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Reviews for Varying Circumstances

By : ExponentialD
  • From PhoenixHelix on January 28, 2011
    Now THIS is a fic thats got me interested! though makes you wonder: how did he get from an abandoned island to Cinnabar so quickly? we'll find out in time i bet ^-^

    Keep at it! looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From fantome1 on January 16, 2011
    Absolutely brilliant and I'm overjoyed to see you back, but this last chap was slightly confusing in places. Hope you get Kristina and Nick together in the end, and babyz for them would be great.

    Your loyal fan, Dave.
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  • From rdobetTev on December 19, 2010
    was this absolxhuman story about a guy named wolf?
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2010


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  • From ANON - Pwin on February 18, 2010
    This is a great story. :) One not just about the sex, but about the plot as well. The main character is nice and the sex scenes are sensual. Very nice!
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  • From ANON - Mors Mortis on December 10, 2009
    despite my somewhat critical review earlier i must admit this is brilliantly written snd i can't wait for the next chapter.

    i apologise if i was too critical but changing the plotline of the original fiction i s a pet hate of mine ever since my first story got flamed constantly for creating a character stronger than the original

    keep up the good work

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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2009
    This is very brilliant. I can't wait to read further chapters.
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  • From ANON - Write Stuff on December 06, 2009
    An interesting story, to be sure, with hot sex and gripping plot. You just need to keep your tenses consistent (past is usually easier to write than present, by the way) and you're golden
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  • From ANON - Mors Mortis on December 04, 2009
    nice inclusion of Slash and his Gardevoir, how did you get his permission?
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  • From daveb on December 02, 2009
    AT LAST.

    Great chapter, but where's Kristina?. More Beast soon plz.

    Please update soon.

    I hope the "final" pairing is Nick/Kristina, btw.
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  • From ANON - FallenWarrior on November 28, 2009
    Wait, was that the end?
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  • From daveb on July 19, 2009
    UPDATE SOON
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  • From daveb on March 30, 2009
    Amen to that Magi^. I agree, the grammar and tense don't have to be perfect and your sex scenes are awesome (Kristina/Arcanine one of the hottest scenes EVER).

    Which reminds me, are you killing of Kristina, I hope not.

    Please update soon, I'm getting withdrawl. Your fan, dave.
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  • From ANON - Jack on February 18, 2009
    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Present_tense

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Past_tense

    Pick one, please. And get a spellchecker. If you're going to write a story in the present tense in the beginning, stick with it throughout. But why, really? To be unique? It just reads strangely. And if you can't work a sex scene into a particular chapter, it probably doesn't belong there.
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  • From RAW19 on February 03, 2009
    I know i've read this story before, but i may not have reviewed it until now. This is quite an excellent fic and it grabbed and held my attention from the first chapter. Sex is great, but i like the one's with a story. (Rush Hour 3 quote) This story has a bit of everything and that's how all serious fics should be. You're a great author and i look forward to future updates from you.
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