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Reviews for Jaedite's Revenge

By : PorkChopExpress
  • From momoismypeach on July 04, 2008
    Finally an update! That was great I think Jaedite is softening up to Mars and that's so cute. I can't wait til they get all of the other Senshis lol.
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  • From JOler on June 21, 2008
    Love the story so far. I'd totally adore it if Jadite got hoist by his own petard and actually did fell in love with Mars. If the rest of the girls eventually figure out they are being played, that would be great too. Then they can get even in every way possible. (Remember the saying 'Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned ....' just imagine the fury they'll feel towards the guys that played them).

    mofaf1
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  • From Scorpinac on June 07, 2008
    Well, at least Mina's starting to realize she's being totally played, that's something. But I'm betting Tenorite's gonna bag a girl in very short order. Though frankly I'd love to see one of these idiot try to bag Uranus or Neptune! And trying to bag Moon could definitely be more problematic at this juncture than it sounds! Well, until chapter 10, and as you say, hopefully sooner than this one. Laters.
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  • From ANON - hentaituxedomask on June 07, 2008
    i enjoyed it alot, nice power play, and good descriptive scenes. plus it's sailormoon and we can always use a bit more sailormoon fanfiction if you ask me.
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  • From Xelleon on May 21, 2008
    This is a great story, with erotic scenes and a suspensefull plot! I wonder when cute litte Ami will get her turn. Do you think you could have her get surprise-fucked (raped) with her uniform still on?
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  • From Raphaella on May 01, 2008
    Well thus far, Sir Pork of the Chops Express the eighth, I have found this story to be highly arousing in all the right parts, while not lacking in notable plot content. The only thing I found startling is the ease with which The Fire Mistress accepts her fate. She seemed to be possessed of a strong, proud spirit, prior to her defeat. I would have thought she would require more time, or ‘punishment’ before becoming so complacent. Well I shall have to pick up where I left off (chapter five) later today, as I am notably lacking in sleep. – Silly Hats Only- Raphaella Von’Mercer
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  • From momoismypeach on April 29, 2008
    I really hope you update soon. It's so sweet that Jadite's more softer with rei I hope they do fall in love.
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  • From momoismypeach on April 28, 2008
    I hope you update soon
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  • From momoismypeach on April 28, 2008
    lol venus is so gullible
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  • From momoismypeach on April 28, 2008
    great chapter even though the collar prevents it from happening I think it would be cute if they had a baby together
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  • From ANON - mofaf1 on April 21, 2008
    I can't wait to see if Jaedite gets caught in his own trap and actually begins to fall for his prisoner. It seems like Mars has fallen for him to a degree .. though it could just be a case of Stockholm Syndrome setting in.
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  • From Zimarah on March 25, 2008
    You could have fooled me with all the Physics talk. I did take some Physics in university, but that didn't help me much. The consentual yuri came out well, so props to you there. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From Scorpinac on March 25, 2008
    Well, it's nice to see that those two are going to join the "party". Lord knows, the others could use the help! And I found the "scientific" dissertation on the Dark Kingdom interesting. I look forward to the next chapter. Laters.
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  • From ANON - laura on February 29, 2008
    I been reading our story you are great at this. I want to know will he ever know that they were together in past. Will he remember the love they had for eachother. What about the scouts do they know that sailor mars is missing. I would liketo see these two to be together like a couple Jadiete was really good to her when he served the prince. I would like him and the scouts to be allis but not so soon. But would like him to remember sooner than later.
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  • From Zimarah on February 23, 2008
    I think it was quite believable. It gets tricky to figure the characters out when you put them in such extreme situations. There's still a hint of the old Mars there, hating the leash, but for the most part she's been pretty beaten mentally. I think you did a great job on both her and Jadeite's characterizations.
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