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Reviews for A Second Bite

By : AkitaandSubuchan
  • From kenkenken on January 04, 2011
    You really stopped here. For two years now I have been waiting for you to continue but... you really stopped THERE. That's worse than a cold shower. D8

    Anyway - I enjoy your ff[s] greatly. I especially love how your JJ is not a wimp, like in the other ones. Thank you for writing. :3
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  • From ANON - Silvain on December 03, 2007
    Gyah, where's the next part?? *grumbles about busy authors leaving their stories mid-sceene before remebering she does that herself a lot*

    I love this, I can't wait to read the next part!
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  • From ANON - Poshu on November 24, 2007
    woah..... I just got done with ch. 5..... I feel very aweful that I didn't find this until now....Sorry Kita and Subu.... anyway this is hawt and a little.... raunchy.......but that goes without saying, your work is excellent and I love love love Ted growling and his fear in the third chapter.... and his super sonic hearing! :D
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  • From ANON - shadwdryuu on November 04, 2007
    wah! please tell me that isn't the end! that would be so cool to read about, a relationship between ted, drake and JJ, not to mention, the scene in which you left of was incredibly to hot to stop, please continue it!!
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  • From catti on October 29, 2007
    Damn that was sooooooooooo mean...leave us (okay me) totally hanging onto the moment and you have to end it right there!!!..I dont know who to blame Subu-chan or Kita-chan...maybe both...have not been douling out enough chocolate or what?...cries...well you have to update before 11/08 because Im going on vacation for ten days...PLEASE!!!...If you update before then, Ill buy you one of those spinning Mickey Mouse lights...their so pretty when its dark out....Ill even through in Minnie ears for Subu-chan...laughs....catti
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 28, 2007
    where is the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - kUmAgoRo-BeAm on October 27, 2007
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon, im loving this story heaps!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From catti on October 26, 2007
    Feeling better, but wonder where you two have been..*sobs*..no one writes, no one calls...*sobs*..feel so unloved...*ooo, is that a 5lb box of chewy carmels?*...umbfebeteretebb...*swallows*..update soon?..catti
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  • From DuosAngel on October 26, 2007
    Ah! Damnit chapter five better be in the works right now because I just can't stand the wait! You must give me something!Even if it's just a bite!
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  • From Kuragari75 on October 26, 2007
    .... *whimper* I wanna read more!!! please update again soon... I'm finding this very entertaining! ^^ i love the way you write this... it's beautifully discriptive and so much fun to read!!! please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - kuragari on October 19, 2007
    OH MY GOD!!!! so fucking sexy!!! I love you forever for this story... NOW UPDATE!!!! please!!!! don't leave us hanging!!!!
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  • From moontatoo on October 18, 2007
    OMG!!! Don't leave me hanging !! This is so erotic, where's the rest?!!

    Anxiously awaiting Ted's deflowering,

    your friend moon
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  • From moontatoo on October 15, 2007
    this is so awesome, I just love this story! oh I smell a threesome on the wind, along with Ted-wolf! These three guys are my favorite trio hands down. Love your descriptions of Ted's sensations, of Drake's comforting, of JJ's barely controlled lust, both physical and mental. I can't wait to read more, each installment is like a special treat that gets yummier and yummier!

    moontatoo
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  • From DuosAngel on October 13, 2007
    Well I must admit, at first I didn't think I'd like this and 'Bite to Remember' but you two have won me over. Now I'm dying for the next chapter so please update soon!
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  • From catti on October 12, 2007
    Ok...that was pure evil...hanging us like that...fine I have something to get even with...oooohhhh Akita-san!?!?!...(hums)...looky what I got?..see the pretty double fudge chocolate cake?..isnt it lushious...ooooooo....see the pretty three layers of chocolate cake with doubl fudge filling and fudge frosting?...do you want it Akita-san?...its all yours...here take it...YUMMY....(now Suba-chan, UPDATE)...catti-dono
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