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Reviews for Goodnight Moon

By : Duomi
  • From RivenLiether on March 03, 2008
    Awww, as long and wonderful as this chapter was, I still wanted it to be longer! lol. Please update again soon. The wait is unbearable sometimes. ^^;
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  • From anapana83 on January 12, 2008
    And so the plot thickens! That last chap was sooo good. Now im anxious to see what happens. I felt sad for Ryuuzaki there. I would want him to see a glimpse of that Light again too. Perhaps there's still a chance for him somehow....? Either way, well done.
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  • From Hellagoddess on January 11, 2008
    Ah! Nooo! Kira is back! Where did darling, confused Light go?! Awww, that makes me a sad panda, he's all evil again now and poor L, I feel so bad for him. Thank you for updating and for recommending 'Once is Once'. I have already read everything that she's posted and am quite enjoying the story. :D

    Quite liked this chapter, but had to read it twice as I have a tendency to begin speed-reading and skipping over superfluous text when I know something really exciting is about to happen. I was really gunning for there to be some residual guilt when Kira came back about how even though he likes L now, he still has to kill him. But no, he's back to being a cold bastard! Haha! So once Light regained his memories, I read to the end of the chapter and went back over it again!

    I'm really enjoying all your interactions between Light and L, especially when they're awkward and suspecting of each other. Very hilarious! Hope you update soon and thanks again for commenting on my YouTube video! I'm glad you found it somewhat amusing!

    Hella
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  • From keebz on January 04, 2008
    Genius chess is the best thing EVER!!! XD also this story is beautifully written and perfectly in character! XD
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  • From JunkieMurderer on January 03, 2008
    Glad someone besides myself finds my name amusing. *grins* I'm also glad for this new chapter. It's not often someone effectively shows L as being older than Light though actions and words. It's easy to forget that while their minds are on the same level, Light is still a teenager and L is an adult. How you manage to write this so well amazes and mystifies me.

    Thank you for another wonderful (and smutty!) chapter.
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  • From RivenLiether on December 31, 2007
    Wow. That was hot. And very amusing. ^^
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  • From egchandl on December 23, 2007
    I have been patiently sifting through the other DN fics around here recently, and I had to stop and review yours because it really struck me. Firstly, you are rarely/never OOC...In a genre where often our fantasies REQUIRE a deviation from plot and often character personalities, you have masterfully directed L and Light through new scenes that feel old. I believe them when they fight; I believe them when they fuss and I believe them when they f***. You have done a great job keeping them...well...them. Also, this whole sequence fits well within the DN storyline. You did not try to resurrect anyone; you did not try to change the inevitable. You merely took a relationship that peers at us through the larger DN arc and found time IN the story to examine it; you also did it with skill. There are minor typos that a simple editing job could eliminate, but all in all this was fantastic. The first few chapters baited us, and like L, I thought we were to be driven slightly mad with our desire...but in ch. 7 we were rewarded with an extremely well written sex scene. Thank you for this well done piece.
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  • From Hellagoddess on December 17, 2007
    Oh my goodness! I've just finished DN for the first time and stumbled across this brilliantly written fiction with almost no effort at all! Usually when entering a new fandom, I find myself having to wade through countless bad plots and shoddy characterization before I find a true gem.

    This was not the case however, as everything seems to be completely spot on, even down to personal habits and such. I like that even though this is written from third-person perspective, there's still a lot of thought/meanings behind actions. It was very true in the manga that every action was thought through and planned before instigating it and I'm glad to see someone following that through in their writing!

    I really like your characterization of L. It's not very hard at all to imagine him doing all the things you've written. I also like your Light. He'd very arrogant but blissfully ignorant when it comes to his own emotions. Matsuda was also very amusing at the start of this chapter but I would still have to say that L is my favorite. I love all the little things he does like watching Light on the screen when he's sitting right next to him and the insistence of chaining him to the towel rail when he showers. I can just imagine Light standing there for half an hour or so, all pissed off but unable to do anything about it - I might actually attempt to do a fanart of it at some stage :)

    Please continue soon! (I know I'll check it every day...) I'm looking forward to this more than I would like to admit. Throughout reading the series, I always thought that the 'chained' situation would be rife for sexual innuendo and situational gags. Glad to see someone writing it so well.

    Hella
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  • From KrystalChronicals on December 16, 2007
    more please
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  • From Loquora on December 15, 2007
    I really loved it. It's so nice to see the two of them not fall into bed and immediately be in love. You know the two of them would have fought it out quite a bit if anything actually were to happen. I can get so lost in the world you create and that's the best part. I can't wait for the rest of it!
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  • From YamiBakura on December 14, 2007
    Chapter 7

    I have no idea what I said to warrant that kind of a response from you, but thank you so much for writing back! I love getting little shout-outs in stories I've reviewed. ^___^

    Hmm... About this chapter. Well, to put it shortly, it was wonderful. I loved it from start to finish. In particular, I love Light. Seriously, "Don't do that when I'm trying to argue with you" was fantastic.

    Also, this this the single best line in Fanfiction EVAR: "Light-kun... You won't win. I have... a secret weapon..." *squees and giggles with fangirlish glee* I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From enslavementthesis on December 13, 2007
    I assure you, your concerns were entirely unfounded.
    That was pretty hot, I must admit.
    I am off to have a cold shower, and I hope that by the time I get back you have updated already. Lol.
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  • From shidoburrito on December 13, 2007
    Well, most definitely a thumbs up to your latest chapter there. I think the make out, argue, make out, argue, sex equation worked out very well! You've done well to build up the angst to that moment from the previous chapters. I can't wait to read more!
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  • From meEksiNs on December 08, 2007
    the fic is brilliant and not to mention hot. update soon ! ^-^ (btw, i luv the invisible games scene - suits them really)
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  • From caramelkisses on December 06, 2007
    I really enjoy the latest chapter. T_T
    It made me all emotional. Lol. I got all "Why can't they just be happy together!?" XD. [I never think that, Lol. I'm a huge Kira supporter. :heart:]

    This chapter was highly enjoyable, and my favorite so far. ::waits for more.::
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