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Reviews for PokeGirls: Lucid Method

By : DizzyRye
  • From kuramasgirl on October 18, 2010
    cant wait to read more please update soon.
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  • From daveb on September 30, 2009
    Super Hot. Please continue, or just continue Sakura's and forget the others if you can't take the workload. Sakura is the hottest.
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  • From joseph33759 on January 08, 2009
    I hope you update soon I like reading this story
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  • From reverie on November 08, 2008
    i really like this story, please update soon, (bows) please and thank you
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  • From reverie on October 01, 2008
    you should write more, this is a good story
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 13, 2008
    I'm reviewing so keep going!!! This is the first time I've read this story so I like the way that you've split it up between the characters. It prevents the reader, in my opinion, from getting to used to a certain character. Change is good! I'm excited about coming installments.

    -Zerockas
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  • From bstbowler on February 10, 2008
    this is one of the best stories i hav seen on this sight. especially since it is one of the few that has good yuri. keep up the excellent work.
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  • From RyuKnight on February 04, 2008
    good job keep it up. I like arden's part alot
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  • From HartCarter on February 03, 2008
    i forgot to say KEEP UPDATING OR DIE SLOWLY AND PAINFULLY AS I TIE YOU TO A STONE TABLE WITH A PENTAGRAM AND TAKE OUT YOUR EYES WITH A RUSTY SPOON AND GIVE YOU THOUSANDS OF SMALL CUTS WHILE I SLOWLY BURN YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • From HartCarter on February 03, 2008
    1.)dude ur name is freaking awesome
    2.)this is one of the best fics ive ever read ive read at least 200,000 fics this is in my top 20 you have great potential


    make that gin kid die hes WAY too stuck up :D
    however your the writer do as you wish
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  • From HieioftheDarkness on January 04, 2008
    Hey, I personally would like to say I love your stories. I especially like how your going through three different perspectives of the three different trainers. For example, Gin is caring but thinks of his PokeGirl's best interests. Sakuya(sp?) is shy but submissive as a trainer and Arden is generous and caring but still has respect, even if too much, for his PokeGirls. I'd just like to say, keep up the writing but if you would do me a favor, an Eevee version would draw me in more. It's my favorite pokemon and I think it might draw some attention to your story since Eevee is a well known pokemon and theres only like three other stories with it in this forum. But anyways, keep up the good work and good luck. Dont get writers block like I get which prevents me from finishing my unposted stories.

    P.S. Here is a picture of a Eevee in girl form if you need it. Kinda screwed up but should work good enough. Don't need to put one in if your against it but I'm trying to be persuasive. http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b397/hievi/eve-1.jpg
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  • From lupin333 on December 29, 2007
    Really great story. At the beginning it seemed a regular fanfic but as I advanced on the chapters I found it to be very original and well built. The characters have deep and developed personalities. It is visible that the author worked hard to evolve the story. I love the way you cycle among 3 separate characters that walk in the same world yet react to it in completely diferent ways. I believe he intends to join them sometime in the future but eh, one can only guess.

    I ask the author to don't let this story go to waste. I believe he can make much more great chapters. He's a great writer.


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  • From Zanzenmaru on December 15, 2007
    .....This is a nice story....Plz continue updating. XD Plus, it has a good plot, characters that are actually fleshed out not like cardboard cuttings and a sense of promise, plotwise. o.o

    Nice chapter. The story continues. I guess all parties are going to meet up with each other but dont see it happening anytime soon.

    o.0 ? Is Sakuya thresholding ?

    Nice story, plz add mmmmoooorrreeeeee......
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  • From MufaZu on December 13, 2007
    Yoush. Good stuff. I'm curious as to how long you planned this to be, seeing as you are telling three or four different stories at once. I'd love to see more.
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  • From DizzyRye on December 13, 2007
    Okay, for the very few people who seemed to read this, I've got good news and bad news. The good news is, I have more chapters I'll be adding over the next few days. The bad news is, once those chapters are put up, I will no longer be updating this story. Instead, I'll be rewriting it, changing it to a greater or lesser degree. As well, I shall simultaneously be posting it at another site, www.pokegirl.org
    This is where you all come in. I don't really get many reviews of any of my stories on any site, so I'll be making it into a contest. For the new version, whichever site's copy gets more reviews, they will get the next chapter a bit earlier than the other site. (Yeah, yeah, not all that fair, plus rather audacious of me, but what can I say, I want, no, need, more reviews.)

    And as for the question about T-elos? I am drawing upon the multitude of different pokegirls in the official Pokedex at pokegirl.org, she's a Zeromer. Not based on a PokeMon at all. But I didn't make her.

    Okay, next trio of chapters being posted now!
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