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Reviews for Torn Betwixt Them

By : AngieBop
  • From ANON - miserywriter on November 12, 2007
    Ah! I can't believe one of my videos inspired this! I'm so happy! You're an amazing writer! I love it, poor Haruhi, Kyouya's so messed up! And poor Hikaru, oh no! Wow! Thanks for writing this!
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  • From Sialeeds on November 11, 2007
    It's really quite good. It's sort of like Ouran Club--the Soap Opera.

    I'm a little disappointed you didn't try to encapsulate the sort of wildly slapstick humor of the show, but it's not a bad thing.
    The sex was a bit flowery, but a good amount of passion behind it.

    All in all, I'd try breaking up your paragraphs, screwing with the actual format of the story. It's a very simplistic block paragraph style that causes the eye to skip over great chunks of the text.

    Other than that, good job!
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  • From AngieBop on November 10, 2007
    http://www.youtube.com/profile?user=EnigmaticOtaku

    My videos for Ouran
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  • From ANON - Pastel on November 10, 2007
    Stupid Kyouya. He totally ruined her first time by making her feel like a whore with him leaving like that. In a way, I feel that Haruhi would probably feel torn with everything happening to her (like all the guys in her life we turning their back on her). She should leave for a vacation where the Host Club will not be able to find her, causing them to think twice about hurting her. Update please. Great chapter by the way.
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  • From tonz27 on November 08, 2007
    As always impressive.. Though way to short for my like. Perhaps Haruhi may need to get something to eat? Well.. I get hungry after sex XDD
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  • From AngieBop on November 08, 2007
    Thanks guys! I'm loving your reviews so far
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  • From ANON - Lizzy*D on November 07, 2007
    oh shit! Kyoya in charge, and I like it! And it was the perfect twist to have Hikaru witness that! oh man, i wonder what will happen when they meet again?
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  • From ANON - Nova on November 06, 2007
    This is coming along wonderfully and I cannot wait for another chapter! I am just waiting in anticipation! The story telling is so excellent and I can't wait hear more from Hikaru, the shock he must feel!
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  • From tonz27 on November 05, 2007
    NAMI-CHAN LOVES YOUR FIC AND YOU!!!!!
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  • From WingGoddessX on November 05, 2007
    OUCH! It's not like Hikaru is my fave character but wow... what has Hikaru ever done to you?! xD ! j/k
    I love the last twist on the end. Kyouya = God. Update QUICKLY! Last time you said you'd update in 9 or 10 hours... and i checked the next day and... and *cries* NO UPDATE!!!

    I'm okay =)
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  • From laurenloogie on November 03, 2007
    Woo! That was HOT! Your description was sexy, so was the scene, and the ending added an unexpected twist. Thanx for making it nice and rough! But not too rough, which is important. Ha, and that coming from me? But there's a certain time and place for roughness, and yours was perfect. Good job!
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  • From tonz27 on November 03, 2007
    WHOOT! Wonderful!!! Do more!
    ^^ Even though you told me what you had planned I still find myself amazed by how you managed to make it so much hotter then I imagened. BRAVO!

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  • From LordPatti on November 03, 2007
    bloody awesome!!!! Keep it up! I really got into it.
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  • From WriterChick1990 on November 02, 2007
    damn he just takes what he wants dont he. there is something so fucking hot about that
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  • From tonz27 on October 30, 2007
    I LOVE IT! MORE! XD
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