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Reviews for The Vampire

By : GreyPenInk
  • From Hellagoddess on May 08, 2008
    That was interesting :) Normally I won't go near vampire fictions - I find them too cliche and one much the same as the other - But I'm quite glad I read this. There were some rather amusing moments scattered throughout which helped lighten a darker subject (I'm always for unnessesary humour regardless...), nicely done sex-scene for your first and although I understood the purpose of the breakers between sexual content, I found them to be a little distracting and they seemed to interrupt the flow of text. But that's just me :) I'm sure there was a whole horde of other people that appreciated the warning!

    I liked the bit of plot you also worked in there too. It was nicely spaced through the story and you didn't just spam the facts at the start and let people wade through it - everything was at a nice, easy pace to absorb. I liked the mention of Mikami and there were a few lines through that were just brilliant and beautifully written! All in all, a good story! :D Well done!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 16, 2008
    I fully agree that there should be more Death Note vampire fics. And wow, this was hot. Loved it. Heh, I'd like to see one where Raito is the vampire and that's how he kills, instead of the Death Note. ...Hm... Maybe I could write it... Okay well getting back on topic this was a wonderful read. Good job and thanks for writing.

    Jade
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  • From spoon10488 on March 22, 2008
    Awesome story. I love this vampire fic.
    =)
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  • From ANON - voyuerer on March 06, 2008
    Awesome au, loved L as a vamp. The end was great. I just loved the whole feel of the story. And thanks for taking Misa out of the picture.
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  • From ANON - kallipso on December 21, 2007
    great story. I love the interaction between the characters.
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  • From ANON - Jade on September 23, 2007
    "little orgasm button"...XD
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  • From ANON - Mino on August 16, 2007
    Yay, death note did need a vampire story, and a good one it was.
    I really enjoyed the story, it wasn't a predictable one, which is always good.
    *throws you magic cookie* keep up the good work :D
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  • From ANON - yuneek on August 16, 2007
    I loved it! loved it loved it loved it!! The whole friends to lovers thing. And I loved how you didn't have Light just cave in the first time L was trying to seduce him (all too common in most stories) and he actually stuck to his guns XD Well I really really would love to see a sequel, but if you don't want to that's fine :D thank you so much for this amazing read!
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  • From ANON - Alexandra on August 14, 2007
    Totally loved it! Very interesting, really. Poor L, being blackmailed like this... hehe
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  • From KrystalChronicals on August 14, 2007
    good story!
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  • From ANON - Yo! on August 13, 2007
    Neat!
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