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Reviews for Teacher Teacher!

By : EveAlli
  • From aherohasfallen on November 17, 2010
    I really like where this is going :). Some of the dialouge is a little choppy but still good! Try separating it from storyline and thoughts more(let it have it's own paragraph) it'll be easier to read. :) 5+'s!
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  • From Scorpinac on November 15, 2010
    Hmm, has potential. I look forward to chapter 5. Until then. Laters.
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  • From ANON - k on August 30, 2010
    Can't wait for next chapter. i hope you finish the story.
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  • From ANON - mika on August 30, 2010
    Nice chapter. I hope that you can update soon.
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  • From aherohasfallen on August 06, 2010
    I like this a lot!!!!!! Please keep writing!!!!
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  • From lovelyl on March 08, 2010
    I have read this on ff.net and by the looks of it your not finished on this site either, its too bad.
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  • From demonicangel0887 on May 05, 2008
    Well, i must say i like your story. It's a nice start to what could turn out to be a most humorous, entertaining and passionate story. You have plenty of potential to work with and i like the idea of Darien being Serena's teacher, it creates a nice complication for them, especially if you plan on this being a normal fic where Serena and the girls are living normal lives instead of transforming and fighting evil. Or do you plan on keeping with the story line? Plus her chances of being with Andrew being squashed is pleasing, cuz i always thought Andrew would be too mature for her, and Darien had a playful and picking nature in the beginning of the anime that suits Serena's personality better. Although you could use Andrew for certain purposes and have him more involved, since he always seemed so oblivious in the anime, and maybe he could actually be interested in Serena or one of the girls this time. Serena was always so worried about some girl looking at Darien in the anime that he never had to worry about her, which made me think he got her too easy,lol;) Girls should give guys some form of challenge shouldn't they. Of course I'm just sharing my thoughts with you, i have a tendency to write or say whatever i'm thinking. i have tons of stories lying around that I've started and haven't finished, which reminds me i should go work on one. Hope you don't think i'm too presumptuous. I really like the beginning and i can't wait for you to update to see what you come up with;P
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  • From ANON - vixen on October 09, 2007
    OMG lol thats great
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 28, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From PieldeLava on September 12, 2007
    Look intersting. Hope you continue. Look forward to reading the next chapter. Until next time, take care, and god bless.

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