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Reviews for Protect Me Forever

By : absoluteecstasy
  • From ANON - Min Farshaw on December 28, 2007
    What a coincidence , my area code is 905 haha...loving you're story, i love Shuichi he's just too cute
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  • From ANON - mystice on September 05, 2007
    lucky shu, lots of people love and care for him (particularly TWO drop dead gorgeous guys). Don't get me wrong, i love the previous chapter too, yuki and shu's scene was way way too hot! in this chapter, i liked the scene where yuki and ryu met at tohma's. their rivalry is palpable. So, who's gonna get to shu first? can't wait for the next chapter..!
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  • From mamarita on September 04, 2007
    Chapter 8 is a great way to progress. I don't know why Tohma didn't think of hacking into the financial records of the whorehouse to get info. K should have been able to do that for him. Interesting, and yes, I did notice that Ryu hadn't been on Shuichi's mind much, but he had always been more fond of Eiri all along. And being "sold" to the highest bidder for your 1st time in a whorehouse, is the proper expression, so don't beat yourself up over that expression. Remember, each time Shuichi was with a client, he was being sold, on a time basis, now he was sold outright. Now- onto the rest of the story.. this is getting really good! Thanks
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  • From ANON - kUmAgoRo-BeAm on September 04, 2007
    please oh please oh please update soon!!!!! im really loving this story!!
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  • From ANON - Anyanka on September 03, 2007
    oh I'm sooooo relieved that you aren't going to leave the story without finishing it!! dunno why but lately everybody is abandoning their fics and that drives me crazy lol can't wait for the next chappie, totally love the story!!! u wouldn't believe how glad I was when I arrived home from my holidays and found the new chapters^^. Anyanka
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  • From ANON - Nekosune on August 19, 2007
    ^_^ I really loved that! Total awsomeness! ^_^ Cookies and pocky for you, and yamyams if you update soon. ^_^ Can't wait to find out what happens next!
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  • From yodenisvenom on August 18, 2007
    priceless? yes!
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  • From mamarita on August 11, 2007
    Just finished through chapter 7, and you wrote the hottest scene I have ever read. I like that K didn't try anything with Shuichi, afterall. Thanks for not taking my suggestion. As for Rage getting him, I am crying. Now it's going to be an all out manhunt to retrieve Shuichi. Just remember that Tohma is supposed to be one of the richest men around, so buying him back may not be that difficult for him.
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  • From yodenisvenom on August 02, 2007
    *smile* I meant the story's waaay shorter than what I felt like reading ;) wasn't actually complaining, so please don't pout at me...*puppy eyes* hope you're not mad at me...
    And yes, I love the new chapter...Can K get to sleep with Shuichi? Please? I know it doesn't fit the story, so don't mind me, I just like K...
    Hm...seems like i just can't write a decent review today...sorry
    *eagerly waiting for a new chapter*

    Dennis
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  • From Stacy on July 30, 2007
    your being gay should have no bearing when it comes to reading or reviewing your awesome story!! that jerk who called you a bad name is just some wacked out, no talent hack who's more then likly envious of your superior writing ability!!

    now that i got that out of the way......

    your rating system is a good idea but, i can't remember what i'm going to rate.
    so i will just guess.....
    story: 5+
    plot: 5+
    i can't remember what else!!!SORRY!

    all i know is that i love this story and will check back every day for updates!!

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  • From yodenisvenom on July 30, 2007
    *smile* No, you do not take anonymous replies...see? I had to register just because you sounded like you wouldn't mind one more reply ;)
    Now, on a more...serious (if I can ever be called that) note, I'll give it a 5.
    *mutters about writers who don't accept ratings only*
    Ahem...(feels weird to have people read my comment...)a.characters--Well, they're amazingly 'in-character',so to say; although the setting is obviously different, they remain the same adorable guys. I'm pretty sure I would've guessed who they are even without names, and that's a definite plus on my list
    b.storyline--If I say it got me hooked, is it considered a comment? Flowing, that must be the word...(I hope)
    c.summary--Oops, i didn't read it careful enough...*goes to read* (decided against going to read) I remember saying something about Shuichi getting in a brothel and fisting...Other than that, i'm not sure (now goes to read it)
    d.spelling and grammar--No mistakes that I could notice...(is English you native language?)
    e.writing style--No way! My teacher of English always comments on that, so I'll leave it uncommented (*shudder* would hate to associate her with this fic...)
    f.*cough* Good enough? Well...how about fantastic? Oh, and certain author notes got me to read them over again... (was about to ask something, but I'd rather not blush madly upon finding the answer at the beginning of the next chapter...)
    g.overall story--Way too short *as in:'*puppy eyes* please write more'*. But that's hardly a comment

    Hm...highly incoherent comment, I assume...Even if I did try...
    Hope you'll get some decent comments as well, not just my excuse of a review...
    *smile* denis
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  • From mamarita on July 16, 2007
    Through chapter 4, and it's great. Ok. so Ryu is a customer and not one of the guys there, but still, it's wonderful. Now. K should come in, as a customer and take Shu out- but not necessarily to return him to Tohma. Why not let him act like a customer That part makes sense, but while he has Shu, have our two jaded heroes go back and try and find Shu.. Maybe have K actually kidnap Shuichi from the brothel, and hold him for ransom, that way the 3 others can somehow come to his rescue. You wanted ideas... I'll be waiting.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 09, 2007
    i hope that tohma finds shu-chan.

    shu-chan seems like he likes being a whore...

    ASOTA
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  • From Stacy on July 05, 2007
    hi!
    i could not remember if i reviewed for chapter 3 so, i'll just make a new one.
    just out of curiosity....will ryu have a temper? if memory serves, shu called out yuki name twice!
    and will taki make another appearance?
    in case i don't say it enough....
    **this story rocks**
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  • From mamarita on July 04, 2007
    great start. Why not have Tats and Sakano in the brothel as well, working. K and Ryu can always be customers or K and Ryu can be undercover working for Tohma to get Shuichi back, while Eiri figures out what is going on and how HE is going to save Shuichi from that place.
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