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Reviews for Heartbreaker

By : antilogicgirl
  • From Robyn on July 18, 2007
    Oh, and I have now read the Hakkai/Sanzo moment like...three or four times. *shivers again*

    That is a wonderfully well written moment.
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  • From Robyn on July 18, 2007
    Okay...THAT was NOT the way I was hoping Sanzo would get over his 'Gojyo is now a woman' faze. GAH! What was he thinking! Oh, yeah, burbon. :P You wrote that part amazingly well, by the way, even if it DID manage to make me hate Sanzo (for a little while at least). That head butt Gojyo used...that move ROCKED!

    OMG....*shivers* Hakkai...Sanzo, you are in for the shit now.
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  • From vampslyr on July 18, 2007
    Oh yeah, definitely love Hakkai's reaction. He *became* a demon due to actions taken in rage after Kannon was stolen from him and raped. He will *not* take kindly to someone forcing themselves on a woman. I'm kind of surprised that Gojyo hasn't explored his body at all. Is he afraid of the new sensations? Or that he'll awaken a thirst for sex that he won't be able to easily quench? Sounds like he was repressing a desire for men back when he was still male. Glad I could make you giggle.
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  • From fangirlqueen on July 17, 2007
    sorry about the kougaji jien mix up its just the last part of their names (well jiens after he changed it) seems so alike and i really didint give it much thought beacuse this story rocks! Pissed off hakkai is hot! ^_^ i wonder if he takes sanzo to a battered womens shelter or something to see what happens after a woman is raped. Maybe he should smack sanzo....PLEASE LET HIM SMACK SANZO!
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  • From ANON - Darkephoenix on July 17, 2007
    Interesting chapter. Can't wait to see if there's anything left of Sanzo after Hakkai finishes with him. You have excellent taste in music by the way.
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  • From Dragon7 on July 17, 2007
    Grate chapter!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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  • From vampslyr on July 17, 2007
    I like how Goku's treating Gojyo and how their dynamic shifted. Now that they're not two males testing each other for pack dominance, they can relax between their friendly sparring routines. If Kougaiji does try to take advantage of Gojyo, I think he'd better hope that Douku never finds out or he'll beat his head in. I don't think Kougaiji would force her though, more do his best to seduce her. That'd be funny, seeing Gojyo on the receiving end of a suave lady's man. I'm guessing from your final comment that you're thinking about delving into the sadistic trope of menstruation. As terribly fun as that would be, it's my understanding that the half-breed children are sterile, so there'd be no reason for Gojyo's body to go through menstruation. Unless of course that was part of the nature of the curse. Effectively 'You shall live as a woman and know all of the pain and suffering of being female.' Thanks for the update, can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Darkephoenix on July 15, 2007
    Yes, this is turning out to be highly entertaining. Can't wait to see what the three aspects say about this one. Not to mention the (not so) merciful goddess is probably rolling in the lotus blossoms laughing hir ass off.
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  • From Robyn on July 15, 2007
    You handled the balance thing very well. :) I was going to mention that with the couple of inches of height difference, she might have problems adjusting to her weapon, but it looks like the sparring practices she's gotten in have worked wonders in that department, *winks* The weapon she uses requires finesse to begin with, I am happy to see you've converted that one step further. I adore the idea of the fighting techniques becoming almost 'dance' in her repertoire.

    Hmmmm, Sanzo's reactions bug me. The fact he can't seem to treat the kappa like the kappa isn't doing either of them any favors. He's going to have to get over that, quickly. This small fight may have helped put Goyjo back into Sanzo's mental list of 'fighter'. I can only hope.

    Goyjo is going to be slightly more flexable, being less muscle bound than her old body.

    Let's see, what else. hahahahaha, Hakkai suggesting a lacy bra to Gojyo. LOL. She's going to have to get some sports bras. :P Lace isn't going to work for long. *winks*

    Oh, Kougaji. Now that's one interesting twist. *smirks*

    Hmmm, speaking of, how are Lierin and Yaone going to react? Or would they even care? Is this going to make a difference in the fights and whom pairs up against whom? I can see Kougaji trying to pair up with Gojyo now, but Goku telling him hell no. :P
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  • From fangirlqueen on July 15, 2007
    Kinda weird that Goyjo's own brother seemed to have the hots for him. he's always nice and protective of goyjo so its just ewww. also i like playing with guy's hair to...it's the epitome of girly things to do lol
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  • From Robyn on July 14, 2007
    I usually don't read gender bender. You are doing an excellent job with this type of story so far. Gojyo's reactions are believeable. I liked seeing what was going on in Hakkai's and Sanzo's heads. The fact Goku is treating Gojyo like Gojyo is good. :)

    Now, to see how well Gojyo can still fight. As a woman, his (now her) center of balance is going to be much different. It's going to be tough to retrain mucsles that already have mucsel memory patterns to do slightly different things.
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  • From vampslyr on July 14, 2007
    This is fucking awesome and really well developed. Can't wait for the next chapter. Wonder what Gojyo's brother is going to think the next time they meet up with Kougaiji's group.
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  • From vbruce on July 13, 2007
    Lesson number one: Do not piss off the witch. Lesson number two: See lesson number one. Gods that is priceless. I love it. Excellent plot so far.
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