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Reviews for Falling Empires

By : angeloracle
  • From KIKI441 on September 14, 2008
    hurray! you updated. i really thought
    nagi was going to send ken through the wall
    when he started to talk. and who would have
    thought schuldig could be so kind and
    considerate. now that everyone has met
    when will they be aloud to go out and
    start their dsstruction of takatori and
    essett?
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  • From fairywm on April 11, 2008
    well written... might just finish reading it....well when you finish writing it that is....
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  • From Argyle on March 27, 2008
    As much as I despise the word "chappie" as a disgustingly idiotic fangirlism and the whole porn without much plot genre, you've managed to create a halfway decent "what if" story. If you keep up with your characterizations and tone down the splooge, this has the potential to develop into something resembling a dime store epic.
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  • From KIKI441 on March 17, 2008
    so omi is a telekinetic also. i bet nagi was shocked to see
    that. it would have been interesting to see omi and nagi
    battle it out but that would have destroyed the shop. so,
    is crawford going to separate them and have them in their
    prespective group or all they going to remain one big group. and
    if they pair off, who will be the one to name them to weiss since
    that is what aya calls the kitten.

    this story is great i can't wait until the next chapter. i hope
    it's soon. i want to see if omi and nagi makes up. i hope so.
    poor nagi is so jealous, i wonder if omi knows how the boy
    feels and he didn't want to get serious with him because he
    works for his father. i just love the way how you let nagi's
    jealous of ken and the fact that he just plan hates him, slam
    ken against the wall from his nasty remark when he called
    them freaks.
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  • From IntHellsing on March 13, 2008
    Wow. How didn't I find this before?

    This is a really interesting story, I hope that you'll decide to continue it?
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  • From KIKI441 on February 21, 2008
    hi, i just read all six chapters to your story and it was GREAT!. this
    is an intriguing plotline you have. i was interesting in what omi was
    going to tell nagi about his kidnaping. all the memebers of weiss is there
    but they are not a team. so, poor little omi is the only one without a
    power. awww, i'm sure nagi would prefer omi to have the power instead
    of ken. why not think about changing your mind about omi. you should
    let him have a power also. you could let him control water or earth or
    the air.

    anyway, again i love the story. i bit my bottom lip when i came to the
    ending of chapter 6. oh well, guess i have no choice but to wait, huh.
    update soon! okay!
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