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By : Stormborn Apostle

From ANON - Anon on November 07, 2007
"One of these days, I'll find the right fetish and you'll be fapping like a fucking meerkat.

Or something."

BEHOLD, THE TWI THAT TAKES TOO LONG TO REPLY TO REVIEW REPLIES THAT ARE ACTUALLY REVIEWS.

Or something.

The only problem with that is, you've hit the right buttons so far...

It's just my inner romantic kills the fappability. DX THE ROMANCE! I LOVE IT, BUT IT HURTS ME SO! In that way, it is a sign of quality; you've made something that's not 'OMFG YOU! OMFG ME! *SEX*' enough that I can't fap to it. DX

But alas, I feel as though I'm rambling again. :P

Hmm. Come to think of it... what story of yours do you plan on updating next? I can't seem to find anywhere that you've said...

...But that might just be me being incompetent again. XD
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From Bishonen on November 07, 2007
Out of boredom I watched an episode of pokemon and at the end the narrator said they�d never be quite the same and as soon as I heard that I couldn�t help but yell �Yes they will.� I mean it�s just like you say no plot development and plus how come no one ages Ash should be at least twenty something by now

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

p.s the reason i left the review her is sinners review page take to long to load anymore
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From ANON - Pokefurry on November 07, 2007
This was great i loved everything about it oh and with that Christmas oneshot a candcane might be fun but now htat i think about it that might hurt a bit
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From ANON - Anonymous on November 07, 2007
This is the sort of thing I would expect from a somewhat-AU non-canon oneshot.

Nice work. My only quibble (and it may just be me) is the use of such a sugary treat for such a purpose (and consciously thinking of that made me think of how large and durable the candy must have been, but that's more believable). I'd be worried about Gardy getting some kind of infection! Of course, that (probably) won't happen (will it? I don't /think/ that's where you were going with it)...

Semi-related side comment: Your comments somewhere (too lazy to find them now, heh) about the "original versions" or however you said it of the three main characters made me imagine some sort of "many worlds" universe where versions of those three are fated to constantly run into/interact with eachother. The first example I can think of (that is coherent, so it rules out any I've come up with) is the Evangelion universe, with its dating sim-ish "Angelic Days" spinoff. Of course, that could just be some sort of mind-melded version of "reality is relative" taken to an extreme as opposed to parallel dimensions or reincarnation.

And THAT made me think of Zelda. *shakes head* I think I'll just stop typing now. My point was either already made or long forgotten.

Take care.
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From Stormborn Apostle on November 07, 2007
Imasuky Lomae---Like Gardevoir's magic retractable chest...thing. Heh.

DizzyRye---I shall never stop writing. To quote "Throw Momma From The Train", a writer writes---ALWAYS.

The Christmas oneshot will be swell (despite me not liking it myself). Hot chocolate, walks on cold nights, lights and snow and mistletoe and blah blah blah. I'll probably just "suspension-of-disbelief" the whole religion thing, because I'm too lazy to Jirachify it, lol.

Incidentally, I'm saving devil Gardevoir for the bondage oneshot. :-O
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From ANON - DizzyRye on November 06, 2007
First off, the requisite 'you are a golden god' comments. Seriously, though, if you stop writing, I think the number of depression-based suicides will triple or something.

Now for a funny comment.

"Mr. Slash, how many licks does it take to get to the center of a Gardevoir?"

"I never made it without cumming, ask Mr. Pants Python."

"One, two-ooh, th-three -Aaah!- three."

Yeah, just stole your joke, but had to say it anyways.

With Christmas just around the corner, I'm wondering just what sort of devilishly adorable set-up you'll go with. I see a snowball fight, with Psymakio using her Psy powers to epic effect, then when they go inside to warm up... Well, they get plenty warmed up.
Not sure if Christmas itself would work, or if you'd want to Poke-fy it a little. Maybe something like Jirachimas? Slash and Psymakio could get a bit of fun out of celebrating the enemies' holiday in their own sexiful way.
Regardless, since you're writing it, it will be incredible. Not to put pressure on you or anything. Or is it?

(Fairy Psymakio is cute, but the little Devil Gardevoir in my head is kyewt too... The little wings, and pointed tail, maybe a pitchfork and either bat wing ears or horns, kyaah!)
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From Bishonen on November 06, 2007
About that line candy fucking? lol they're never gonna buy this in my stories i've often used and expanding dildo which you can use in any of your stories if you can think up a reason why it would exist I always just say magic or something like that

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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From Stormborn Apostle on November 06, 2007
Magi Kavin---I know. As I mentioned in one of the earlier review responses, I just wanted blow pops cuz THEY'RE FUCKING DELICIOUS, but the Tootsie Pop line was better.

Incidentally, I almost decided against the idea when it came to me. I thought to myself, "candy fucking? lol they're never gonna buy this". But apparently the people here are just as perverted as me, so HEH.

So yes. How many licks does it take to get to the center of a Gardevoir? LET'S FIND OUT.

A-one, a-two, a-three...

*orgasm*

Three.
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From ExponentialD on November 06, 2007
I loved the fiction, but one thing that struck me.. it's Tootsie Roll Pops that that phrase was coined for, not Blow Pops. XD That small thing aside, I did enjoy it, and it was very... unique. Candy play! Keep up the good work!
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From Stormborn Apostle on November 05, 2007
Fluffy_lover---I might be spoiling everyone in the next month or two with Sinners chapters, heheh.
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From ANON - Fluffy_lover on November 05, 2007
Great job Slash.You are spoiling us ;)

Too bad we don't celebrate Halloween where I live , it seems to be so fun.
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From Stormborn Apostle on November 03, 2007
CrazyIvan---Gardevoir should be in Smash Brothers Brawl, with her ultimate move being getting naked. Or something.

Imasuky Lomae---Nothing helps me sleep. There are things that get me tired, but tired and sleepy are distinctly different, sigh.

Negativety101---It must be horrible with the 500+ reviews on Sinners, lol. Maybe AFF should implement some sort of page system, with maybe 30-50 reviews on one page. If ever you want to leave me a review, but can't load/access the page, you can always e-mail me, heh.

Gardevoir's costume...at first I was trying to think of something good and symbolic for her, like Slash being a pirate...but then realized that, at her current stage of cultural knowledge, would probably just pick something cute and shiny, lol.

Incidentally, if the pirate ship's a-rocking, don't come a-knocking.

And speaking of Watson...things are be fun with him in the next couple chapters of Sinners. ^_^

Imasuky Lomae---Heh, I'm not really a foot fetishist myself, but my writing knows no bounds, so we'll see, lol.

Anon---HINT: She had more than one thing to suck on. :-O

Chapter 17 of Sinners is slated for mid-November. :3
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From ANON - Anon on November 03, 2007
Bloody magnificent one-shot. Too bad we didn't get to see what Gardevoir did for Slash.

Can't wait for the continuation of Sinners.
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From Bishonen on November 03, 2007
Something i just thought about i was looking up Gardevoir hentai and i couldn't help but think what sexy littlie feet Gardevoir have so maybe in a one shot there could be some foot fetish stuff because there's not nearly enough on the site.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

P.s. Part of what got me thinking about that was when Psymakio talked about her fet hurting if i'd been slash iwould have given her a foot rub. :)
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From ANON - Negativety101 on November 02, 2007
Let me just mention one thing before I get to the review. For some reason my computer does not have an easy time loading the review page once it gets enough on it. So I have not been commenting on Sinners like I would have liked to. Heck I don't even remember for sure if I used this alias. I was the guy who mentioned the Books in the library in Daimond.
Anyways the reveiw. Too damn cute. I had a fun time picturing Psymyako in her costume. And of course their was candy... Sweet sweet candy. Interesting to see Slash's romatic streak with his discription of pirates. Even if pirates were to exist and the two leads relationship accepted I can see one problem. The pirates would have to ask them to keep it down at night. As for Watson, he seems to be like the cool grandpa or uncle. He's had a lot of life experences and has learned from them. It makes him a very interesting charecter in this.
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