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Reviews for Wolfram's Bruise

By : Chocho
  • From ANON - Rale on July 28, 2008
    WOoh! Thank you for adding two new chapters! I was definitely happy when I checked back and found not one but two new installments to read. Your references are really great and nifty. I like the unique elements like your "". XD Ooh and a hand-fasting. That sounds a little familiar. I think I read somewhere that the author of Wraeththu is hand-fasted to someone. XD
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  • From MikiyuSado on July 25, 2008
    First I would like to say that I thoroughly enjoy reading this story. I balked in the middle when you started crossing it with other anime/manga. But I must say you skillfully handled it. It was easy to see those three different stories all co-existing....you know what I mean.

    In this chapter though, there were a few things that bothered me when Shuichi was talking with Yuri. He did make a very compelling argument. However; homosexuality is not viewed in the same way in Japan as it is here in the Westerm Hemisphere, there is some discrimination, yes, but not nearly as much as here. With only 1% of Japan's population professing to be Christian, I doubt that gay people really have to deal with that type of harrassment. Being homosexual isn't really considered 'morally wrong'. When Western culture invaded in the 1800's, homophobia was one of the things introduced, but for most homophobes in modern Japan, it's not so much because homosexuality is a sin, as it's just one of those things people were raised to dissaprove of without really knowing why. Also, for the vast majority of Japan's celebrities, being gay, or pretending to be gay, actually generally boosts popularity.

    Though for the sake of your story, and the way it's been flowing, the way you wrote it fits fine. It's really not a big issue, it just bugged me a little.

    Anywho....keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. =]
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  • From ANON - dawn on July 19, 2008
    I am so glad you kept up with this or came back to it i thought it had been abandoned thanks for sharing
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  • From dela1 on July 18, 2008
    i CANT WAIT FOR THE WEDDING
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  • From dela1 on July 07, 2008
    OH WOLF IS HAVING A BABY CANT WAIT FOR NEXT PART
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  • From ANON - Rale on June 25, 2008
    Suhweeet! This story is so cute! Nicely written; I love the imagery! Great use of words too! I can't wait to read the rest! Please continue soon if you can! XD
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  • From FriendlyFangirl88 on April 05, 2008
    LOL.
    great little ficlet. Poor Wolfram...but, really, why didn't he think of a simple little solution called a "scarf"? LOL.
    and Wolfram's description of what Gwendel would do to Yuuri...LOL. What's funny is, I can see the expression on Gwendel's face that can be exaggerated into that action. LOL.
    Loved it.
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  • From vampslyr on July 21, 2007
    At first from the title I was worried that someone was going to get the wrong idea and think Yuri was abusing Wolfram. Then I was wondering if there was going to be some strange cultural meaning behind the hicky, but over-protective big brothers makes more sense. Though they *have* been sleeping in the same bed for quite a while, so you'd think it wouldn't be a big deal in their culture. Very hot sex scene at the begining.
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  • From Niffty24 on July 15, 2007
    This was to cute ^^
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  • From willar19 on July 10, 2007
    okay i will admit, that was pretty damn cool. awesome job, but seeing as you own all the volumes that are out so far, im betting that helped alot with the details. lol. you should totally do a sequel. :) :)
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  • From animefreak03 on July 09, 2007
    i'm so glad to see you writting in this section. I'm a devout follower of your Gravitation Stories, they are so well written and presented to us the readers. This one piece was so cute that i'm dying to have more. Like in your story 'Becaus of You', I would love to see a complex story develop here. Have the couple have some kind of small drama and many many naughty encounters. I wish i could finish my story =0)...Great work.
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  • From Pane on July 06, 2007
    That was wonderful! I love this one-shot you write so well it was like watching a movie! You Rock!
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  • From dawnmm on July 04, 2007
    this was cute-i thoroughly enjoyed it and i like greta too so thank you for including her.
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  • From Skimbleshanks on July 03, 2007
    Sequel, please!
    With Conrad breaking the news to Gwendal amongst things...PLEASE!
    Although there is always one way to neutralise the deflowering of one member of a gay couple...deflower the other...cough cough...
    Hehehe
    Arigato!
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