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Reviews for PokeGirls: Lucid Method

By : DizzyRye
  • From Zanzenmaru on October 25, 2007
    >.< Its a good story with great characters n plot twisties, would hate to see this fic go. Plz keep updating ^^
    Hope to see more in the future.
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  • From daveb on October 19, 2007
    Great story and concept, though wouldn't it be great if all the characters met up?
    The Sakuya chapters are some of the best. Please keep updating.

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  • From shadowserpentdragon on October 17, 2007
    dude this is an amazing story please don't stop updating it would be a great lose if this story didnt get updated any more. I personally cant wait to see what happens between the two sisters, and what happens between Arden and tito. what ever you do please dont stop this story it's just to great not to mention one of the best pokegirl stories i have ever read. i beg you as a huge fan of this story please keep going.
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  • From UnholyJustice on October 03, 2007
    Hey thanks for listening to my review!! The story flows much nicer now that you have a separate chapter devoted to each character. Rather than just small parts of a lemon you can write a whole story for each character. Until/If they meet up and the story fuses into one.

    Much better read thanks!

    Hope the next chapter comes out soon!
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  • From Roctek on August 19, 2007
    Wow, that was pretty hot. I saw most of the similarities to real pokemon, such as ditto, but what pokemon was T-elos based off of? Is she an original one? Just curious. I'd love to see this story updated, so keep it up!

    ~Sy
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  • From UnholyJustice on August 14, 2007
    Hey since you havn't updated the story in a while I decided to drop a review, in hopes it will lead to another chapter.

    I found the jumping between characters pretty annoying. I would grow attached to onces story line and be sad when it would suddenly end. I suggest making a whole chapter based on one character at a time. So you write more around the once character without the confusing jumping.

    So far the story seems pretty cool, I personally love the pokegirls idea. And wish there were more stories out there about them. There are a few but their authors are long gone and the stories lay unedited.

    So please write more I like the story, ignoring the annoying jumping between characters.

    Sincerely,
    Daemon
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  • From Garand on July 09, 2007
    Nice story so far. If I was you, I would put a space between paragraphs, and maybe work a little on the format. Other than that, it's off to a good start.
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