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Reviews for Goodnight Moon

By : Duomi
  • From goddess8878 on December 03, 2007
    Sweet mother of god, this is good! I anxiously await any and all future updates.
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  • From JunkieMurderer on November 26, 2007
    I greatly enjoy this story, and hope you keep writing it. It really is becoming a beautiful piece.
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  • From ReidMorgan on November 14, 2007
    This is such a great fic! I love the interaction between Light and L, and the conversations they have. I think you do an excellent job at keeping them in character while creating an intimate relationship between them. I so can't wait for the next chapter I am seriously hooked. Thanks for writing this!
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  • From anapana83 on November 13, 2007
    First time reading this story. I must say i like it alot. Very intriguing storyline and the dialogue is interesting.
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  • From enslavementthesis on November 13, 2007
    It seems as if the very best writers on AFF seem to all enjoy Death Note.
    You write very well, you seem to capture both L's and Light's personality perfectly. I am very impressed, and I have to say, cannot wait for the next update!
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  • From YamiBakura on November 13, 2007
    Chapter six

    About how long does it usually take for you to get chapters out? Because I am THOROUGLY addicted to this, and I really want more. Update it soon?
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  • From sharingan on November 13, 2007
    Woo! I am happy we got to see a bit more of the old L. I still like that characterization of him a lot. Also I liked Light's analyses of himself as Kira. I've always thought he really should logically be able to come to the same conclusions that L did about him being Kira, even without his memories, because it just makes so much sense. I am curious to see where things will go from here, and I don't know where you are planning to end it but I do kind of hope we get to see how Light reacts if he gets his memories back. He's obviously attracted to L now, so that would be interesting, and I wonder if L would still be able to apprehend him. Either way my money is on a happy ending!
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  • From RivenLiether on October 31, 2007
    Yay, new chapter! ...Now do another one! lol. With kissing this time! ...And maybe more. ^_~
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  • From RivenLiether on October 25, 2007
    Awww man... More! Need more! Death Note yaoi is my new crack. LOL
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  • From sharingan on October 23, 2007
    Haven't had time to read the 4th chapter yet since I'm in a hurry right now but I really wanted to review chapter 3 anyway in the meantime since a few things stood out at me. I loved Light and L's conversation, especially the bit about L wanting to be killed by someone he deemed a worthy opponent. That felt very characteristic of him and I enjoyed their interaction.

    And you're completely right about L's portrayal; I liked those first few shots of him in the series and manga best myself, and his appearance and habits seemed to change significantly once he became fully immersed in the Kira case. I like that you've brought that original part of him back, with a plausible explanation that demonstrates the impact the case is having on everyone's lives, especially in ways that we don't really give much thought to otherwise.
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  • From RivenLiether on October 22, 2007
    WOW! Loving this fic! Well-written, funny, and lots of tension. ^^ Please continue it soon!

    -Riven
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  • From ExtremelyMagical on October 07, 2007
    You should totally keep writing this! I love it so far. They need to fight and pin each other more. :D

    I love it. I really do. :D
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  • From GreatestHits on October 04, 2007
    Great fanfic! Your characterizations are all dead-on, and "genius poker" is incredibly amusing. I wish I could play~! :3
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  • From sharingan on October 02, 2007
    I don't know where you're heading either, but I like it and I hope you continue! The invisible poker was a pretty interesting idea, and Light and L's constant bickering is fun.
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