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By : lemonchai

From ANON - Anon on January 01, 2008
First of all: "Atobe looked like he wanted to help, but just wasn't sure how luggage could be carried without servants."

*DIES LAUGHING*

Nice chapter, I'm looking forward to Fuji's story. ^.^ (Is that wrong of me? XD)

Meanwhile... OMG the omake was purrfect! Yukimura is so evil and cunning, and Tezuka is just so naive! How could Yuki resist the temptation?

Besides, ribbon is MUCH cheaper than buying a present. ^.^
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From ANON - shourin on January 01, 2008
KYAAAAA!!!! A tezufuji smut! The best New Year presents evah! Oh Yukimura is so cute too!!! *glomps lemon and chai and keeps on screaming coz she�s so happy*

Ehem� now on with the reviews:

Chapter 12:

Nice ending you got there� ^^;;; leaving the readers� jaw hanging in a silent �NOoooo!!!� Fufuufuufufu. (oh, I�m sure I know the feeling coz I�m one of them. Lol)

All in all, it�s a fun chapter to read. Love the scene when Fuji�s mother discovered the trashed bedroom, and Atobe is cute. The way he wants to join with the commoner�s way of life... but simply doesn�t know how. Your Atobe is really, really cute!

Hmm� I just wanna make sure, so there�s no way Sanada and Yukimura can be in good terms like before? Because Sanada sure seems like he still loves Yukimura but keeps on denying it. It�s like Sanada is trying his very best to rejects Yukimura. I mean, if you loves that person, just except that you loves them. What�s the point of denying, coz it�s not like that person knows. It�s just between you and your own heart� right? If you want that person to know, just confess. If not, stay quiet. That�s what I thought anyway. When I think about it, maybe Fuji is thinking the same way � �When there�s nothing you can do, just keep quiet and accept things as they are�.

But maybe I was wrong. Maybe what Sanada feels toward Yukimura is hatred. Or it�s Yukimura that still clings to the remnants of their dying love � unable to change anything.

Another thing that I do realize in this fic is that, among all, Yukimura is a fighter�

He fights against his sickness�

He fights against his failures�

He fights against his losses�.

Unlike Yukimura, Fuji is totally lost. He tried to patch up his broken heart, but he didn�t fight for himself. He just follows around, hoping to find some solace in another embraces, although he knew he will never find one.

As for Tezuka and Sanada, to tell you the truth I still can�t understand this character. They are fighting against something I can�t understand. I mean, their life would be easier if they just ignore Yukimura and Fuji, but nooooo they wanted to be the heroes. *imagines little Sanada said �when I grow up I wanna be superheroes!� *

Atobe; he�s a neutral zone. Like the clouds. He didn�t fight for anything (since he basically got whatever he wants) and all that matters to him now is a good satisfying sex. I don�t know if he ever feel sympathize towards his lovers relationship, or towards Fuji, but if he did, he never show it. I think. ^^;;;

Anyway, thank you so much for the omake!!! It�s cute! It�s fun! It�s TezuFuji! Yay!!! Happy new year!

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From ANON - shourin on January 01, 2008
oh shyit... an omake too... and i missed everything!!!

wait until i finish reading everything okay. then i'll give you a nice review... ja ne.
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From yellow22 on December 29, 2007
Omake addition - :) thanks!
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From yellow22 on December 27, 2007
thanks for the new chapter! YEAH!
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From danu23 on December 26, 2007
Oh yes, indeed, it'd be a shame to have to delete them seeing they ARE rather crucial to the whole plot! Oh my, sometimes I just forget how much fun Atobe is, he WANTED to help but couldn't quite manage it...
Oh I'm so looking foward to the omakje and to a next chapter, it''s so good. I wonmder what aYukimura's going to do, I love that mother side of his. It makes him look gentle, even when he's so jelaous of Tezuka, bbut wel, I suppose Tezuka and Fuji are sort of meant to be...it makes sense, but TYukimura and Fuji would make even more sense if Yukimura just weren't so saddistic, but well, that's life!
Lovely chap, hope you update soooooooooon!
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From ANON - shourin on December 22, 2007
He..he� the second review for chapter 10, as promised. fufufuufufu.

�When Yukimura did not look like a tiger ready to pounce, his natural beauty shimmered through and brought out the reflexive function from within Tezuka to take care of those who were in need� � oh dear, just admit it tezuka, you have soft spot for pretty elfin guys. Fufuuu�

awww, memories of tezuka and fuji together. *cries*

yukimura loves fuji too! Now only sanada left! *starts to wonder if the title will change to �everybody loves fuji��* o_O;;;

�He couldn't believe that earlier he'd felt sorry for this imp. Yukimura was a devil with a pretty face.� � there you go, the proof for my earlier statement. Fufufufuu�

well, that�s all for chapter 10. ^_^. Although it doesn�t have much action, I like it because it features tezuka�s memories of fuji, albeit his lack of exterior expression.

And I learnt that tezuka fancy pretty people. Maybe he doesn�t make a move on sanada because he�s not pretty enough. *evil bitchy thoughts* Nfu!

Btw, I�m sorry if I noticed strange things and it somehow hit the mark. It�s just me thinking too much, and you don�t really have to change your plots whatsoever. I enjoy reading everything you wrote, and it�s enough of anticipation for me to wait for your updates. ^_^. So do your best and see you next time.

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From ANON - shourin on December 22, 2007
This is the 2nd review for chapter 11. sorry for the pending 2nd review. my connection fails.

Hmm� it�s true that fuji use his parent�s room because it�s larger and because it has bigger bed. But it makes me wonder, if atobe and yukimura never went to fuji�s house before (and they�re the 3rd and 5th boyfriend), it implies that it might be the same with his 2nd and 4th, right? Does this mean that, besides tezuka, nobody else has the privilege to be in fuji�s room too? So� why the secrecy? Is there anything in fuji�s room that he didn�t want his other bf to see? *suspicious* Nfu�

Anyway, nothing sizzling yet it seems (thanks to a certain baka who faints all the way *glares at sanada*) but all in all a promising beginning and better, a fast chapter! OMG, thank you for the fast updates, and I�ll wait patiently for the drooling moment of the next chapter.

Good luck playing with 5 hot naked bishies! Nfu!

p/s: umm.. can I make a little request? Umm� if it�s possible, I really hope to see a loving moment between fuji and tezuka even a very short ones, at least let tezuka knows that fuji really really loves him (being the only one that he loves and all that jazz� if fuji really breaks down and cry it will be super!). From what I understand from your fic, fuji cares for all his boyfriends, but he only loves tezuka (as claimed by Atobe and Fuji himself). Ne, ne, please, pwetty please� *big round teary kitty eyes*

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From ANON - shourin on December 20, 2007
Yoohooo� it�s me again.

Really, sanada no baka�

And I thought that he had a great stamina� geh.

And because of him, we missed half the fun too. Damn. *pokes Sanada�s butt with butt plug*. I guess seeing his ex kissing dirtily with his boyfriend and sexy slutty fuji blows his mind, literally. Wimp, they haven�t really started yet, and atobe�s just sucking his pinky, man!

Tezuka, well he was writhing heavenly under yukimura, shooting his seeds and all that jazz, nothing distinctly hostile. (what with all that dramatic prapparumba claiming �I didn�t break up with you so that you�ll be hurt by others��) -_-;;; *tsk�tsk�tsk*

Yumiko� does know that his little brother is a playboy �guy killer� (opposite of �lady killer�) right? She must be proud of him! First the hawt tezuka, then 3 more appears, and they�re from different schools too! Fufufuu� the prowess of fuji Syusuke.

Wait, I think I have more to say. I�ll continue it in the second review. btw. i hope you got this review since my connection sucks like hell.

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From yellow22 on December 16, 2007
""I am probably gonna post this fic on fanfiction(dot)net, with plot hole edits and better english and more details and extra scenes.""

Why would you post an edited version there and not here? I would like to read an edited version too.

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From ANON - Anon on December 16, 2007
lol You could always repost it here, too. :p God knows the general standard beats the hell outta FF.net...

Anyways...

Nfufufu. XD Nope, DEFINITELY not working out their problems, but definitely working out SOMETHING! Damn it! I wanna know how they convinced Tezuka, you cheat!!! Rather, I wanna *see* how they convinced Tezuka. XD Cause I'm sure it had to do with lots of touching and kissing and licking to make him that comfortable... XD

Hurry up and update again!!! (Yeah, I know, I'm a hypocrite...)
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From danu23 on December 15, 2007
Aw I loved the first part! It was so nice to see Yukimura re-think some things. Tezuka is so naughty! That was fun, but I can't help but wonder if Sanada suffers from epilepsy or something along those lines...I mean he's fainting quite a lot, isn't he? LOL

I wish we could've been told how on earth was Tezuka finally convinced to get into that orgy, he doesn't look leike he likes those. Great chap, once again, and I'm so looking foward to your post in fanfiction. Though I suppose you'll delete all those sex scenes, right? 'Cause ff.net only allows R-rated stories...well, anyways, I hope you'll be posting this there soon! Update soooooooooooooooooooooooon

PS: My cravings WERE satisfied
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From ANON - n on December 12, 2007
Thank you for the dedication! The scence was good and entertaining.

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From ANON - shourin on December 11, 2007
OMG new chapter!!!!!!!!! *howl with glee*

*reads... reads....*

okay. fuji is still alive, that's a good sign. ^_^ btw, i just realized that, fuji have been with everybody; tezuka, atobe, and yukimura, except sanada. hehhehehe.. so sanada will have a taste on the heavenly sex that is fuji. fufufuufufuffuuuuu...

then he'll know the prowess of fuji syusuke (he must be wondering why everybody is so concerned with fuji neh? even atobe admit that he'll never get bored with fuji!)

but i really wish that tezuka will show more expression concerning his ex. his uncaring facade really tiring me out. *punch tezuka again* thick headed imp!

ahhnn~ (atobe style ^_~)... can't really give more comments on this chapter (the fact that aff.net is kinda 'review unfriendly' really gave me a hard time). i'll read it again and give you another feedback okay. besides, it's 2 am and my head is pounding.

thanks for the dedication! (fuji cuffed to the bed prevent him from killing himself it seems ^_^) thank you! i'm glad that the double review works. however, you can expect another review for this chapter. there's something tingling at the back of my head but i can't think of it now, so i have to read this chapter again. (i've read your story 3 times; all chapters back to back, and maybe that explains my scrutinizing comments... ^_^;;, can't help it. i really love your story!)

ja, mata ne. nfu!

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From ANON - Anon on December 11, 2007
What happened to your lips?"

ROTFLMAO

Sorry, had to get that out of the way...

Anyways... I agree with Yuki-muse!!! Time for smmmmut! XD (Not that I didn't enjoy the chapter. Poor Yuki-puppy.)

Actually, you know I 'could' see Atobe riding the train with one of those 'I'm curious as to how peasants travel' excuses. :p

*pouts* Have I mentioned that I don't like Sanada? And people call Tezuka emotionless! *huffs* Erm, that was a bit off topic...

Anyways, thanks for pushing through, my darling. ^.^ Can't wait for more! Though god knows I probably won't be able to read it till my next day off. >.
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