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  • From Review on November 08, 2007
    Earthix- it does? Oops, I guess I forgot to say how old everyone was in the other fic. I'll get that patched up in the next chapter. As far as masturbation...no further comment. I don't wanna spoil anything for you guys, do I? No. :P Hopefully I'll have the next chapters out before too long...

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  • From on November 08, 2007
    It's alright so far, better than your other one, which seems to fuck up the characters ages. I'd like to see some more misty masturbating to the thought of ash.
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  • From Review on November 07, 2007
    Narukyuforeva- Well, if you really want to find out, then I better post the next chapter, huh?

    Sad thing is, I've been too hyper from my sugar high to concentrate...>_
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  • From Review on October 23, 2007
    Ryuukohaden- Well, if only it were that simple. Yes, they are as naked as the day they were born, but not completly exposed to anyone who happens to peek in the door. Aw shit, I wanna say more, but I can't! Damn it damn it damn it! Ah well, when I get the next chapter out, everyone will know why...

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  • From ANON - Ryuukohaden on October 23, 2007
    I love how Ash's mom has no problem seeing her son in bed, naked, taking a sex nap with some chick he just boned, the sheets probably soaked with fluids.


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  • From Review on October 13, 2007
    Darkened.Naruto- Pfft, the hell if I know how old they are! lol I haven't seen the anime in so long, it's rather sad. HOWEVER, I did catch the episode where Ash and co. were returning to Kanto. Though I am unsure how old they were at the time, your suggestions seem pretty accurate...

    Conan- I take that all words being capitalized is a good thing?? eh, doesn't bother me. And yes, this story will definitely continue, as Chapter 3 is STILL in the works...but I will finish it soon...hopefully. =D

    Well, now that that's over with...

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  • From BlazinAtsuma on October 12, 2007
    Nice story. Good start. How old is everyone in your fic. I know Ash is about 17-19 or so right. May should be about 15-16 then. Hope you update soon I like the story so far keep up the good work...
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  • From Review on October 09, 2007
    Thanks for the review. It's nice seeing that people like my story so far. Chapter 3 is being worked on right now, by the way. Should be up...eventually. :)

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  • From ANON - DemonDude12 on October 08, 2007
    Pretty Hot story. This is actually one of the best ones I've read. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Review on September 29, 2007
    It's Ash/May for now, but that might change...hehehe. Oh, and the action's definitly gonna heat up...soon. Well, thanks for teh review, but now...

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  • From Ari22682 on September 29, 2007
    While I'm not a huge fan of the Ash/May pairing, I will say that I love how well-written this story is. The action between them is good, and I can't wait to see how much it'll heat up in later chapters. Keep up the good work with this.
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  • From Review on September 28, 2007
    Thanks. Chapter 2 should be up in a while. As for Misty, hehe...

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  • From ANON - Red Knight on September 27, 2007
    Great so far, waiting to see how Misty reacts. Can't wait to read chapter 2.
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  • From Review on September 26, 2007
    Heh, thank you both. As said, this is probably gonna contain just mostly sex. I tried a PWP before...but I failed. I can't resist the urge to add plot...X.X. So yes, there's going to be a plot, however minimal it may be. Just to let you know.

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  • From ANON - anonReader on September 25, 2007
    Please continue! You're a good writer, and this has the potential to be good smut :-)
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