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Reviews for To crack a nut

By : teenrachelsoon
  • From TaiKaiten on September 23, 2008
    first of all, i LOVE this story, but there is a few things you could fix... just slight grammar and spelling problems as well as you have ch 8 & ch 7 switched, and ch 7 isnt showing up (only the disclaimer and author's notes) so im a little lost... {mainly fuji staying at a hotel... that messed me up a bit...}

    Id love for you to continue this story and, in doing so, get better with grammar and the like by editing and rereading your work.
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  • From lemonchai on July 21, 2008
    Still no chapter 7 -cries- Hm, maybe there's an html code or something that is causing the text to disappear? Do you have any characters at the beginning? Try copying all the text into note pad and deleting any symbols, especially '>' this and '
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  • From yellow22 on July 21, 2008
    ch 8 is good but what happened to chapter 7? I want to know how they got from being at the resturaunt and Fuji leaving then suddenly they are now meeting at a new resturaunt and all is OK with Fuji and Tezuka? What happened inbetween?
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  • From lemonchai on July 16, 2008
    There's still no Chapter 7 ... (it looks like it's not loading correctly) -cries- Nyaa I really want to read it :3 All Aff.net has for chapter 7 is the summary.
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  • From masqatch on July 10, 2008
    hey, we're waiting for new chapter!!! Dont let it hang like that ^^".
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  • From shourin on July 07, 2008
    hunyaaa~ i still can't see the story~ *cries*
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  • From yellow22 on June 30, 2008
    ch 7/ I would like to review ch 7 but it it not posted, just the disclaimer. I hope you post it becuase I did want to see more on this story.
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  • From shourin on June 28, 2008
    na ah. nothing happen so far.
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  • From shourin on June 26, 2008
    you know, getting all excited just to read...

    "Title : To crack a nut ( Chapter 7 )
    Disclaimer : I’m just playing with them for a bit. They do not belong to me and I do not make any money out of this or them. This is written for pure entertaining and enjoyment purposes.
    Tezuka’s point of view.
    Authors note : I’m sorry if my writing style has changed a little. It tends to happen to stories that go on hiatus for long periods of time."

    only is kinda dissapointing you know...

    *cries silently in one corner*
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  • From lemonchai on June 25, 2008
    -sniffles- I think the story didn't copy right? ;__; -looking forward to the new chapter-
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  • From KawaiiBabiii on June 25, 2008
    What's up w/ the 4 chapter 7s?

    Still, I love this fanfic very much! ^^
    Please edit the chapter 7s and update please! ^^
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  • From shourin on April 01, 2008
    mou... why are you leaving it at that? *cries*

    ne, poor fuji. and tezuka is stupid. i'd leave him if i were fuji. lol.
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  • From yellow22 on March 27, 2008
    Very good chapter 6. I am anxious to see what happens!

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  • From ychan on March 27, 2008
    TEZUKA IS THE WORST!! THE WORST!! -BOPS TEZUKA ON THE HEAD-

    Poor Fuji, I loved the chapter though, Inui -mega hearts- he's such a good friend. I'm such a sucker for crying!Fuji XD -all mad at Tezuka now for making him cry though- XDDDD I hope the waitresses all gossip about it so that Tezuka finds out and guilt trips.
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  • From masqatch on March 26, 2008
    that was good, keep writing!
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