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Reviews for Torn Betwixt Them

By : AngieBop
  • From ANON - Gabriella on October 27, 2007
    Hey!
    Awesome story. can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From laurenloogie on October 23, 2007
    Hi, sorry for slacking on reading the latest chapter... I've been really fuckin busy. Anyways, I both love and appreciate the bit of roughness you put in there! It's interesting to think of Kyouya as having a crazy possessive side... I always like unique twists in a character's psyche, especially if it involves sadism. ^_^ So keep writing, and also thanx for the flattering mention in your last chapter!
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  • From ANON - Sybil on October 19, 2007
    I'm really enjoying this story. It is well written, with attention to grammar and form which is wonderful (and often not found in online fanfics) I look forward to reading more (smut included!)
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  • From ANON - Pastel on October 18, 2007
    What a fantastic story. I do hope that Kyouya and Haruhi end up together. He seems like he can handle her better then the other host club members. I also hope that Haruhi gives Hikaru a hard time for what he said to her. He doesn't think at all. Go Kyouya! Update as fast as you can please.
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  • From lkm40 on October 11, 2007
    So, what happens next? How dare you leave me in suspense! I have to go to classes and work today! No fair!
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  • From WingGoddessX on October 09, 2007
    KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!

    CONTINUE!!

    PLEASE!!

    I'M GETTING WITHDRAWEL AND IT HURTS X__X

    feed me Kyouya smut please ;__;
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  • From ANON - Ouran Fan on October 09, 2007
    Awesome. I desire more, I've always liked H/K pairings.
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  • From goddess8878 on October 09, 2007
    Wow. Normally, I'm a Hitachiincest kind of girl, but dang if this just isn't HOT! I will definitely be checking up on this story.
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  • From ANON - Kat on October 08, 2007
    Write the smut!! Thank you....
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  • From fangirlqueen on October 08, 2007
    oh common! smut is what fangirls live on and im going through withdrawel here! I kinda wonder how he's going to be in bed and i thought this was a haruxtwins story....unless you turn it into a kinda reverse harem thing which i have no objections to. ^_^ i like smut...and bishonen...and smuty bishonen makes me happy ^_^!
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  • From laurenloogie on October 02, 2007
    Liked the second chapter! Good, sensual description. I really liked the way you described Haruhi in her undies... and am eagerly anticipating that same excellent detail when you get to a... uh... you know... scene. Yes. So keep it up.
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  • From laurenloogie on September 15, 2007
    Hi Angie, just read through what you have up so far. Good descriptions, and even though I've neither seen nor heard of O... er.. what was it? Yeah, even though I have no idea what anime it's based on, I still can't wait to see what you do with the sexy twins. They should get... uh... punished. A lot. For being so damn cheery. I'll literally jump up and down on my seat if you put some bdsm in here! Good work so far.

    One thing... you might want to space your paragraphs a little more frequently, just to emphasize who's doing what and when. I don't know the characters so it's probably more confusing for me, but still... just a suggestion. And also, I noticed sometimes you had a 'to' instead of a 'too.' Easy mistake to make, just as easy to fix. Either way, loved it and keep writing!
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  • From bloodbunny on September 13, 2007
    Good start so far! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - Jess on September 12, 2007
    There is an excellent use of words here and the descriptions are outstanding when necessary. The first chapter does drag a bit and you do get the sense that there is nothing really happening here. The writing does show promise and a talent for detail but don't over do it. My advice is always to grab your readers attention from the very start. The writing needs to leave them wanting, thirsting for another taste.
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 08, 2007
    Continue!!!
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