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Reviews for Jaedite's Revenge

By : PorkChopExpress
  • From ANON - that guy on February 22, 2008
    Great chapter. I can't explain why i like it so much but this fic is one i look forward to reading. good Luck on the exams and come back swinging with another rockin chapter.
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  • From ANON - bibi3758 on February 22, 2008
    You wouldn't know how happy i am. You've updated :) I like the Mars bit more than the Venus bit. Hope it will still be 'Mar concentrated' on the next chp.
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  • From Scorpinac on February 22, 2008
    Yeah, it was fairly believable. And is Jadeite actually starting to fall in love with her there? Ooh, that'll put a crimp in his plans. And frankly just the thought of Usagi at Zaherite's "mercy" frightens me, especially considering the potential time paradox that would erupt as a result. And yet, I look forward to the possibility of more Senshi being taken prisoner before the end. Until next chapter, Laters.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 11, 2008
    I think that I like mars side of the story better but this story is just as good as the first one that I read from you. Thanks. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - some guy on February 10, 2008
    I like this one a lot more then your other story. The consensual slave is a rarity that is not often explored in this way. I love how Rei and Minako are at opposite ends of the spectrum and can't wait to see what comes next. The pacing is very good and the back-story makes this feel like an offshoot of the cannon. Best of luck to you on this and your other story.
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  • From ANON - JWM on January 31, 2008
    Nice! It was a good idea to bring in the OCs, they add background to the Dark Kingdom as well as showing that the plot doesn't focus only on Jaedite. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Laura on January 28, 2008
    I enjoyed reading your story it is great. As I was reading it I can really picture the characters in my mind great job. Keep up the good work. When are you gonnna up date.
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  • From Scorpinac on January 26, 2008
    Ah, the old subtle brainwashing/conditioning ploy, a classic. I almost pity poor Minako-Chan. Almost. So now the question is, "Will anyone else make a go at the few remaining Senshi still at liberty?" Can't wait to find out. Hopefully in chapter 7. Laters.
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  • From jenamalone on January 22, 2008
    Love this story. I think it is really good and highly believable. I hope you continue it, I think it has a lot of potential. Wonderful, darling! Just wonderful
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  • From HoneyB9 on January 22, 2008
    .Amazing chapter. Omg. You have no idea
    That was awesome. Not to mention incredibly hot. I really admire your ability to write. Excellent chapter!
    Showing his pure lust for her is intoxicating and you write it well.
    Can you please update the story because I have to know what will happen next.
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  • From hazry on January 11, 2008
    omg omg omg omg omg! this has got to be the best i've read its im speechless and i need more, and omg ur not done, and omg this is great and omg pplleassse update . ur writing is magnificent, and wonderful, i was drawn into everything, your writing is great!


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  • From HoneyB9 on January 10, 2008
    keep up the good work
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  • From kitryder on January 10, 2008
    Great Job.I will give u 5 stars for your masterpiece of work.
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  • From miakitty on January 10, 2008
    Jaedite is hot i love him! i'm not a fans of rei hino bcoz her charachter is stubborn and rough (i like usagi or minako) but its good to have jaedite tamed her fiery nature.
    I think what makes the sex hot is because he hate her wit pure hatred,hell he can kill her antime he want but he decided to fuck her senseless instead.If i were rEI,i will submit to jaedite before he even try to kill me lol I was very dissapointed when jaedite died (in the cartoon version).just dont kill him please. i have a serious crush on him. I hope the sailor coudnt resque rei.
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  • From jossie on January 10, 2008
    LLLOOOOVVVEEEE LLLOOOVVVVEEE LLLOOOOVVVVEEEE! Love it so much!! hell u rock the world hard wit ur smokin hot story!! there's nothing more hot than male dom and slave master thing! i'm soo into it,and so loving this story. post the next chapter please =) I'll be da first to read
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