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Reviews for Parallel's Playground

By : ToreadoreRose
  • From ANON - Inu-Ice-Dragon on September 03, 2014
    Soooo ... Yeah ... Love the story! I was hoping that you would finish this story soon, but I see you haven't updated it since 2007 ... I completely understand I do that as well. But I thought that I would let you know that I would still be interested in a continuation of this story! I can't wait to see how they both react to the bathtub scene later on, especially Sakura, she certainly has been having some wavering emotions! I hope that eventually you do pick this up again!
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  • From ANON - eli on January 13, 2014
    continue continue please sakura and fujitaka l like this couple
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  • From ANON - Aiko on December 13, 2012
    Its been a few years since i read this and i was really excited to refind it.
    Please write more T^T
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  • From WhiteWolf69 on October 13, 2009
    Awesome possum!!!

    ...Whew...(is it hot in here, or is it just me?)

    ...I would write something more...but...my mind cannot come up with anything coherent...or anything of the sort...C;(taking a lot of effort just to write this review)

    UPDATE!!!

    As soon as you can of course...XD
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  • From ZeroTenshi01 on May 24, 2009
    Simply amazing work! I can't begin to count how many times I've read this fic...and it never gets boring. *grins*

    Continue, continue! I'm anxious to know what happens next!

    Excellent writing, keep it up. I thought the pairing was odd at first, but I was pleasantly surprised, it's written well, and in a way that works. Not at all out of character, either, which isn't a very easy task.

    *puppy dog eyes* Next chapter?
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  • From HouseofDeValle on February 19, 2008
    ....Indescribably deep...
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  • From WingsofaDream on December 07, 2007
    Ooo, I thought you'd given up on this the amount of time it took you to update. Super pleased that you haven't. Chapter 4 was an interesting plot development, can honestly say I did not see that one coming. And Chapter 5...Wow. I enjoyed it a lot, perhaps a little too much considering who it was and how old they were ^_^; Nevertheless, I shall start keeping an eye open for reviews once again as I'm once again in love with this story :)
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  • From Aiko69 on December 02, 2007
    *sits with mouth open*..WOW!!!
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  • From TrinityLayne on November 30, 2007
    That was.... hmmmm... Damn Girl that was hot!
    though I'm a bit miffed about the evil "another cliffhanger-ish… thing". *jk*

    I understand the whole not being to good at the finishing multi-chappy thing. I've been know to do that, lots! (darn that ADhD)
    and I had to give this fic a chance... just for the fact I had never seen a FxS either, and I happen to have sitting on my HD a SakuraxTouya oneshot i wrote months ago, I'm just too chicken to post it.;o)
    This chapter goes to show you deserve lots and lots of worship/praise! (that and cookies)
    Hope you have stress free days, and the itch to write more soon.

    Later,
    Layne
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  • From TrinityLayne on November 30, 2007
    First, I have to say I almost didn't click the link to this story...
    The pairing and all.
    But after giving in to the temptation and reading this, I'm so glad I did.
    This fic is, without a doubt, is one of the best, I've ever come across on AFF! The writing depth is simply awesome, the story just sucks you in on an emotional level.
    I really hope you continue with this. :O)

    Brillent Job!
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  • From Aiko69 on November 23, 2007
    ~SQUEES again~...i love it...but i dont like the cliff hanging..keep going..PWEESS!!!...^_^
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  • From Aiko69 on November 08, 2007
    ~SQUEE!!~ i LOVE it!!...i really like the paring too...i really hope ur going to finish it...
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  • From Teller on October 13, 2007
    Hoooly crap. That was very, VERY well written. o.o

    I wish I could write that well. Planning on doing more?
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  • From haesufel on September 24, 2007
    ohohohohhohoho! honestly the father and daughter act grosses me out but...i don't know why the idea of FUJITAKA and SAKURA doing it does not bother me at all. I wanna read them in action! Please update!
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  • From WingsofaDream on August 08, 2007
    I wish there were so many more chapters than just three :(

    This is an awesome story you have here my dear. I have to admit, the idea of Sakura and Fujitaka in a physical relationship has always intrigued me, (as has the idea of her being with Touya) but I've never had the inspiration to start writing something of my own and now, you've been oh so lovely and written something to share with us all. And you write so well and realistically too, I adore the way you manage to convey how Sakura is feeling about it all and how she's slowly starting to work out her body.

    Yes, so, I'll stop talking now and finish with excellent job, I'm totally enjoying it and I hope to read the next chapter soon :)
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