for your clever use of satire to drive home the fact that Ash is the worst character ever created.

    And to address the complainers out there: they're too stupid to understand true literary genuis. Please ignore them and continue to write whatever the hell you want.

    P.S.: this is reminicient of Jonathon Swift's A Modest Proposal... That's pretty much the epitome of good satire and is the highest praise I can bestow upon you.

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  • From ANON - lolol!!!1eleventyone1 on June 23, 2009
    Pure genius, I loled at so many times.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 28, 2008
    yay
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  • From ANON - Ashi Taiyono on July 26, 2008
    Heh...wrote my first review without reading the other comments first. Stupid me. @_
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  • From ANON - Ashi Taiyono on July 26, 2008
    ZOMG!!!!! Y'know, I could call you a sadist, a pervert, and many other things, but I can't and I won't, because that was just too freakin' hilarious!!!!! You made me an official fan of your works with your "Sinners" arc, but this just cemented that fandom. Anyone that can abuse Ash so well while pointing out his...*ahem*...shortcomings earns a few gold stars in my book.

    And my new favorite line (and the one that proves I'm a Pokemon geek, as I can't ever say it without laughing)..."While we're at it, let's earthquake a Pidgey!"

    Thanks, Slash, for being such a good writer and a hilarous sadist!
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on May 26, 2008
    Zaros---Yep.

    StarJedi555---All storytelling, whether written or televised or whatever, comes down to a simple game of "Can You?". Can you get a character through a certain situation and have the solution be both realistic and believable? If I paint one of my characters into a corner, I will kill them, regardless of who they are. The Pokemon anime dorks just make it so "PIKACHU DOES SOMETHING AMAZING JUST IN TIME" or "TEAM ROCKET'S ROBOT BLOWS UP FOR SOME REASON" or "THIS TIME, THUNDERSHOCK WORKS!". Deus ex machina bullshit.

    Vyers---I will go to the grave stating that Ash's Pikachu does not know Volt Tackle. It just uses a combination of Quick Attack and Thundershock to fake it. In Sinners, this falsification of records is one of the reasons Ash is in prison.

    Cerebrate Fate---Also, Onix must return sometime.

    ...after evolving.
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  • From ANON - Cerebrate Fate on May 26, 2008
    Just thought I might add, Go ahead and bring in the wailord. I think he deserves it.
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  • From ANON - Cerebrate Fate on May 26, 2008
    Finally got around to reading this, and I laughed my fucking ass off. Multiple times. While I was rolling on the floor, pissing myself because I was laughing so hard. Great job Slash. NEARLY makes up for that huge fucking cliffhanger you just pulled on chapter 22 of sinners. God I hate cliffhangers.
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  • From ANON - Zaros on April 23, 2008
    I--I don't know what to say.

    Fucking LOL.

    FUCKING LOL x 50.



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  • From Stormborn Apostle on March 30, 2008
    SeaB---I have found that many people who are not normally fans of yaoi have enjoyed Ash getting brutally sodomized, heheh. He just fucking has it coming.

    In his ass.
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  • From Apoc326 on March 19, 2008
    Wow. Just wow. Ash finally got what every naive character deserves.
    Not normally a fan of mal-on-male, I make an acception and applaud this.
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  • From Stormborn Apostle on March 17, 2008
    Anon man---A lot of people see Sinners and assume that I'm a very serious, methodical writer. That's not necessarily true, heh. While I do take my serious works seriously, I'm also a crazy son of a bitch with a rather twisted sense of humor, and this is an example of what happens when it's unleashed. :-D

    ShadowInTheDark---Oh, Ash's stupidity comes up in the show...it's just that everyone ignores it. Of course, everyone in the anime seems to be a lot more idiotic than their video game counterparts, but Ash is sooo much worse...
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  • From ANON - ShadowInTheDark on March 15, 2008
    Woah...
    A new read to me...
    Brutality, Feirce Oral, Rape, Bindage...
    Sigh...
    Too bad...
    Ash's stupidity doesnt come up much in the show...
    But trust me, after reading this, I know it's there.
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  • From ANON - Anon man on January 19, 2008
    While in sharp contrast to your other story, Sinners, this was possibly the funniest thing I have ever read. I do look forward to the sequel, as I'm sure that will be just as funny. Keep up the good work. :D

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