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Reviews for For All the Wrong Reasons

By : lemonchai
  • From danu23 on October 18, 2007
    Wow! That went out pretty nicely! I'm dying to know what yukimura's proposition is! And why was Fuji so nice to Yukimura? Please update soon, and keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 17, 2007
    "The ringing continued, and he decided to sue Utada Hikaru or Paris Hilton or whatever stupid bitch sang such an irritatingly catchy tune."

    ROTFL

    As for you OT1... *fans self* I am in awe both of Atobe-sama and of yourself. Wow. That was VERY well done! But aaaaaaaaawwwwwwww I can just feel his lonely little soul reaching out for someone to love him!!!

    *giggles* So I was half right about the meeting... :p Fuji WAS bound and gagged in a closet-esque situation. :p Too bad about the lack of Yuki/Tezu, but it worked veeeerry nicely anywa. *smiles* Fuji was just too sweet after that!

    Oh, man. I couldn't properly picture Yukimura, though. My brain was very unhelpful in supplying me with images of Hogwarts dress robes. @_@ I'm starting to confuse Yukimura and Snape. My mind is a scary place.

    As is Atobe's. *giggle* I wonder if Yuki known what Atobe's doing on the other end of the line. Probably, ne?

    Wonderful chapter! I'll have to work on Sweet Dreams some more and hopefully force your Tezuka muse back into working order. ^.^
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  • From teenrachelsoon on October 14, 2007
    YES it's an UPDATE!! UPDATE!! You have no idea how glad i was when i saw the update. =D Haha. Great work once again but.. this story seems to be taking another route.. one not leading to Tezuka!! FUJI!! * cries * hahaha.. the Atobe part should be interesting. Can't wait for more!! Keep up the good work!!
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  • From ANON - Mick on October 13, 2007
    YAY UPDATE!! :) I'm so happy now that I took the time to review. Normally, I'm just a lurker.

    I loved how Atobe was introduced; the passage began and I was all "OMG NARCISSTIC ATOBE!"
    I've never seen OT1 written, and I can't write to save my life, but I love Atobe in your fic.
    Much arrogance and angst. But wanting to be loved.

    Looking forward to Chapter 6! XD
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  • From ANON - Mick on October 08, 2007
    My god! I just read this story, and I LOVE IT. I'm especially fond of how Fuji is written, and how he just can't get away from Yukimura. Update soon, please! :)
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  • From teenrachelsoon on October 08, 2007
    ArghhhHH!! What a cliffhanger. No no no!!! I'm a die hard Tez/Fuji fan so please let them end up together if only for a short while and Sanada to get back with his ex. Then you can have a foursome!! hahaha.. but just update pleaseee!! Don't torture the lovely tensai anymore!!!! * sniff sniff * abd great writing. =D
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  • From JadeParker on September 26, 2007
    I was so happy to see this updated, and you didn't disappoint. Quality writing gave us some more insight on Tezuka's motives and intent and even the lovely little scence with Fuji was revealing considering what was being pictured in his mind. Needless to say, I loved it and can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2007
    Okay, so I went through three stages...

    One: "the bluenette" BUWAHAHAHAHA!!! *dies laughing* I did a double take before I actually got that one...

    Two: *purrs* Mmmmmm Fuji...

    Three: Too short! Too short! Too short!!!!!

    So... Fuji's having mushy, Tezuka feelings again? ***.*** Sounds like Tezuka trying reeeaaaaally hard to like Sanada... Well, maybe not that hard, but he's also trying hard to convince himself he's not trying hard... Yep, I'm confused.

    ... So Yukimura arranged with Fuji at 4 and Tezuka at 5... That probably means Fuji's tied up in a closet, chained and gagged and that Yukimura's about to seduce Tezuka right under Fuji's listening ears... Right? RIGHT?

    ... No? Oh well, I trust you to entertain me anyway... XD
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 09, 2007
    Part 3:

    ^.^ Short works at 2:00am :P

    Yup! Not clear at all! *tears out hair* Are they in love? Do they hate each other? (probably not) Is Yukimura going to make Tezuka watch? XD Sadistic bastard...

    Looking forward to the next chapter. (Though when I'll be able to read it's a mystery.)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 09, 2007
    Part 2:

    XD Berserk!!!

    Aaaaanyways... ^.^ Very well done. The Fuji/Yukimura scene was just right. ^.^ (For my tastes anyway)

    Sorry it's taken me so long to get round to reading and reviewing but eh. Uni and all that.

    (I'll be onto Part 3 soon enough.)
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  • From kat8cha on July 24, 2007
    Oh,poor Fuji!
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  • From ANON - JadedSoul on July 24, 2007
    I think I liked the second chapter even more than the first which I just didn't think would be possible! Your character interaction is great and the smut was yummy. I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - JadedSoul on July 20, 2007
    This is very well written and has certainly caught my attention. I'm looking forward to an update so I can find out what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 20, 2007
    ^.^ I love it! I really do!

    I've been wondering why everyone always neglects Yukimura in these pairings. He's so perfect!

    Man, where to begin?

    Well, first of all, I love the Fuji/Yukimura pairing. First I've ever found and I haven't gotten around to writing it yet, but I can feel the tingles of inspiration somewhere around my toes... Anyways, very cute with the kitten metaphor.

    Sanada seems a touch out of character, but then again, I haven't read/written much involving Sanada so I'm not up to date on the fandomization.

    I do so hope this is going to become a nice long, complicated fic with lots of backstory! Probably not, ne? Oh well, simple and hot works, too.

    I'd LOVE to see Atobe in this. I really would. With lots of angst attached.

    You're a very good writer, and with practice, I can see the kinks eventually dissolving. [Don't take this as criticism. There are habits that come with reading fanfiction that everyone sheds the more they write.] Please forgive me, but I like to comment on the technical aspects of authors with a lot of potential.

    Oh, and just to finish off... XD The bondage was well done, but for god's sake! Be more visual!!!!!!!!! I can't take the suspense! I wanna know exactly what Yukimura is doing to our dearest kitty cat!

    Krystal_Epyon
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