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By : Stormborn Apostle

From Bishonen on November 02, 2007
I also have problems with candy but in my case it's more or less that i'll eat like ten bags in one sitting or a gallon of ice cream with three kinds of syrup half a jar of cherries some sweet coffee powder mix a couple handfuls of cereal some cookies and a glass of sugar milk. And the funny thing is it actually puts me to sleep

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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From ANON - CrazyIvan on November 02, 2007
Hello it is me. I'm reviewing from my Wii here. I'll keep this short.
Alright, a good pointless smut. Nothing more nothing less. Good job.
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From Stormborn Apostle on November 02, 2007
Black Whole---Well, remember that a good deal of my reviews are my responses...plus, since Sinners is a very popular work and has a lot of fans, they're more inclined to give this derivative oneshot a read than some totally new story, heh. The review rate will drop off as the story slides off the page.

I hate candy. I mean, I love eating it (and fucking fuck, would I love to lollipop a female with it), but it hurts my teeth and keeps me awake all night. So I hate it...AND YET, I LOVE IT :-(

I'm pretty sure the next oneshot will be Christmas, although it'll probably be shown as some winter festival that's similar to Christmas (no Christianity in Hoenn). I might make a New Year's one too, if I can write it really fast. Plus there's the bondage idea that's been floating in my head. I think I'll call that one "Always Have A Safe Word" or something, lol.
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From Stormborn Apostle on November 02, 2007
Imasuky Lomae---I know, Flower's death made me cry, too. I hope Zaphod finds someone new soon...HE DESERVES HAPPINESS DAMMIT

Tyrant---I think the Christmas one will be a lot longer than this one. There's a lot more cutesy stuff that can happen then...hot chocolate and walks in the winter and the like.

If you (or anyone) wants to send me pics or anything, don't forget you can all e-mail me at slashfirestorm@inbox.com, anytime! :shameless plug for the sinners mailing list:

Imasuky Lomae---Any girl who comes to my house will have to deal with a bored, post-lemon-writing Slash wielding lollipops. We can all guess what would happen then, ohoho.

Incidentally, chapter 17-19 of Sinners (kind of a mini-arc for Arc 2) are completely planned and production will begin quite soon.

monkeygodlance---It was because you mentioned Thanksgiving, and I was thinking of things I could do for such a oneshot, lol. Now, Gardevoir in an apron could happen maybe if Slash gets sick (a potential storyline for a oneshot I've been mulling over)...
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From monkeysocietyleader on November 02, 2007
I NEVER SAID ANYTHING ABOUT A TURKEY LEG!!! I suggested Psymakio in an apron, no turkey leg, that shit's disgusting. Why cant there be a fluffy one-shot, like how Sinners was before the sex. That's what I was thinking of!
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From Bishonen on November 01, 2007
No real reason for saying this but me girl from the ring so if you don�t update in seven days I�m coming to your house in the costume

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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From TyrantWave on November 01, 2007
Once again, another great one from ya Slash ^_^

And I'm already looking forward to Christmas XD

For Halloween... I went as a 50's Godfather, complete with bodyguard :-O
I can get a pic if you wanna laugh.
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From Bishonen on November 01, 2007
More than Mozart I�m reeling from the loss of Flower I first found out after waking up from a nap I couldn�t sleep at all for the rest of the night but Rocketdog seems to be doing okay.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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From Stormborn Apostle on November 01, 2007
monkeygodlance---I don't think either of those days would work. Besides, using a lollipop is a hell of a lot hotter than a turkey leg. O_O;

As the main story goes on and the relationship is clarified, I bet I can make a oneshot where the two of them are married, a la "I Love Lucy" or something, heheh...

GARDEVOIR, YOU GOT SOME SPLAININ' TO DO

Twi---One of these days, I'll find the right fetish and you'll be fapping like a fucking meerkat.

Or something.

Incidentally, I'm still crying over Mozart (MM fans, I'm sure you are too)...WHY DID SHE HAVE TO DIE!?!?

RR---Trick or treating is fun, although the past few years I've been the chump who stays behind to hand out candy. But I declare, if I had a blow pop and a lady with an open mind...heh. Heheh. Yeah...

I put in the Q+A when I was reading over the first draft and realized "oh fuck, where are the other Pokemon?" I tried to think of various locations/explanations for where they could be, but then decided it'd detract from the story and just ignore them. Heh, just a oneshot...a few plot-holes are allowed. :3

Black Whole---Yes, I love making her so cute (but, at the same time, not some damsel-in-distress wuss character)...and so sexy, heh. I HAVE A FEELING THEY'LL GO BLOW POP HUNTING LIKE CRAZY FROM NOW ON

My costume was some generic skull-robe thing. Bleh. I got ravaged by mosquitoes, too. asdfsafd

The storing of blow pops may speed up my writing, especially if females allow me to do...sugary experiments. :-O

ThatGuy---Oh fuck, last night was horrible for me. Not Halloween itself, but the sugar. I hadn't eaten a lot of sugary stuff at once in a long time (my teeth hurt when I do)...so I forgot about how badly it fucked up my sleep schedule. I was hyper-exhausted, but because I was only tired, not sleepy, I was up the whole night. Didn't get to sleep til like 7 in the morning, bleh.

I like Watson too. I prefer his character to not be the stereotypical dirty-old-man, but to more of a...knowledgeable and open-minded veteran, heh.

And hey, what a coincidence, I typed the story with one hand, too! :-O

Fogu-s_Tofu---I wish I had a girl, and then I'd wish for her to let me do that, lol.

Imasuky Lomae---Incidentally, I've always viewed Slash as having Native American roots...or rather, an appropriate Hoenn equivalent. I don't know if it'll ever come up in the story itself, but I often make lots of details for characters that aren't ever explicitly seen, although they still make up a part of their personality.

In any case, candy is hotter than them fucking in a vat of mashed potatoes or something, lol.
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From Bishonen on November 01, 2007
Don�t do a Thanksgiving one-shot that�s the whiteman�s holiday an as a Native American I can�t approve of that holiday and just about the only thing you could do in a story like that involves a turkey leg and as kinky as I am that�s just kinda gross on second thought I�d almost like to see that

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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From RWO on November 01, 2007
I wish i could get my girl to do that.
:(
She's stubborn.

Very good story.
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From Review on November 01, 2007
It's times like these I wish I wasn't such a candy addict.. >.> Moving on...

Now, I'm sure everyone else has said it enough, but this is one kickass story. Sure, it was a oneshot, but it was awesome! Especially Watson at the end...that was so funny.

Well, I would say more, but my hand is currently busy at the moment...lol It is VERY hard to type with one hand, if you know what I mean. lol

Meh, I can't think of anything else to say. Now, back to fapping...lol

KABOOM!
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From ANON - RR on November 01, 2007
Hello, and this is the Random Reviewer, coming to review this story. Actually, now that I look at it, it's only a oneshot....oh the hell with it. This piece combines the thrill of trick-or-treating(which I still do, thank you xD), SEX thanks to a lollipop, and a bit of comedy at the very end. Watson is so awesome, no doubt about that.

HOWEVER my favorite part was the VERY end with the Q and A section. That was so funny, I fell out of my chair, which fell onto me. It was painful, but my goodness that was hilarious. Random Reviewer, AWAY!

~Random Reviewer
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From ANON - Anon on November 01, 2007
Heh. Nice oneshot. Had a few chuckle-tastic moments...

...But I still can't find it in me to fap to it. DX

Ah well. I guess you could call it a sign of quality, or something. Or you could just call me weird. Either one works. :P
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From monkeysocietyleader on November 01, 2007
Well, from I can see, I guess you have two chances, Veterans day, and Thanksgiving, which neither are that romantic originally. However, if you tried, you could probably think of something. I wouldn't mind reading about Psymakio in an apron. Just trying to help.
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