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Reviews for Black Moon Triumphant

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  • From ANON - h on December 04, 2010
    I enjoyed this story a great deal. Though logically, it would make more sense to end with a galactic orgy. ^_^
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  • From SailorAF on September 11, 2010
    Probably best sailor moon hentai fanfiction ever. I'm under impression. Thanks to this story I was inspired to write too.
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  • From ANON - rb9 on September 06, 2010
    WOW! This is really well-done, a little bleak of course. You are an awesome bad end writer. Do some mind control or gently bad end some time :)
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  • From BakaMazoku on July 09, 2010
    Definitely enjoyed this Darkfic. It's rare to see a darkfic with a true 'Bad End'... 2 thumbs up.

    Althou, there is the odd thought of the Dark Moon family plotting to strike back further in time with more time travel shenanigans. The Moon Kingdom also had a queen. ^_^
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  • From Leeslane on July 07, 2010
    Glad to see you're still active. Thanks for the update.
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  • From Scorpinac on July 06, 2010
    And, still super disturbing, but then that was sort of the point, wasn't it? Not sure that lined up with where the "split off" cliff-hanged, though, but whatever. I would point out that you never had the Black Moon capture the Outer Senshi, and I'm pretty sure they would step in eventually to fight. Just saying. Well, until we finally have yet another chapter of "Jadeite's Revenge" then. Laters.
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  • From ANON - Momo on March 21, 2010
    I know it's not likely, but I really think you should continue Sailor Moon's captivity with Demando! I think you're a brilliant author, and the way you masterfully handled the Sailor Senshis' captivity with amazing description AND depth, I think a Demando/Sailor Moon story would be complete LOVE. It would however be alot more tame than this story, since Demando loves Sailor Moon and wouldn't torture her (hell, he won't even force himself on her), but I think there's alot of potential since Demando thinks Sailor Moon will eventually come around, and the threat of Tuxedo Mask coming to rescue her could play into that somehow too. Just my thoughts (and fantasies XD). Anyways, coming back to BMT, I'm actually glad that you ended this on a "happy" note; as much as I enjoyed the enslavement and all, I'm glad the girls got a chance to fight back and win their freedom (my inner feminist calls for girl power!). Their characterizations were spot on, and I'm glad Emerald got what she deserved, woot woot. Again, incredible job (and I mean, INCREDIBLE), and I will definitely be moving on to your other stories! :D
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  • From Darkling on February 17, 2010
    Just finished the story and I've got to say, this is a very good Sailormoon darkfic if I ever saw one - you have my praise! :).

    All things considered though, I was rather surpised that you made it a rather happy ending in the end (well, not quite happy as such, as it's left rather open - but at least, they managed to escape). With the curcumstances beign as dark as they were, I was sure that the things were headed towards a "bad" or even "dark" ending, but instead the opposite happened. Not a bad thing though as I'm at heart a sucker for happy/good endings even in dark circumstances - and if thew author manages to surpise his/her reader, then that's usually a good thing too :) . Nonetheless, I sure wouldn't mind seeing this alternative ending you mention, where things presumably ends a lot worse for the girls...
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  • From ANON - Masterdudemind on November 08, 2008
    Excellent story. The characterization, scenes and everything else was richly detailed. Never let anyone say you're not skilled!

    Shame it had to end so quickly, but there was much enjoyment had and it ain't like you're getting paid. I'd love to see what happened to the Sailors afterwards and or the alternate ending, but I'll be riding your awesome stuff no matter what!
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  • From Zimarah on October 27, 2008
    I guess I'm a little curious as to what happens to Moon and the other senshi, but the story ended well, and I was surprised that Esmeraude got what was coming to her. Overall, a great story and I'm loving your others as well.
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  • From Scorpinac on October 27, 2008
    Hmm, how ironic, yet appropriate. All in all, this is probably among the most disturbing fics I've ever read. Now, how about more of Jadeite's Revenge? That one I'm rather enjoying.
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  • From ricobanderas9 on October 01, 2008
    I liked it! Nice ending, great fiction. If you do write a bad end 'alternate,' it would be nice if she mind controlled them somehow. Or just seduced them to make it believable.


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  • From whogirl on August 07, 2008
    I think you've done a great job with this chapter and you've set up the story so wonderfully. I can't wait to see how this has affected Ami and what Makoto will end up doing.
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  • From ANON - none on August 07, 2008
    I like it, update soon.
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  • From whogirl on August 01, 2008
    These chapters really are great and I can't wait to read the next installment from Makoto's perspective. Will Ami and Rei approach her about escape? I also hope you do a chapter on Usagi, and whether or not she'll submit to Demando, probably under the guise of an exchange-her submission for their freedom, which won't turn out well (and if she does if Dark Lady will disappear since she probably won't be born anymore). Or maybe a brief little thing on what Mamoru is up to.

    I just really like your characterizations, writing style and descriptions, and plot. You've set everything up wonderfully and I hope to read more.
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