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Reviews for Another Teen Pregnancy

By : GreyPenInk
  • From Mitsyoko on December 09, 2007
    Wonderful story! Can't wait to read the next chapter
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  • From ANON - random person on November 25, 2007
    love it! update soon
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  • From ANON - kitsune100 on November 13, 2007
    Great plot, great writing, and great sex! ahem i meant i really do like this fic and hope that you will continue writing it to the best of your ability. Already i see that you are a strong writer and would like to see this pattern continue...who am i kidding? please continue! i really like your story line and i think that you bring across your characters very well~_~
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  • From ANON - oztan on November 11, 2007
    Shit...! is all I can say. What is Light doing?
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  • From nathankeogh2001 on November 09, 2007
    Love the new chappie:) If you decide to discontinue posting on ff.net are you still going to post new chappies here? If not can you email updates to me? Please? I love this story so much! I don't want to be left hanging!
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  • From ReidMorgan on November 09, 2007
    Oh.My.God. I don't know what compelled me to read this... maybe it was because Raito is preggo this time around, but whatever the case I am so not into mpregs... but this, this fic caught my eyes and didn't seem to want to release them. I really, really like it and I kinda feel sorry for poor Raito thinking he has to go this all alone. I am awaiting the talk between him and L!!! You are doing an excellent job so far, keep up the great work!
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  • From SuijiDL on October 13, 2007
    don't replace Chapter 2! I loved it. I love this fic, its what the Death Note section needs. Keep up the good work ^_^

    I did get a little confused at the end of the flashback though, I wasn't sure if it was present tense again or not...
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  • From ANON - oztan on October 09, 2007
    I'm waiting for the part L/Raito have THE TALK.
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  • From KatsuyaKaiba on October 06, 2007
    Hooray! A well-written Death Note mpreg! I really like this, and I hope you plan to continue. I do like the fact that it's Raito who's preggers and not L, although I like both...it's rarely Raito :( It also fits the story very well this way. Great job!
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  • From ANON - yuneek on October 02, 2007
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!!! I love this so much more than preg!L fics! It's original, well written, and really interesting! I like how L's terms of endearment switch once he finds out that Raito's the mother(?!) of his baby XD BUT OMG! HE KICKED RAITO IN THE STOMACH!!! And L-kicks are hard! The whole "I would let Raito die for my baby" thing was really scary D: I sooooo want to read more of this! What's gonna happen??? How is the whole birth thing gonna go down? AND WILL THERE BE SECKS?!?!!? [crosses fingers]
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  • From SailorAurora on September 19, 2007
    Actually I liked this story very much. of course it wouldn't hurt to have more sex but... progess with the story in whatever way you want to. ;)
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  • From ANON - oztan on September 16, 2007
    This is really good. I love it.

    I bit confused about the Dr. Ramos. Is the reason she doesn't like L is because she thinks L is like Raito’s father? Also Dr. Ramos sound like she might be infatuated, she too overly possessive and wrongly protected of Raito. L/Raito should keep a close eye on her if they plan to see her again.

    Can not wait for the next chapter.

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  • From ANON - Xerai on September 14, 2007
    I didn't think I'd ever say that I like a mpreg fanfic, but..
    ..I really, really like your fanfiction. It's just.. I don't know, but I love it. xD
    You should continue, I'd love to read more.
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  • From ANON - ashe on September 13, 2007
    i really liked this story. i always find L as the uke and i hate that cuz i just cant see him as one. so u made my horrible day. lol
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  • From ANON - Yo! on September 13, 2007
    Like cool beans! Raito's pregnant! :giggle: continue please!
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