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Reviews for Rise and Fall of Kira

By : SailorAurora
  • From ThunderBear on August 26, 2009
    lol ( registrated quickly)

    please update
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  • From ANON - TigerLilly Spade on August 26, 2009
    aw ist over and now i have to wait for how-long ..?? for an update

    so please update soon, really soon okay

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  • From ANON - Nyves on February 04, 2009
    I just started reading this because of mayablackwolf's recommendation, and I must say that I love!!! Please update soon!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Give Due Credit on December 04, 2008
    :| Umm, you should definitely credit the doujinshi "L" by Balgus REC (and the Dragonfly group, if you read the scanlation, which I'm inferring you did) for the scene where L and Watari first meet/Watari's criminal background in Ch. 14/13. Saying "I totally made that up" gives the impression that YOU- well, made it up. And some stuff was changed so it's OK to say it's "based off of", but, really, you need to credit them.

    Thanks.
    -Mytilene
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  • From EadhaOhn on November 18, 2008
    What?? No sex scene? Especially after that hot dream scene? Ok I do understand you're not best on writing sex scene but PLEASE, this is ADULTfanfiction.net. At least you could edit this chapter later, right?? Pretty please??

    (Bookmarked this fic)
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  • From mayablackwolf on September 29, 2008
    Thanks for the update!^-^ I absolutly love this story! ahhh I love how Light's getting more bold, and more schememish, he's just more cool this way then nice-Light, also he's sooo...touchy-feely, its hot!^_^. heheh I wonder what L's going to to about it? >-< I'm really looking forward to the next update. can't wait! XP *sitting on edge of chair in suspense*
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  • From enslavementthesis on September 02, 2008
    This story has so much potential. The idea is an exciting one, and original. However, your writing seems a little rushed, and perhaps could use a little developing, both in vocabulary as well as dialogue.
    It isn't bad - quite the contrary - but it's obvious you've been so desperate to throw it all down and finally settle that little plot bunny to rest that you've overlooked some of the things that can make this an excellent fiction.


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  • From spoon10488 on July 16, 2008
    Awesome chapters. I keep forgetting where to find this store. Hopefully I'll remember this time. I like the battle between the twins. Uh oh! Kira and Teru know Light's name and face. I hope this isn't a death fic. I don't want to see L or Light die. Anyway, love your story. Can't wait to read more.
    =)
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  • From ANON - ude on July 01, 2008
    really good. cant wait for the next chapter (^___^)
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  • From spoon10488 on June 11, 2008
    Ha ha! I found this story again. It got moved that's way I couldn't find it, but now that I've found it I will be looking for the updates. Awesome chapters by the way. Loved the brief history between L and Watrai (sp?). I can't wait to read more.
    =)
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  • From Dhalim on June 02, 2008
    ^^ this is so good! i love how you twisted the events and characters to meet your own ends and still keep them believable >< please update soon!
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  • From ANON - .. on April 23, 2008
    mogi is still alive?
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  • From spoon10488 on March 24, 2008
    Ahh! Evil cliffy! I want to know what they decided. Will Light be okay?! I hope so. Loved this chapter and I can't wait for more.
    =)
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  • From spoon10488 on March 22, 2008
    Ahhhh! Evil cliffy! I love this story. This chapter was awesome. I can't wait to find out how L is alive.
    Update soon.
    =)
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  • From spoon10488 on March 18, 2008
    Awesome chapter can't wait for more.
    =)
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