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Reviews for Why I Said Yes

By : nlightnd
  • From MedeaDemonblood on October 10, 2008
    Really enjoyable work. Seras exhibits a personality here that we don't often get from fanfiction. It's refreshing to see her be a bit of a spitfire once in awhile rather than just silly, bumbling and easily dominated.
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  • From LadyNocturneJuliet on June 21, 2008
    I love your story. I love the way you expressed Alucard's and Seras' emotions and the tension that built up between them. Well done. =)
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  • From ShadowedDragon on March 30, 2008
    I read this a whiiiiiiiile ago so I'm sorry it's taken me a while to review. This is great! It's nice to see the point of view of both Seras and Alucard as concerning her changing. It's really cool!
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  • From ANON - m on February 23, 2008
    yay
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  • From 1upmushroom on February 21, 2008
    It almost seems like the recipe for making Alucard and Serras NOT OOC is to have Alucard drive her nuts in subtle, M rated, sometimes violent ways to show he's interested, and to lower the percentage rate of angst on Serras. Some should be mixed in but she doesn't show it so often, I mean.

    But anyway, I did like this fic, not bad. Is it over? The way ch.3 ended it seems like you've gotten where you were going.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2007
    this fic is really sweet even if they are ooc lol, u shud update
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  • From CountryWhoDunnit on December 09, 2007
    Mmmm I loves it! It's perhaps a little OOC, but not enough to detract from the story or anything. Kudos!
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  • From alucardsangel1973 on November 28, 2007
    Another wonderful chapter. The tension between Alucard and Seras is so well built up. Poor Seras, she thinks Alucard was talking of another British female vampire when he's talking about her! I love this story! And personally, I don't see Alucard and Integra out of character at all. While Alucard is rather psychotic in battle and can be very sarcastic and selfish, that's not all there is to Alucard. I see him as a very complex character with a whole range of emotions that most of the time he keeps very well hidden. Integra can be the same way. Most of the time she's that stone cold, all buisness seek and destroy person, but she is a woman, and even she can have a soft side.
    I am enjoying this very much and I hope you will continued further. I can't wait to see how the next chapter will unfold.
    Please keep up the excellent work.
    Silverrose
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  • From 1upmushroom on November 28, 2007
    You're right about how most people, sometimes, go out of character at points. But, there are methods and means to 'get things out in the open' without going even a bit OOC, and those fics that find those sneaky loopholes are the ones that leave me begging for more.

    I could just cut it short and say in my humble opinion, OOC'ness don't mix with fics that win.
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  • From ANON - Jacen on November 25, 2007
    WOW .... great first chapter i really want to see what Alucard does next and how Seras reacts to it. Hope she just doesnt give wouldnt be any fun at all. :)
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  • From Obscura on November 21, 2007
    Please write more! This was just amazing. I mean, I'm no expert in things concerning Hellsing, but I think your characters were... well... quite in character. All those describtions were also wonderful... well... you get the point, I suppose.
    Would be great if you could write some kind of continuation. *sits down and waits*
    Obscura
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  • From ANON - Warlock420 on November 16, 2007
    Nicely done cant wait to see were u go with this story :)
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  • From ANON - AngelOfSilence on November 16, 2007
    Very nice. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
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  • From alucardsangel1973 on November 15, 2007
    This story defintely as the makings of a very good read. I'm already drawn in and this is just the first chapter. You've defintely set the stage well during the first act...so let's see how far this goes and how good it gets as the story grows. I'm very anxious to see what happens next. And I love the more friendly reaction between Intera and Seras. Most of the time Integra is a rather cold and shrewd character when it comes to business of Hellsing, so it's nice to see the occassional moment when she allows herself to be a little relaxed with her feeings.
    Please continue!
    Silverrose
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