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By : lemonchai

From danu23 on December 10, 2007
now, now, isn't this getting better and better by the second? Great chap! I can't help but understand Atobe.I mean, I'd be drooling all over my face if I ever saw such a sight! I hate Yukimura's muther, she's so rude and idiotic, it bugs me. And I'm glad to see Yukimura does appreciate Fuji, when you describe them like that they sound like a rather nice and spicy couple.
Although I do agree it was far too short for my cravings! LOL. I can't wait to see what's going to happen at Fuji's house.
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From ANON - Anon on December 10, 2007
SQUEE!!!: But his lover had lost all his energy, his fingers wrapping loosely around Fuji's throat in an enervated attempt to at least bruise.
"I would tighten my grip, if I had the strength," the bluenette sighed, giving up and letting his hand fall limply to his side.

I LOVED that!!! I really did! XD

The whole chapter was just made of awesomeness! The scene between Tezuka and Fuji so so sweet and perfect. ^.^ And Atobe's a manipulative bastard. *giggles* Utada Hikaru? He's gonna kill Gakuto.

Awwww Yuki!!!! He's being good! That's so sweet!

And Sanada and Tezuka heard him!!!!! EEEEEEEEE!!!!

And... and... ROTFL Your comment actually made me laugh out loud. Yes, they are a bit of a therapy group, aren't they? Actually, I find that happening in most of my fics too. Therapy followed by sex. ^.^

Awww, and Fuji's all alone at Yuki's house wondering what's so wrong with him that Yuki won't even kill him!!! How mean!!!! XD
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From danu23 on December 08, 2007
oh my! That was quick enough! LOL
I wonder what's going to happen to Yukimura next! It's so terrible for his parents to be so unaware of his need for SOME attention! That's just messed up, but well....I love Atobe being all neutral! It suits him rather niecely. So I'm guessing Sanada still has feelings for Yukimura and Yukimura for Sanada, they really have to work out their problems...specially Yuikimura!
That was awesome. Keep it up!
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From ANON - shourin on December 08, 2007
i know this is cheating but........... i ... i... want more... T_T *runs*
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From ANON - shourin on December 06, 2007
firstly, thank you for the fast updates. i love it ^_^

secondly, awww... poor fuji, rejected by tezuka... again. and yukimura just run away. *punches insensitive tezuka*. god, he really was blown away like a fallen leaves. can't tezuka feel anything at all? i won't even blink my eyes if they found fuji's dead on yukimura's bed after consuming a bottle of sleeping pills or slit his wrist (but that would be suck to clean the mess - don't slit your wrist in your bf's bed. he would be furious)... damn, reading his rejection really hurts like hell (and i have nothing to do with their relationship at all... -_-;;;;)

thirdly, okay, so tezuka left fuji because he raped him? no wonder fuji is a masochist. maybe his first and last loving memory of tezuka is when he was raped. sexual tension to the max!

fourthly, damn sanada! he's an egoistical freak. poor yukimura, unsatisfied and stuck up with inflexible boyfriend. *punches sanada*. yukimura should stay with atobe instead. he can provides all of yukimura's needs... it seems. oh yeah, sanada is really a poor story teller.

fifthly, i hope i'll never see a "love making scene" between sanada and tezuka. i can imagine that it will be a disaster (what with tezuka's past experience of rapes and unskilled inflexible sanada, uhhh the horror!) atobe must be in between them. at least he can act as the buffer zone (neutral territory, heh).

ahhh... and lastly, i wish atobe's happiness with tons of bishies to fuck around. W000000T!!!!

fast updates again, yey! go baby go!
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From ANON - n on December 05, 2007
That was wonderful. though I thought you would've shown us Fuji's beating scence.
Wanted to see it, actually. Ah well, please update Soon!!
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From ANON - Anon on December 02, 2007
ROTFL Yuki-muse? Out of control? .... Never.... XD

Heheheheh. Great chapter. (Smut isn't everything, though a very nice bonus. :p)

I loved the psychological turmoil going on with Yukimura. He was a perfect, angsty teen. ^.^ I'm definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes. I wonder, will Fuji's screams bring the trio outside running in to save him? XD
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From ANON - shourin on December 01, 2007
hello, thank you for the wonderful chapter. i really love your story coz it's interesting.

umm... i don't know if i'm mistaken, but from what i read, it was like yukimura is in the state of denial. it seems like yukimura resorts to violence because he wants to show sanada that he's not weak. besides sanada distances himself from yukimura since he was sick, and maybe it hurt yukimura so much without sanada's knowing it. maybe he's blaming his sickness, his weakness as the reason why sanada distances himself from him. he wants to show that he's strong but the same times he's hurting and hating himself instead.

and fuji. he seems to love tezuka so much that when tezuka left him, he's just a hollow entity. he lost his heart, and by losing it, he needs something that make him feel alive - be it an extreme pleasure, or an extreme pain. when there's an accumulation of sadness, disappointment and pain in one's heart, happiness seems like it is a far fetched dream. besides, someone like fuji who have smiles as his masked, will he ever feel alive again?

did tezuka ever loved fuji? can't sanada see that he's tormenting yukimura?

can somebody really save them both? i think it's already too late. even if tezuka and sanada decided to be with yukimura and fuji back, the pain won't heal. it will stay scarred in their hearts. the pain and suffering will traumatized them both.

i wonder...
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From danu23 on December 01, 2007
That was great! I ADORE Atobe! He's like my fav character and yes, ore-sama ccan do anything he'd like perfectkly, even being a bottom! L0L!

So, I guess we all understand why Yukimura is how he is and blah (what a crazy motther)! Poor sweet little boy. Tha part of Fuji to the rescue was the oddest thing I've ever read, but it was good. And in god's name is Atobe going to talk to Sanada and Tezuka about? Those two should just stop butting in Fuji's sex life, it's none of their bloody business! I hope you update reaaaaaallyyyy sooon!!
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From ANON - nb22 on November 27, 2007
I like the pairings! Well done!
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From ANON - Anon on November 20, 2007
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It cut off my review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh well... I'll have to email it.
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From ANON - Anon on November 20, 2007
Uh, warning... This review's over a page long in word. (There was so much I had to say that I took notes. ^.^ :p)

Whee!!! A dedication! XD Made my day! :3

--- �Yuki-mama says he's always good. ... D: *runs away in fear*�

...

A wise decision, methinks.

--- �"You always go for the captains,"�

Damn. That is so true.

�...� (
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From danu23 on November 16, 2007
Wow! What a threesome!! Poor Fuji! I'm dying to read about Atobe bottoming for anyone...I mean,that's quite a sight.Great chap! The Sanada thing was so sad, but then again, they really weren't meant for each other. Update soooooon!!
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From danu23 on October 21, 2007
That's a pretty good theory. You know, I'm wondering, what on earth did Fuji tell Yukimura for the latter to be THAT satisfied...what a mystery! It was a lovely chap...I definetely enjoyed the FujiYukimura part. However I do think Yukimura stammering after the whole Snada incident is a bit off character. I mean, he's supposed to be one to collect himself quite quickly and that was sort weak for him...Anyways, I'm waiting for Ore-sama's appearance! That should be something! Great chap!
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From ANON - Anon on October 21, 2007
"Well... I guess it was really..." Leaning closer, the brunette whispered into his lover's ear.

A smirk stretched across Yukimura's lips. The answer intrigued him.

Nani? Naaaaaaaaaaaaaani? *pouts* Nani wo itta yo!

Somehow I get the feeling it involves SOMETHING to do with a threesome with Atobe, but just what in the hell did he say? Not fair. This is a fatal assault. Curiosity kills cats and I'm a Leo!!!

But you did make up for it... XD Why oh why did I enjoy Sanada shoving Yuki up against a locker so damn much?

And yay. :3 I was really hoping Yuki would give Fuji a break for once. (Dunno why, it's rather an odd sentiment for me, but it just seemed about time. :p) And yet again, you pulled through. =^.^=

Poor Sanada. He always gets the short end of the stick... Oh well. Actually, I'm more worried about Tezuka. o.o; Is he gonna get broken up with? I hope not. Not until he's back on Yuki's good side, that is... Er, does Yuki 'have' a good side? :p

Mmmm All inspired now. Off I go...
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