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Reviews for Jaedite's Revenge

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  • From ANON - h on August 13, 2011
    Mmm, evilicious. I love the degradation together with the tenderness.
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  • From ANON - Janissa on July 03, 2011
    I liked and really enjoyed reading your story, it is both entertaining and hot. I hope you continue it. hmmm as a suggestion poor Venus is now the lowest slave, maybe she can serve Sailor Mars as an added humiliation in the eyes of the dark kingdom. I also think that Venus would begin to realize just how much her previous master Variscite was almost loving to her. Perhaps she can help bring him back. As to the other sailors scouts I am not sure if I want them to be able to rescue the others or to be captured as slave. The way you developed the Dark Kingdom implies that there isa whole city with normal people in it. Men, Women, and perhaps a few children. Where the scouts have this vision of the Dark Kingdom as an awfull dark place of evil monsters. So it would be entertaining for them to see the people of the city. The evil generals and Jaedite are not very good examples of a normal dark kingdom citizen.

    I hope you write more chapters on this story and I think Venus is a natural slave while Sailor mars might be a submissive but she might be more than able to top venus and perhaps Ami. I alos like how you have Jaedite and Sailor Mars falling in love, will she be able to change him to be less evil, that is the question.
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  • From ANON - Fostersb on June 19, 2011
    I was so happy to see another chapter in the story and I love how torn I am feeling. On the one hand I was Minako to be saved from her horrible life. But, I also feel bad for Rei who will probably lose her love when the rescue finally comes. I am very interested to see what you will do with Rei and Jaedite's relationship as the end draws near.
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  • From VFSNAKE on June 14, 2011
    Nice!
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  • From Scorpinac on June 14, 2011
    At least you're still writing, that's the main thing. And as long as Zaherite gets a nice, painful death, I'll be happy! I am a little worried about Rei, though, considering what was just stated in this chapter. But hopefully she'll get over it after the other girls kill him. Oh, well. Until chapter 15, then. Laters.

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  • From ANON - Am on May 12, 2011
    I would love to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - Tom on December 16, 2010
    I was hoping for a break up of the Dark Kingdom. Ah well, though at the beginning you used Variscite's name rather than Jedite's
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  • From ANON - h on December 04, 2010
    This is good as far as it goes, but I hope you continue and make the other Senshi feel the joy of serving the Dark Kingdom.
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  • From ANON - Fostersb on December 01, 2010
    I am glad to see you continued with the story and that Jadeite finally succeeded in his plans. I am very curious to see how the other Inner Moons will fit into the next portion of the chapter and I would love to see more interaction between Mars and Jadeite like there was in the first part of the story. Update soon!
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  • From BakaMazoku on November 30, 2010
    Well... that's interesting. And silly Usagi has forgotten that the future can be changed. After all, wasn't that what the Black Moon Family had been trying to do? I, for one, am rooting for Jadeite to win. He deserves that win against the senshi after the work he's been doing.
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  • From VFSNAKE on November 30, 2010
    Yeah! Makes you wonder who the Chibi-Usa's REAL Father is knowing what's going to happen in the next chapter. We both know what will happn.
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  • From Scorpinac on November 30, 2010
    Wow, that sure changed things up. Not too sorry to see Adamite go, and Petzite and Selenite made their choices, better or worse. I almost pity Variscite, though, poor bastard. I pity Mina, more, though, now that she knows her powers were stripped and considering her current immediate future. Hopefully the rest of the girls are gonna come charging in before much longer and put a great big crimp on Jadeite's current plans. Well, until chapter 14, then. Laters.
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  • From ANON - mofaf1 on November 30, 2010
    I've been waiting so long for another chapter in this story. I think Jadeite is slowly falling for Mars without realizing it. I'm sure Mamoru will give him a fight as will the remaining scouts but I'm not sure which side will win. I'd honestly like to see what would happen if he discovered that regardless of all his precausions Mars still managed to get pregnant by him. Would impending fatherhood change his thoughts about how he wants things to end? If the scouts do manage to win I think that, Stockholm Syndrome or not, she has started to develop a few feelings for him too. If she finds she is expecting and he actually seems to care about her and the child, possibly to the point of risking his life, she may beg the other scouts to let him live. It would be nice to see the two of them end up together no matter which side wins. It would also be nice to see him show that given the right circumstances he does care about something other than himself. Venus, hmmm ... I think she might be a bit less promiscuous after all that has happend and possibly be a bit more cautious. Sailor Moon ... hello Chibi Usagi ... they never said she wasn't expecting when she got married to Mamoru, just that they got married.
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  • From ANON - Commissar on November 10, 2010
    I hope Variscite wins control of the Dark Kingdom, it would be an interesting rule with Venus finding ever craftier ways to resist her slavery without appearing to.
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  • From ANON - Fostersb on September 03, 2010
    I am so happy to see another chapter of this story. I really loved how you captured how torn Rei is about wanting to be rescued, but also wanting to be with Jadeite. I really hope that you update soon and I would love to read more about Jadeite's POV concerning Rei and whether some of is feelings have changed as well, since that was hinted at in other chapters.
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